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New Post 5/6/2008 1:56 AM
User is offline G-Mad{s}eline♥
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Modified By G-Mad{s}eline♥  on 6/24/2008 1:09:18 PM)

And here is chapter 7, like I promised ;)

<3 Madeline

Chapter 7
 
 
Kati sat a few sheets down on the bed and placed her hands on her thin hips and sighed.
            “You okay?” she asked softly as she made her way past me and over to the mini couch to pull it out. Her fluffy blonde hair flipped as she walked and my stomach dropped yet again when she spoke. I wish it would stop doing that.
Fixing my eyes on hers, I lost my train of thought and forgot to answer as I sat down on the bed again.
            “Nick?” I shook my head out of my trans to find Kati sitting on the bed next to me. My heart flipped as she placed her hand on my shoulder.
 
            You don’t like her, Nick. You can’t like her
 
            “Yeah, I’m good” I managed to say as she stared at me suspiciously.
            “Okay…” she said not too convinced as she ran her fingers through her hair and got up to continue pulling out the couch.
            “So, what are all these medals for?” I asked scanning the board of medals on the wall that I was looking at earlier.
            “Soccer, Baseball, swimming, random stuff like that,” Kati answered not moving her eyes off the sheets she was placing over the couch.
            “So you are quite the athlete,” I said surprised that I could get so many words out in less than two minutes around her.
            “Well, I was…”her voice seemed to drop with a disappointed tone
            “What happened?”
            “Well, I started acting, and that became my passion.” She flipped her head up to look at me as I felt my cheeks tingle from her gaze.
            “Really…I was an actor for a while, you know…I was on Broadway and everything,” I said noticing I was trying to impress her. I quickly shook that thought from my head.
            “I know” she replied quickly reminding me that I wasn’t the kid down the block anymore, everyone knew my name. The though of that made me miss New Jersey. I remembered that when you weren’t famous the beautiful girl next door didn’t know who you were, where you came from, or even your name. You would lie in bed at night thinking of ways to let her know you exist and how you would win her over with your hidden talents and charm. The thought of that made me think if Kati saw me as just another boy or a rockstar that wasn’t dateable, but I quickly shook my head slightly and moved on like none of it mattered. I couldn’t like her.  
            “So, do you want to go anywhere with acting,” I said standing up to help her put the last sheet on the bed. The corner of my eye caught her eyes light up and a smile creep onto her face which released more butterflies to engulf my body.
            “Yeah…yeah, I do” I smiled at her as she sat down on the couch next to me brushing her hair back with her finger tips. Noticing her blush when she caught my eyes on her, my lower jaw dropped slightly.
            “What?” She giggled pushing my arm slightly.
            “Oh…nothing” I winked as I turned my gaze back to the room.
            Did I just do that? Did I just wink at her? Oh no, I can’t fall for her…

This time, I ignored my thoughts and just stared at the white walls side smiling in silence. Maybe just maybe she liked me back…that is if I did like her. I stood up and turned around to face Kati. She smiled softly as I looked at her and reached my hand out to help her up from the couch. I shot of shivers wigged through my arm when she grasped my hand tightly and pulled herself up.

Yup, I definitely like her

           

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New Post 5/6/2008 2:39 AM
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Re: Operation: Name in Lights [ update: Chapter 5] :) :) :) :) <<<<  

those last two updates were quite the amazing updates.

i love this story and i totally can't wait to read more.

post more soon please.


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New Post 5/6/2008 3:12 AM
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Re: Operation: Name in Lights [ update: Chapter 5] :) :) :) :) <<<<  
all together now: AWWW!! *collective sigh*

I'm really really loving this!!! THANKYOU for updating THREE new chapters! So sorry it took me a while to actually read and comment...had sleep and uni :p

Nick is SO ADORKABLE!! I actually want to pinch his (pink) cheeks...and it'd actually be almost appropriate since I'm older and all...hahhaha.

I'm loving Faye/Kevin (they're really cute <3) and I'm absolutely going gaga (o.O) for Kati/Nick (his awkwardness around her is soooo CUTE!!)

Please post more soon!! :D You're spoiling us like crazy with all these new chapters!! :) Please don't stop or else I'll start having withdrawal symptoms! :p

xx



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New Post 5/6/2008 6:50 PM
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Re: Operation: Name in Lights [ update: Chapter 5] :) :) :) :) <<<<  

Haha, thanks guys for commenting and for all the complements. This morning at school I handed a copy of chapter 6 and 7 to my friend (who actually is Gabby in the story) and I was reading it over before I gave it to her and I was like..."Wow...this pretty much is the worst 2 chapters I have ever written in my entire life, everyone is so gonna ditch me"  So, I apologize for all of you who didn't enjoy it as much as the other chapters (I think the same thing...so its okay) I PROMISE the next will be better...once I think of whats going to happen. haha

I was happy when I came home to see that someone liked the chapters...thanks ;)

lots of luv! I'll hopefully post chapter 8 tomorrow or tonight...depends on how long I want to stay up, and this time, I'll make sure I drink some red bull or something so I am awake to actually write a good chapter ;)

Thanks so much for commenting!

<3 Madeline


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New Post 5/6/2008 7:16 PM
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madeline madeline madeline... what shall we do with you

those chappies were awesome... you are always your own worst critic... im saying that because i hate practically everything i write.... so i know

and those chappies were great/!!!! lol joe in hello kitty PJ's... SQUEEEGAHHH lol

love it

dont wear yourself too thin... but do posty more when u can

love this stilll


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New Post 5/6/2008 8:05 PM
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Re: Operation: Name in Lights [ update: Chapter 5] :) :) :) :) <<<<  

I agree with Marni, Madeline! Those were amazing! And Nat's right, Nick's awkwardness is soooooooooooooo cute! O! And I just noticed in Chapter 5 that you used the song from my siggy for Kevin's ringtone when I called! Yey! I can't believe you know that song! You're the coolest!

PMS!

~ Faye


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New Post 5/7/2008 12:10 AM
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Haha, thanks guys ;) I actually have some work to do tonight, so I am not going to post. I'm going to try to get some sleep as well as some homework done so I can write chapter 8 tomorrow & hopefully even chapter 9. Thanks so much for the encouragement and comments, u guys pretty much rock ;)

Faye- heck ya, I love that song! I couldn't pass up the opportunity to add that in there. I was seriously so excited because of that one little detail. I'm like "Tee-hee, I'm so smart" ahahahahahah. BTW so sorry you arn't in any of the chapters lately, things are going pretty slow like event wise in the chapter so I'll hopefully be sticking you in around chapter 9 if not late chapter 8. Thanks so much for being patient with me! 

Nat - okay, I'm still thinking of where I can get you in, but it is coming I PROMISE!!! 

Thanks so much for reading guys!!! Luvv yaa

<3 Madeline  


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New Post 5/7/2008 12:31 AM
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Re: Operation: Name in Lights [ update: Chapter 6 & 7!!!] <<<<  

 La Madeline <3 wrote

Haha, thanks guys ;) I actually have some work to do tonight, so I am not going to post. I'm going to try to get some sleep as well as some homework done so I can write chapter 8 tomorrow & hopefully even chapter 9. Thanks so much for the encouragement and comments, u guys pretty much rock ;)

Faye- heck ya, I love that song! I couldn't pass up the opportunity to add that in there. I was seriously so excited because of that one little detail. I'm like "Tee-hee, I'm so smart" ahahahahahah. BTW so sorry you arn't in any of the chapters lately, things are going pretty slow like event wise in the chapter so I'll hopefully be sticking you in around chapter 9 if not late chapter 8. Thanks so much for being patient with me! 

Nat - okay, I'm still thinking of where I can get you in, but it is coming I PROMISE!!! 

Thanks so much for reading guys!!! Luvv yaa

<3 Madeline  

Haha! You are smart, and a tremendous writer! Don't worry about fitting me in, I'm enjoying the story anyway (although I DO love the Kevin and me moments )! I can't wait for you to fit Nat in, that'll be amazing to see! You sleep, Madeline! We'll wait for the next couple of chapters!

~ Faye


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New Post 5/7/2008 12:37 AM
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hey madeline! gahh lee. im so behind. haha. but im all caught up now. gahh lee. this is soo awesome. you are totally blessed sweetie. haha. well please keep on with the posting!

ily! xoxo! peace!

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New Post 5/7/2008 1:47 AM
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Thankksss guys! I should have so more up by tomorrow night!

BTW: If you have a fanfiction that I do not know about, please tell me cause I want to read and comment on all your fanfictions cause u guys are so amazing at commenting on mine. I know a few of your fanfictions like Subway Adventures that Marni had written and Toys R Us by Kaybuggie but I haven't read them yet. I will soon read lots more of them soon once the weekend comes around. Right now I'm stuck on Lights and Sirens (by Erin) [ I'm a bit behind - but it is AMAZING] and Can You Feel It In The Way I Look at You ( by heather - its the sequal to my favorite fanfiction - Just Like a Tatoo...) and I think Baby You Make The Temperature Hotter, and that is it right now. As I try to get caught up with these I will try to read all of you guy's fanfics as much as I can! So, if you have one that you wrote or like and want me to read, just tell me and I will so read it cause you guys rock my stiped polkadoted lime green knee high socks!

Luv ya

<3 Madeline


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