Please Read...  
 Forum  
 
  Forum  Jonas Brothers  Fan Fiction  ~*THE SEEN AND UNSEEN*~ A ghost story [J.O.N.A.S style)
Previous Previous
 
Next Next
New Post 5/10/2008 12:20 PM
User is offline Ashley (is back)
4120 posts
www.ashelectric.livejournal.com
6th Level Poster




Re: ~*THE SEEN AND UNSEEN*~ A ghost story [J.O.N.A.S style) 3rd CHAPPY UP! 

you're amazing.

this is absolute brilliance - plain and simple.

guhh.

i have no words for this. none.


Photobucket
Mah Girlies <3
Mellers, Renneh, Stephers, Crysters, Breezy, Corinnee, Meggers, Brittanyy
 
New Post 5/10/2008 12:38 PM
User is offline brittany
241 posts
No Ranking




Re: ~*THE SEEN AND UNSEEN*~ A ghost story [J.O.N.A.S style) 3rd CHAPPY UP! 

Ok, I have already read this, but I loved it so much that I think I am going to just read it again. That's how good you are! Oh, and do I get a prize if I guess what happens?...hehe jk But seriously, how are you so good?


 
New Post 5/10/2008 5:25 PM
User is offline chandler
316 posts
No Ranking


Re: ~*THE SEEN AND UNSEEN*~ A ghost story [J.O.N.A.S style) 3rd CHAPPY UP! 

oh my gosh.. PLEASE post the next chapter! i really wanna find out whats going on.. why is he the only one who hears the music?




Click each title to read!!

I might change, but my promises aren't broken (one shot)
All it took (one shot)
 
New Post 5/10/2008 6:21 PM
User is offline Jazz [On hiatus]
784 posts
10th Level Poster




Re: ~*THE SEEN AND UNSEEN*~ A ghost story [J.O.N.A.S style) 3rd CHAPPY UP! 

HAAYYY. you never told me you started this up again. ):

aw man, i would've commented like a mad man.

i think i'll tell you AGAIN HOW AMAZING THIS IS.

Joe can only hear the music. And that little preview you gave us... Gah, if that man even touches Joe with that knife.

UGHHHH I LOVE THIS FICTION. D: SERIOUSLY.

AND I LOVE YOU MARRY ME PLEASE? -explodes-


Thank you me_loves_dj_danger for the siggy!!! :D

Goodbye Ashlynn Photobucket
 
New Post 5/10/2008 10:24 PM
User is offline Megan
315 posts
No Ranking




Re: ~*THE SEEN AND UNSEEN*~ A ghost story [J.O.N.A.S style) 3rd CHAPPY UP! 

 Jazz [DANGER GIRL TILL DEATH] wrote

HAAYYY. you never told me you started this up again. ):

aw man, i would've commented like a mad man.

i think i'll tell you AGAIN HOW AMAZING THIS IS.

Joe can only hear the music. And that little preview you gave us... Gah, if that man even touches Joe with that knife.

UGHHHH I LOVE THIS FICTION. D: SERIOUSLY.

AND I LOVE YOU MARRY ME PLEASE? -explodes-

Haha! I'll only marry you if you were a guy. And anyways I've got plenty of guys already in line first (including one named Joe--funny huh? And he's just like Joe Jonas too--he even kinda LOOKs like him).

Are you the one from the first time I posted this thing?! 'Cause if you are SWEET! Nice to see ya again! I was wondering if you'd show up!

MiniMe


The Seen And Unseen And click on my siggys to go to my stories!
 
New Post 5/11/2008 2:12 PM
User is offline Megan
315 posts
No Ranking




Re: ~*THE SEEN AND UNSEEN*~ A ghost story [J.O.N.A.S style) 4th CHAPTER~The Promise~! 

 

Hey everyone! I'm getting excited 'cause this is starting to get more interesting! YEY! Tell me what you think! Keep me posting!

 

The Promise

~*~

 

Ms. Johnson stared at them as the candlelight revealed their faces. There was no doubt—she didn’t look happy… at all.

“I should’ve known…” She grumbled, eyeing them.

Kevin stepped forward in front of his younger brothers.

“We’re so, so sorry Ms. Johnson,” he tried to apologize. “We just wanted to know…”

Ms. Johnson held up a hand to silence him. She nodded her head towards the foyer.

“Downstairs, to the library, all of you,” she ordered.

Joe looked at his older brother before moving. He wasn’t too sure that was a good idea, but Kevin pushed him ahead.

“We asked for it, Joe,” Kevin whispered to him as they slowly made their way down the stairs. “We have to do what she says.” Kevin deep down wasn’t too sure about the whole thing either, but they were in Ms. Johnson’s house, and under her rules, so they had no choice but to obey her.

The storm had ended, and the ghost of Mrs. Scarlett was gone. Joe tried running it over and over in his head why he could hear her—and she could see him—but nobody else could for some reason. Maybe this house made people go crazy. Maybe he didn’t hear or see anything at all, it was just his imagination. But that still just didn’t seem right.

“Kevin…” Joe whispered to his brother, the darkness of uncertainty written on his face. “What’s going on here?”

Kevin looked over at Joe and saw the somewhat frightened light in his eyes. He quickly put an arm around his brother.

“I honestly don’t know little bro,” Kevin admitted. “But hang in there.”

When they finally arrived at the library they all walked in. Ms. Johnson switched the light on dim—the power was apparently back. She motioned them to the couch and chairs.

“Sit down,” she ordered. By her tone, the boys knew they were safer to obey. They all sat. Joe took a seat next to Nick, and looked over to see his younger brother paler than he’d ever seen him. He didn’t look well.

“Alright,” Ms. Johnson said, standing over them. “Start explaining.”

“Maybe we should be asking you the same question,” Joe growled, upset with how she was handling things. “Why were you down in the foyer watching Mrs. Scarlett? Hmm? And why are the lightning storms making her appear? Why not tell us that?”

Nick put a shaky hand on his brother’s shoulder.

“Joe… stop.”

Ms. Johnson’s face began to turn a slight shade of red.

“This is my hotel, and you have disobeyed my rules. So I think it’s rather you, Joe Jonas—and your brothers here, who should be explaining things.”

“But if you don’t start explaining what’s going on,” Joe fumed, “We might assume you’re up to something you shouldn’t be. We’re Redmond Jonas’s sons. We don’t settle on anything till we know the truth.”

Ms. Johnson eyed him for a moment.

“You may think I know everything that’s going on, boy, but I don’t,” she said. “I don’t know why the lightning storms make her appear—or why we have these storms so often. It happens—that’s all I care about. I watch Mrs. Scarlett because… she’s my relative—who wouldn’t want to see what she’s up to?”

“Well… why are you so upset we saw her then?” Nick asked.

“That’s the whole reason I brought you in here,” she said, her voice calming. “Since this is my hotel I ask you to please not tell anyone of this. If they find out…” she paused a moment.

“If they find out?” Joe pressed.

“I could loose my customers. Nobody’ll want to come if they know there’s a real ghost walking around. Don’t you see? I’ll loose everything I’ve worked for.” Her anger slowly faded into an expression of fear. The boys realized she was right. They were dumb to think she was doing something wrong.

“We’re sorry, Ms. Johnson,” Kevin said. “If there’s anyway we can repay you for what we’ve done, tell us.” He sighed and looked at his brothers. “It was wrong of us to snoop around your hotel, and we’re very sorry. We promise we won’t do it again… and we won’t tell anyone about it either. You have our word.”

She finally sighed with relief and smiled.

“Thank you,” she said. “I’m sorry to keep you here, but I had to explain this to you. I hope I can count on you boys to keep your promise.”

The boys nodded.

“You’re free to go back to your rooms then,” she said, opening the library door.

“Goodnight, Ms. Johnson,” Kevin said walking out. Nick followed him. Last came Joe. He glared at her but said nothing… and she watched him closely as he walked away. Better watch that one, she thought to herself.

_______________________________________________

Next morning was bright and clear—as always. But the boys didn’t wake till lunchtime. They were exhausted from the night’s events. Nick was the first to wake—then Kevin got up. Joe finally awoke, but he was groggy and did nothing but stare at the wall for half an hour.

Kevin finally went over to him and put a hand on his shoulder.

“You okay, bro?” he asked, worried about his brothers odd behavior.

Joe blinked a moment as if he’d just come out of a trance. He nodded in reply.

“Well… you look a little rough, so I thought I’d just ask. And… I heard you last night. You sounded like you were having a nightmare.”

Joe nodded and looked down at his feet.

“I hope it’s not bothering you. You know dreams aren’t real. But… I’m surprised I didn’t have a nightmare about the ghost last night too…”

Joe looked at him.

“Ghost?” he asked. “Kevin… I had a nightmare about a giant bullfrog chasing me…”

Kevin blinked for a moment.

“How…” he stammered. “You had a dream about a frog?”

“Yep,” Joe said getting off the bed, very serious. “It’s been a bad dream of mine for years. That frog creeps the living daylights out of me.”

Kevin had to laugh.

“After what happened last night—you dream about a bullfrog. Joseph… sometimes you amaze me.”

Joe rolled his eyes and nodded. That’s always how it was.

They all slowly got ready for the day. It seemed to take for hours just to get their teeth brushed. As they finally got the last thing on their list done—there came a knock to their door. Joe got it… and was surprised to find a young girl standing there with a cleaning cart. She was a cleaning maid. She looked up at him, her eyes ice blue. Suddenly he was wide-awake.

“I’m here to clean…” she said, a look of exhaustion written on her face. She looked as though she’d been doing this all morning. Well, Joe thought, I guess if I had that job, I’d think it sucked too. He grinned at her, but she didn’t grin back. She rolled her eyes. “Can I please come in?” she asked frustrated. She wasn’t in the mood to socialize obviously.

“Sure…” Joe said, feeling stupid. He moved to the side to let her through. Then he ran into the bathroom where his brothers were fixing their hair. “Hey,” he said to them. “The cleaning girl’s here, so we should probably scat.”

“Is she cute?” Nick asked him with a smile.

Joe slumped against the wall and sighed.

“Man… you have no idea,” he said.

The boys exited the bathroom and walked to their door to leave.

“We’re gonna go so you can clean in here,” Kevin said to the girl.

She gave a weak grin and nodded, then got back to her work.

But before the boys could leave, Joe stopped them.

“How long have you worked here?” he asked the girl suddenly.

She looked up at him, surprised.

“A year,” she answered bluntly. Joe could tell she was trying to avoid them for some reason.

“So you know Ms. Johnson fairly well then?” he added.

“Maybe.”

Joe sighed. Couldn’t she elaborate just a little more?

“Well, then I wonder if you could answer a question for us that we’re kinda confused by,” Joe said. Kevin suddenly grabbed him by the shoulder.

“Joe stop,” he said. “I know where you’re going with this, but we promised Ms. Johnson…”

Joe ignored him.

“We were wondering,” he went on, “if you knew why Ms. Johnson is so interested in Mrs. Scarlett Glen?”

The girl’s eyes suddenly widened with a look of horror, and she rushed away from them and began to make one of the beds.

“Hey! What’s the matter?” Joe cried, confused. “What’s so hard about my question?”

She suddenly turned to them, her eyes beginning to tear up.

“Just stop, OK!” she cried. “You don’t know what you’re getting into! Quit trying to investigate this, alright? If Ms. Johnson finds out you’re doing this, she’ll…” she suddenly stopped. She turned away from them and began making the bed again. “Just go,” she said in a broken voice.

Joe was shocked by her sudden behavior, and it took his brothers to drag him out of the room. The walked down the hall in silence, but when they reached the stairs Joe looked at Kevin.

“What did she mean by that, Kevin?” he asked. “I don’t get what’s going on. It’s beginning to scare me. I wish we could at least tell dad or something…”

“We’ll only tell him if something really bad happens,” Kevin said. “We’ve got to try keeping to our promise, Joseph.”

“But… I don’t know,” Joe said. “I just have this odd feeling there’s more Ms. Johnson’s not telling us…”

_______________________________________________

Meanwhile, Ms. Johnson watched and listened to them on a hidden camera as they entered the foyer. She wasn’t happy.

“That kid’s getting in too much,” a rough man’s voice said behind her.

“And that’s exactly why we have to do something about that boy, Hedgeman,” Ms. Johnson said, swiveling around in her chair. “We need to distract him. If that doesn’t work then… you know.” She sighed and looked back at the screen of the TV. She studied the boys for a moment. “There’s also something else about him…” she said watching Joe. “He has some connection with Scarlett. If she can see him, I wonder if he can hear her…”

 


So yeah... leave me a REVIEW PLEASE!


The Seen And Unseen And click on my siggys to go to my stories!
 
New Post 5/11/2008 8:36 PM
User is offline Megan
315 posts
No Ranking




Re: ~*THE SEEN AND UNSEEN*~ A ghost story [J.O.N.A.S style) 4th CHAPTER~The Promise~! 

Hey everyone! I'm posting tomorrow at 3:30 pm. RIGHT ME SOME REVIEWS PLEASE! HAVEN'T GOT ANY YET!


The Seen And Unseen And click on my siggys to go to my stories!
 
New Post 5/11/2008 9:19 PM
User is offline brittany
241 posts
No Ranking




Re: ~*THE SEEN AND UNSEEN*~ A ghost story [J.O.N.A.S style) 3rd CHAPPY UP! 

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I seriously love this fic! hehe...i'm a little obsessed over your writing. Its really funny cuz I am the only one (except you) that has already read this, so I know what happens, but I wish I could forget so that I could feel the same excitement and suspense from the first time...lol. Oh well.


 
New Post 5/11/2008 10:05 PM
User is offline Julia Rose *Yo it's Tinkerbell*
2043 posts
8th Level Poster




Re: ~*THE SEEN AND UNSEEN*~ A ghost story [J.O.N.A.S style) 3rd CHAPPY UP! 

wow, this is really good!! like ah-mazing and very suspenseful!!!! Post more sooon!!! pleasee!! i wanna know what happens! oh, im a new reader by the way!!

Julia Rose


Photobucket Click CLICK ^^Click for FF^^
 
New Post 5/12/2008 3:08 AM
User is offline ~Sneaky Ninja~
1614 posts
9th Level Poster




Re: ~*THE SEEN AND UNSEEN*~ A ghost story [J.O.N.A.S style) 4th CHAPTER~The Promise~! 

WHOO awesome! PMS! can't wait to read more xD




MY FANFICS:
All I Can See Is You - A Joe FF
Falling For You: - My Newest Fic
 
Previous Previous
 
Next Next
  Forum  Jonas Brothers  Fan Fiction  ~*THE SEEN AND UNSEEN*~ A ghost story [J.O.N.A.S style)
 Top Users Last 30 Days  

Copyright 2007 - 2008 by JonasBrothersFan.com - Privacy Statement - Terms Of Use 
Another Fansite Hosted by Fangap.com
 
Register | Login
 Become a Member »  

REGISTER - IT'S FREE!
Participate in our community, all you have to do is register for free membership to JonasBrothersFan.com.

Registration enables you to participate in our chats, forum, and unmoderated comments on our blog. You'll also receive the latest content.

Change for the Children Foundation

 Your Messages...  
You must be logged in to use this module.
 UsersOnline  
Membership Membership:
Latest New User Latest: missnovember
New Today New Today: 487
New Yesterday New Yesterday: 502
User Count Overall: 113734

People Online People Online:
Visitors Visitors: 1823
Members Members: 80
Total Total: 1903

Online Now Online Now:
01: disneylover12
02: applejacs
03: TluvsNickJonas
04: joelover1101
05: johnjerone07
06: tevee
07: xoMo_JB_lOvExo
08: omnan
09: Girl power
10: stephhhhh
11: julikate14
12: hahaxmelissajonas
13: JBrocksmySOCKS89
14: bigjonasfan
15: mollylovesjonasforever
16: Danger_Girl<3
17: LauraLouise_Xx
18: YEAHJONASx
19: katie_
20: PeaceLoveJONAS1
21: PeaceLoveJonasxx
22: guitarfreakpkj
23: pinkieeChix
24: Jonasluver_3
25: ojdgrl
26: tktink
27: Withluv
28: juliebug012
29: marylovesacting
30: jonasfanhere
31: novaeh#1
32: mrsskywalkerfan
33: ciera123
34: crazy kinda crush on you
35: *Punk Cuttie*
36: mogujoy
37: nate gray
38: Bball-Chika!
39: nancydrewgurl101
40: Allitude08
41: jbfavefanever
42: collin
43: joyceberryyx
44: Brooke12321
45: elliewalker93
46: sw11
47: Alyson11
48: polkadots313
49: JBF 96
50: curlyheadedkid
51: swooshxo14
52: LuvAndrew4eva
53: sluvsjb
54: hershey_13
55: ALittleBitLongerx72508
56: KEVINJONASFANATIC
57: me23
58: jonasbrotherssister15
59: KDFj-o-n-a-s
60: LauraJonas♥
61: SmilingSunshine
62: dinkyfu
63: N-BOY12197
64: JoeJrox06
65: jbroxmysox57
66: Nicks wife 626
67: Meya17
68: BkaVybesZz
69: Aelix123
70: lalala_fan1
71: namqueen
72: mkjbfans
73: CutiipoxJB
74: eyvette08
75: AngelBoo
76: JB#1Fann
77: JellyBeanBaby
78: xotaylorkendall
79: l0vejoebrosx30
80: luvs nick jonas