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Summer Fling or The Real Deal?  
Modified By Ana.   on 5/8/2008 5:12:53 PM)

Okay so this is my first FanFic. I will Continue if you guys like it. If you don't I won't.

Prologue.

Surfing? My sport. Has always been the one thing I'm the best at. Well at least let me believe that I'm the best. I guess I'm okay. I surf when ever i get a chance. My parents own a beach house. It's right infron of the beach. Beautiful view. The first thing i see when i get up. The last thing i see when i fall asleep. There are only 3 house to the left of my house and 2 to the right. No body is ever there. The one to my left is for sale. The one to my right, old people live there. They are pretty nice. Their love story is beyond anything that you can imagine. Then the other 2 house the people who live there never go out. They pretty much just stay inside. I'm pretty much the only person who ever goes out on the beach. We have about 7 different surfboards. 3 ATV's, 5 skate boards, a small trapoline (only 2 people can be on it at the same time), and alot of different sport equitment. I guess you can say, I'm pretty active. This summer, i only have one goal, That is to teach at least someone the wonderful sport of surfing.

 

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Re: Summer Fling or The Real Deal? [[New FanFic]]  

So here is Chapter one. Please comment if you like.

 

Chapter [[one]].

My name is Aubrey Hennings. I have long blonde wavy hair. Blue eyes, that change color when i'm in the sun, they are green. It's weird, but cool at the same time. So they took down the sign of the house next door. It's no longer on sale. I'm guessing the sold it. Can't wait to meet my neighboors. Maybe there, i will find the person i plan on teaching this wonderful thing called surfing.

I was riding my bike to the store 5 blocks away, when i see an Escalde. I turned my bike around hoping that they were the new neighboors. When i got back to my house, I see the Escalde park next to my house, whick means my new neighboors had moved in! 

 

i know it's a short chapter, but i'm not so sure if i should continue to write this story. If you want me to continue, let me know and i will. well bye bye

xoxo,

Ana.


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New Post 5/7/2008 6:48 PM
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Re: Summer Fling or The Real Deal? [[New FanFic]]  

well here is the next chapter. I guess i dont have any readers since I'm not getting any comments. well if anyone is reading please comment. tell me you thoughts. I woeuld love to hear from my readres if i have any?

 

Chapter [[two]]

I walked to the my front door when i see a boy with curly hair walk out, with his head down. I then see his face. I couldn't belive my eyes. There he was, Nick Jonas. Let me just tell you, much cutter in person. I was, i guess you can say star struck. I was the biggest fan. I didn't have 'OJD', but i did like their music and i like what they stood for.

"heyy" i heard Nick yell. I looked around, making sure he wasn't talking to anyone else. Then i poined my index finger to me. and yelled "me?". I was so nervous i could feel my heart drop. His beautiful eyes were looking straight at me. "yes you." he said walking towards me. " yeah? " i ask walking slowly towards him. "I'm new here and my brothers ditched me like 3 minutes ago..." he said as i interuped him "oh. sucks for you." I said pushing strands of my hair behind my ear. "yeah so I'm bored and you seem like a fun person...." My god did NICK JONAS just call me fun. He doesn't even know me? or does he? maybe we are long lost friends. Maybe i met him before he became famous. What if he can hear what I'm thinking. "are you still listenng?" Nick said waving his hand infront of my face. " yeah sorry got lost in a train of thought." I said. "oh it's okay, that happens to me alot." he said putting one of his hands in his pocket. " well if you want to we could go inside and see what we can do?" I asked hoping he wouls say yes. "of course." We walked in. did the small talk telling each other about each otehr. Not once did his band or his brothers came up. I didn't want to mention it. I relized that he is jsut a regular teenage boy.

"hey what sports do you play?" He asked me looking at my laptop sitting on the bed. " uhh well i consider it a sport. surfing." i said sitting on the bed. "Oh cool. I always wanted to learn. maybe you could teach me this summer." he said opening my laptop."Sure, hey don't touch that." I said getting closer to him to see what he was going to do with my laptop. "chill, I'm only going to look at your itunes music." He said opening the itunes program."okay?" i said not sure hwy he wanted to look at it. "i think you can learn alot about a person just by looking/listening to the music they like." He said typing something on the search box. "alright, but don't judge me just on that." i said getting closer to see what he was search. I then noticed he had search 'Jonas'. he looked at me with a confussed look on his face, when he saw i had all of their music videos, and all of their songs. "guessing you are a fan of my music." he said putting my laptop on the bed again. " yeah i guess you can said that, but i'm not obessed." i said getting up, when i noticed how close i was to nick. "Well that's good, this summer i want to get away from the whole hollywood life style and the whole being famous thing." he said as he walked to the doors that led onto the balcony. "Are you here for only the summer?" I asked afraid of what the answer might be.

 

That's where I'm going to cut it off. If you want more comment. and i'll write more.

 

 

 


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New Post 5/8/2008 4:50 PM
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Re: Summer Fling or The Real Deal? [[New FanFic]]  

Well I'm eding this fanfic. No readres. so i guess it's not good. If you liked it IM me at xoanaxbananaxo and tell me and i'll continue but right now i have no readers who i know of. so this is the ned. bye bye


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New Post 5/8/2008 4:58 PM
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Re: Summer Fling or The Real Deal? [[New FanFic]]  

awww i liked it!!!!!!!!!! I just never commented...but i will!!! seeing as no one else is...meanie heads!

 

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New Post 5/8/2008 5:21 PM
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Re: Summer Fling or The Real Deal? [[New FanFic]]  

awesome! i have a reader! This made my day. lol didn't have the best day. Thanks. I'll contiue now. For you. lol

 

Chapter [[3]]

 

"well we got the house. But we re jsut plnning on comming here on vaction. but I will be here for the whole summe." Nick said opening the doors that led onto the balcony.

"Cool. Then i guess we can hang out the whole summer." I said, I was so happy that finally a cute sweet guy was in my life.

"yeah sounds like fun." He said looking below my balcony.

"Yeah, so what you want to do now?" I asked hoping i would find out about what he likes to do. I never really bought those Magazines that they were on. They looked cool but never bought one. So i had no clue about what he liked, or naything.

"Umm i see you have lots of surfboards down there, you can watch me fall or you can try to teach me. which ever you choose." He said turning around with a grin on his face. His smile made my heart drop.

"Umm well i think watching you fall would be much funner, but i don't want to be the girl who lost Nick Jonas in the sea. So I guess i'll teach you." I said trying not to laugh. He started to laugh as he went down the stairs from my balcony to the sand below.

"Sounds good. Oh and just to let you know if you lost me, i think billiosn of girls would come and haunt you down and eventually kill you." He said. I followed him. His curls bounced up and down. The way his arms hung down and....wait could i be falling for a superstar? no, i could. I wouldn't. I can't. I then snaped back in to reality when i heard boards fall.

"My bad. I tired to grab the blue on that says 'Abrey' And yeah they came down." He said with a sorry look on his face. 

"That would be my board. But if you want one with your name on it. choose one then we can put the stickers then voila your name. they come off when you peel them off so yeah." I said helping him pick up the surfboards that fell.

"cool, I want to darkblue one." He said pointing to the one on the top.

The rest of the day we spent on the sand, you can't really just expect to get on the water. I think that is what he was expecting to get on the water and do cool flips. But suprise, he had to learn on the sand. 

"Abrey, it's 6:20. We are going to have dinner in 10 minutes!" My mom screamed from the deck. 

"okay mom.'' I said getting up and shaking the snad of my butt.

"hey tomorrow? surfing lessons." he said as he got up.

"Sure wake up at 4 am. I want to show you something." I said picking up my surfboard and starting to walk back to my house.

"Wow way to early but for you i'll do it." he said following me with the surfboard.

"Thanks. Tell your brothers I say hi. I saw them staring from the window a few times." I said.

"okay cool. I will. " he said opening his arms for a hug.

His hugs felt so right. I felt safe protected. Like nothing could go wrong.

The rest of the day i spent in my room just listening to music and thinking about everythign that had happend today. Let me just tell you this day had gone so perfect.

Okay here you go. The next chapter will be form Nicks POV. Should be fun to write from a guys POV.  well bye bye

Thanks for reading. Tell me what you think. bye bye

xoxo

Ana S.


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New Post 5/8/2008 5:29 PM
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Re: Summer Fling or The Real Deal? [[New FanFic]]  

awwww I'm sorry that you had a bad day, that happens to me all the time....my day was boring though..so.. anyways YAY! i feel special! i made someones day! and also made someone continue their story! woohoo!!! haha PMS!

 

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Re: Summer Fling or The Real Deal? [[Chapter 4]] 

anytime. I'm pretty much online 24/7 so I'll post on a daily basis unless i have writters block. which only happens to me when I start the story. but i'm passed that so here is chapter 4. I'm writting it right now.

Chapter [[four]]

The next day i woke up at 3:50. I got changed, i decided on a pair of white shorts with a Lightblue cami over a dark blue cami. and a pair of white flip-flops. I went downstairs, got a redbull and went outside. I saw nick walking down down his balcony. His room is my room in my house. (AN : not sure if that makes sense) I sat down on the sand. He sat down next to me. We both looked pretty tired.

"So why did i have to wake up this early?" He asked taking my redbull form my hand.

"Well you'll find out soon enough, and wow you really can't stay away form redbulls can you?" I said as i watch him take sip of my drink.

"It's my addiction, and i kind of need enrgy. this girl named Abrey made me get up at 4 in the morning." He said in a sarcastic tone.

"Hey you are going to like this. I promise." I said, giving him a small push.

"Alright, Whatever you say." He said pushing me sofly.

"yeah." I said just staring into the water infront of us.

"so when is this 'suprise' going to happen?"He asked giving me the empty can.

"Right now, look infront of you." I said pointing to the sun rising behind the water. This was the best view you could ever get of the sun rising.

"It's beautifull." he said once the sun had rose." (AN: not sure if 'rose' is the right word but what ever you know what i mean) he said, looking at me. His eyes were amazing. his curls covering parts of his forehead.

"Yeah it is." I said closing my eyes and laying down on the sand.

"You know your eyes change color. A few minutes ago they were blue and now they are green." He said putting his arms behind him and resting on them.

"yeah not alot of people noticed that but i have." I said.

"Its cool" he said letting out a small laugh.

"So did you liek the sun rise?" 

"Yeah so worth getting up in the morning for it." He said.

"Yeah, I'm hungry." I said rubbing my stomach.

"You can come over and we can eat something." He said.

"Umm maybe later, I dont want to wake up your parents or your brothers. " I said.

"It's fine. Mom is awake already. She is used to waking up in the morning."

"It's only 4:34. how about we wait 30 more minutes.?" I suggested.

"Alright." He said.

"okay. Want to play truth truth?"

"truth truth?" He said in a confused tone.

"Well it's like truth or dare but since it's only the 2 of us, it would be kind of boring truth and dare. So truth truth is funner." I said. sitting up.

"Ooh okay i get it."

"okay."

 "you first. Ladys first"

"Fine. umm lets see...Where was your first kiss? and how old were you?" I asked.

"I think i was 11 or 12. And it was me and my firend Taylor. We were walking home fomr school when i fell. I know smart me. She got down to make sure i was okay and then when i looked up and saw how pretty she looked i kissed her." He said, playing with the sand.

"Aww how cute."

We continued to play truth truth, When i noticed it was 7:10. The time just got away from us. It was so cool to ust open up to someone. He openend up to me.

"Wow it's 7:11" I said putting my cell phone back on the sand.

"Woah the time flew by."

"yeah it did. now I'm really hungry."

"lets go inside and eat something." He said getting up and helping me up.

"ok. cool." I said grabbing my cell. 

 

Well I'm cutting it off here. I'll post more soon. I totally forgot i was going to write this chapter from Nicks POV. I noticed half way. So the next one for sure will be from Nicks POV. Kevin, Frankie, and Joe and the whole family will be in the next chapter. Or atleas I'll try to put them in.

 

xoxo, Ana


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hahah!! smooothhhhh !!!! anywayssss loveee ittttttt!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait till the next chappttterrrr!!! hehe

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Re: Summer Fling or The Real Deal? [[Chapter 4]] 

omg! i just saw ur siggie! ur going to the Concert on aug. 18th in DC?!?!?!?!

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