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New Post 5/11/2008 11:04 AM
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's finally letting me comment! Apparently, your thread thinks I'm a ho, too because it wouldn't let me post. Just this thread! But you know I love it. You know it's AMAZING. You know that you're one of the most creative people around here. Everytime I find an update from you, whether it's fluffy or dramatic, I'm always on the edge of my seat, waiting for more. I love the concept. I really do. To a lesser extent, I think everyone has that urge to be someone different. You describe it perfectly! And awww, I'm the cute, innocent one! (Hmmmm....that fits. :P Not really.) But seriously. Just, I love it. I don't really know what else to say. Except I need more. I couldn't be happier that the inspiration for this is flowing! Honestly, none of us are complaining! You rock *hardcore*, Ashley.

<3 Ren <3


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New Post 5/11/2008 11:20 AM
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 perfervid_heart wrote

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's finally letting me comment! Apparently, your thread thinks I'm a ho, too because it wouldn't let me post. Just this thread! But you know I love it. You know it's AMAZING. You know that you're one of the most creative people around here. Everytime I find an update from you, whether it's fluffy or dramatic, I'm always on the edge of my seat, waiting for more. I love the concept. I really do. To a lesser extent, I think everyone has that urge to be someone different. You describe it perfectly! And awww, I'm the cute, innocent one! (Hmmmm....that fits. :P Not really.) But seriously. Just, I love it. I don't really know what else to say. Except I need more. I couldn't be happier that the inspiration for this is flowing! Honestly, none of us are complaining! You rock *hardcore*, Ashley.

<3 Ren <3

you = hardcore ponalicious (to use your word)

i love you.


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New Post 5/11/2008 11:29 AM
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dang girlie! whoa. i am not exactly sure how to explain it. but it is just awesome. the imagery in it. is jsut too powerful. and Nick being so pleased eith himself for living a double life. gahh. and the girl who i forgot the name of is just whoa. she knows how dangerous the job is but loves the high she gets. whoa. please post more.

ily! xoxo! peace!

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New Post 5/11/2008 11:32 AM
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 kaybuggie♥jonas wrote

dang girlie! whoa. i am not exactly sure how to explain it. but it is just awesome. the imagery in it. is jsut too powerful. and Nick being so pleased eith himself for living a double life. gahh. and the girl who i forgot the name of is just whoa. she knows how dangerous the job is but loves the high she gets. whoa. please post more.

ily! xoxo! peace!

KaYbUgGiE

wow, thanks! kay, your comment quite possibly made my day shine so much brighter...okay, it TOTALLY DID.

thanks for reading. gahh, i really appreciate it!


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New Post 5/11/2008 12:03 PM
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Man, you girlies rock. Seriously. Thanks for reading this!

Enjoy!

If we're so hopeless, then why'd you mold us to be nothing more than soldiers with impressionable minds?
Ashley’s heart thudded in her chest as she tried to make her escape. The inevitable had happened, and the police were trying to bust her in a drug sweep. The girl they had sent looked nervous, and Ashley couldn’t help but notice her slight sidelong glance towards the man to her left as she tapped her fingers to her temple. The glance had lasted a millisecond, but Ashley was trained to notice these things and knew that should she go forward with the trade she’d be in deep trouble.
Thankful for the invention of wigs, she pushed her platinum blonde hair to the side an adjusted her top. Escaping would take skillful observation and cunning. Sidling up to an unattractive blonde man whose face lit up at the thought of “getting lucky” with the blonde next to him, she smiled and asked him to dance. He nodded, eager to be close to her, and Ashley’s smile grew wider at the prospect of getting out of this dangerous situation relatively easy. There was still the inevitable talk with her father that would come, but she knew it wasn’t her fault and things would work out.
Dancing with the man she knew nothing about, she casually surveyed the crowd. Satisfied that she’d lost them somewhere on the dance floor she finished her dance with the nameless man with a shimmy and a smile. She was almost out the door when she saw the undercover police watching her exit.
Walking swiftly, heart thudding in her chest, she thought about the best way to get out of the situation. If she pulled the wig off, the entire disguise scheme would be ruined but if she did pull it off she’d be another faceless person in the crowd, her brown hair not what they were looking for. She slowed her walk when she reached her car, throwing her bag inside and cranking the engine. Pulling out she realized that whatever vehicle they had couldn’t match the speed and power of her baby. But she still had to be careful.
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Two hours later she finally pulled into her garage, wig cast aside long ago and the faint essence of sweat on her brow. She was confident she hadn’t been followed and grinned at the fact. After all the stress and trouble she relished the rush of relief that flowed through her veins. Now she only had to face her father and she’d be home free, literally.
Ridding her purse of the small packages she’d been meant to distribute to her client, she walked into her father’s office. He was, as usual, on the computer. She never asked what he was doing, assuming it was business she didn’t want to know about. Her father was a very powerful man and she was better off not knowing all of the shady dealings he got into.
“Ashley. Sit.” He instructed, closing his laptop with a snap. “Explain to me exactly what went wrong tonight. As Ashley launched into her long tirade, narrating the story with full detail like she was supposed to do, she couldn’t help but notice the grin threatening to break on her dad’s face.
“What?” she asked, pausing her tale.
“Good job. It was a test. I had to make sure you were doing as well as you claim to be, and you were. Congratulations.” Her father said, extending a hand for her to shake.
Blood boiled in Ashley’s veins. “It was all a setup?” she exclaimed, anger in her voice. “How could you do that? I’m not some toy you can throw in these situations to see how I’d handle it!” She felt like a pawn, used by her father to do is bidding. And though she loved the adrenaline rush, she wouldn’t stand for being used.
“I’ve had it.” She said, standing up to leave the office. “I’m out.”
Before he could say a word, she slammed the door and sprinted to the library, where she knew the majority of shipments yet to be delivered were stored. Grabbing as much of them as possible, she threw them in her purse.
“Where you goin’?” she heard a tiny voice say from behind her. Turning around she saw Lauren standing the doorway.
“’Ren, you’re supposed to be asleep sweetie.” Ashley said, her anger subsiding for a brief moment. “Why are you still awake?”
“I wanted to tell you night.” She said, rubbing her eyes.
“Go back to bed, okay?” Ashley said, hugging her sister tightly. “I’ll see you tomorrow.”
“Pwomise?”
“I promise.” Ashley assured her.
But even though she promised her sister that she’d be there for her the next day, she really didn’t know if she’d be there or not. She needed to lie low for a while, and she drove to the only house she knew her father wouldn’t think to look.

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New Post 5/11/2008 12:12 PM
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ASHLEY!!!!!! You're leaving me? *tear* Nah, it's cool.Ya know, if it helps the plot along and all. SUCH an awesome chapter! I loved it! So....it was all a hoax? What kind of messed up person is this guy? I wonder where she's gonna go. I love it. The description is just AMAZING. I feel like I'm there. Seriously, it's like some awesome action movie. Actually, ya know what it kinda reminds me of? Pay it Forward. I LOVE that movie. But seriously....not quite as much as I love this fic. Fo rizzle. This is awesome! I can't wait to see more! (That goes for Laws, too, little missy. :P)

<3 Ren <3


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New Post 5/11/2008 3:26 PM
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Pssh this fic and suspence is like.... I can't think of anything poetic or metaphoric right now, but it's killing me for real!

I wanna know where she's going! Ooo is she going to the same place as Nick?

Updateeee as soon as you can for I might get withdrawel symptoms!!!

 


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New Post 5/11/2008 4:38 PM
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 Devvo wrote

Pssh this fic and suspence is like.... I can't think of anything poetic or metaphoric right now, but it's killing me for real!

I wanna know where she's going! Ooo is she going to the same place as Nick?

Updateeee as soon as you can for I might get withdrawel symptoms!!!

 

haha, am i really that suspenseful?

wow, again your comment totally made my day.

thanks so much for reading! you have no idea how much i appreciate it!


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New Post 5/11/2008 4:50 PM
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 Ashley [ARM is love] wrote

 Devvo wrote

Pssh this fic and suspence is like.... I can't think of anything poetic or metaphoric right now, but it's killing me for real!

I wanna know where she's going! Ooo is she going to the same place as Nick?

Updateeee as soon as you can for I might get withdrawel symptoms!!!

 

 

haha, am i really that suspenseful?

wow, again your comment totally made my day.

thanks so much for reading! you have no idea how much i appreciate it!

I don't know if suspense is the right word, but I'm randomly walking down the street and I suddenly think 'I wonder where Nick was going?'! Thats a form of suspense right? Leaving me with tons of questions! On the edge of my seat!


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 Devvo wrote

 Ashley [ARM is love] wrote

 

 Devvo wrote

Pssh this fic and suspence is like.... I can't think of anything poetic or metaphoric right now, but it's killing me for real!

I wanna know where she's going! Ooo is she going to the same place as Nick?

Updateeee as soon as you can for I might get withdrawel symptoms!!!

 

 

haha, am i really that suspenseful?

wow, again your comment totally made my day.

thanks so much for reading! you have no idea how much i appreciate it!

 

I don't know if suspense is the right word, but I'm randomly walking down the street and I suddenly think 'I wonder where Nick was going?'! Thats a form of suspense right? Leaving me with tons of questions! On the edge of my seat!

haha, wow. you make my life. not my day, not my week, but my LIFE.

seriously.


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