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New Post 5/7/2008 10:30 PM
User is offline RedStrawberry
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Hotel California*finished* 
Modified By RedStrawberry  on 5/10/2008 1:59:08 PM)

"We are never, i repeat never getting there Paul!" I whined to my older brother.

My younger brother Nick kept flipping a map around hoping he would understand it better from another angle.

Sweat glissined on my forehead even though the hot wind swept my face. "Kevin!"

"Shut up Joseph! We'll get there!" Kevin yelled at me looking at me through the car mirror

The map shook as the wind pushed it in different directions "Its getting dark kev..." Nick complained

"Theres no where to stop."

I looked out in the wide open desert space.It was a shimmering light. There was an old looking mission by itself.

"Yes there is" I pointed to it.

Kevin stopped the car and steped out in the middle of the empty road "It looks kinda creepy dont you think?"

"I think we should go..." Nick grunted getting out of the car

I steeped out as well and pulled off my black shirt staying in a white undershirt "we should go..."

"I'll call mom." Kevin whipped out his phone

He got a confused look on his face and swayed the phone in the air "hmm, thats weird , no service."

Nick and I check our phones but it was the same thing...no service.


 
New Post 5/7/2008 11:24 PM
User is offline luckieCrystal323 [♥]
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Re: Hotel California 

ohh creepy place in the middle of nowhere. i think i might smell trouble.

i really love this so far though. and i can't wait to read more.

post more soon please.


My Stories and Joint Stories
Who's The Dog?
Childhood Memories Turn To Teenage Woes (CSKS Joint)
Something in the Music (joint with Ashley and Corinne)
Captured In The Moment {Kevin ff}
My Oneshots
 
New Post 5/8/2008 1:10 AM
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Re: Hotel California 

hey just wondering, is this a song fic?  =)


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New Post 5/8/2008 1:54 AM
User is offline RedStrawberry
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Re: Hotel California 

lol yes it is.. i was listening to Hotel California by the eagles

i'll write more soon


 
New Post 5/8/2008 2:07 AM
User is offline RedStrawberry
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Re: Hotel California 

The three of us walked towards the mission leaving our red convertible car locked behind us.

The sand rose up with every step we took. The California I knew had major cities and crazy good wheather. Santa Monica and Hollywood were my favorite. This desert was just too weird for me. It reminded me of some wild wild west cowboy movie.

"Its so hot." Nick whiped his forehead "I feel weird."

"Did you check your sugar?" Kevin put his had on nicks shoulder

"Don't need to i have this thing that does it for me..." Nick sounded completely drained from his voice. It was dried out by the sand.

"tell us if you feel bad." Kevin gulped the last of his calmness.

I looked ahead to the mission. I saw a figure with a long sleeved dark dress. She was holding a single candel. Waiting. Almost like if she was waiting for...us

"Hey do you guys see that?" I whispered

"the lady?" Kevin asked

"yeah I do." nick grunted

"good. I thought I was going crazy."


 
New Post 5/8/2008 2:15 AM
User is offline luckieCrystal323 [♥]
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Re: Hotel California 

okay i'm wondering if they're all going crazy now. i don't know i'm sleepy since i only got like 3 1/2 to 4 hours of sleep last night for some reason.

but i love the story. and i can't wait to read more.

post more soon girly please.


My Stories and Joint Stories
Who's The Dog?
Childhood Memories Turn To Teenage Woes (CSKS Joint)
Something in the Music (joint with Ashley and Corinne)
Captured In The Moment {Kevin ff}
My Oneshots
 
New Post 5/8/2008 2:39 AM
User is offline ♫♪Spence♪♫ {♥♫has a broken heart♫♥}
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Re: Hotel California 

oh snap thats creepy!!!

i really like this it's REALLY good!!!

i hope that you pms!


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New Post 5/8/2008 9:26 PM
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The mission bells starting chimming as we walked towards it.

I studided the girl in the darkness, her features were really significant, almost pointy.

Her mouth was curved in to a wicked smile that fooled me and drew me closer to her.

"well, this could be heaven or this could be hell..." I whispered towards Kevin

"Im sure their nice people Joe. And Nick is looking too tired looking we have to stop here." Kevin grabbed Nicks shoulder keeping him straight.

We came infront of her, now she was in complete view.

She was fair skinned with coal black eyes and ash brown hair "Hello there." she snikkered

"Hi, Im Kevin, and these are my brothers Joe and Nick." Kevin pointed to each of us.

"Esmeralda." She streched out her thin white arm "Would you like to stay here?"

 


 
New Post 5/8/2008 9:26 PM
User is offline RedStrawberry
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Re: Hotel California 

The mission bells starting chimming as we walked towards it.

I studided the girl in the darkness, her features were really significant, almost pointy.

Her mouth was curved in to a wicked smile that fooled me and drew me closer to her.

"well, this could be heaven or this could be hell..." I whispered towards Kevin

"Im sure their nice people Joe. And Nick is looking too tired looking we have to stop here." Kevin grabbed Nicks shoulder keeping him straight.

We came infront of her, now she was in complete view.

She was fair skinned with coal black eyes and ash brown hair "Hello there." she snikkered

"Hi, Im Kevin, and these are my brothers Joe and Nick." Kevin pointed to each of us.

"Esmeralda." She streched out her thin white arm "Would you like to stay here?"

 


 
New Post 5/8/2008 9:34 PM
User is offline Kevin Jonas is sweet90
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Re: Hotel California 

Post more soon please!!!


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New Post 5/8/2008 10:06 PM
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Re: Hotel California 

Woah! This is amazing!

Post more ASAP!


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