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Chapter 3

Caitlin's POV:

Things seemed hopeless.  I tried not to think about my family and friends, and how much I wanted to see them again.

If I ever see them again.

I tried to push that thought out of my head. I was going to make it out alive, I just had to, no matter what it took.

It was then that the clouds parted and a thin sliver of moonlight hit my face.

The window!

It was tiny, barely 2 feet wide, and with my hands tied behind my back it would be impossible to fit through, but it was my only shot.

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I winced at the muffled noise of breaking glass. I had wrapped the thin blanket and my apron around the picture, then thrown it at the floor. After listening to make sure the kidnappers hadn’t been awakened by the noise, I carefully picked through the shards of glass, stifling a shout as it cut my hands.

Luckily the ropes were cheap and easy to cut through, so after a few agonizing minutes I was finally free and ready to make my escape.

I stood on top of the bunk and squeezed through the window, landing unceremoniously on the dusty ground. I stood still for a few seconds, not quite believing that I was free and that everything would be okay.

Without knowing where I was or where I was headed, I ran as fast as I could and didn’t look back.

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It was still dark out, and as I hunched over from exhaustion I could barely make out the outline of the highway only a few hundred meters away. I had made it far away from the cabin by now, but I was completely worn out and my head was pounding. The only thing that kept me going was the sight of the road as I inched closer to it, and finally collapsed.

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Joe’s POV:

After seeing the news report I couldn’t go to sleep, so I went to the front of the bus and talked with the driver for a bit. Walter was a nice guy, sort of quiet at first, but after you got to know him he had the best stories about all the interesting places he had travelled to.

In the lull between these stories I had zoned out a bit, silently watching the road as we passed through the middle of nowhere. It was strangely calming and my eyelids were starting to grow heavy when I noticed something up ahead, lying in the middle of the lane.

“Hey what is that?”

Walter peered up ahead then stepped on the brakes, cautiously stopping when we were about 40 feet away from the figure.

“What’s going on?”

I saw my mom peek out from the living room, noticing that the bus had come to a stop.

“I’m not sure Denise, but that’s too big to be an animal…” Walter said while pointing at the figure.

My mom nodded.

“We’ll let’s send Rob out to check it out…”

Seconds later our bodyguard came out, stifling a yawn and asking what all the fuss was about.

When we explained he went outside and cautiously approached the figure, then crouched down and picked it up gently in his arms. When he came back to the bus we saw the long brown hair and were shocked to find that it was a girl. While my mom ran to get the first aid kit I helped place her on the kitchen table.

Suddenly I recognized where I had seen her before- It was the girl from the news report.

Okay, sorry this story is moving so slowly, but I promise it's headed somewhere good, and I'll introduce the other characters soon. <3

 
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Love it!!PMS!!


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omg omg omg!!! i loveeee itt!!!!!!!!!!! PMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

oh..yeah and NEW READERRR!!! -par-tayyy-

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New Post 5/13/2008 1:19 PM
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whoa bro.

this is amazing.

pms!!!

 


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New Post 5/13/2008 6:25 PM
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Chapter 4

Joe’s POV:

“Well these cuts aren’t that bad, but we should take her to a hospital and notify the authorities.” My mom said in a calm voice.

I knew that it wasn’t because she wasn’t concerned, it was just that after dealing with the numerous broken bones and trips to the ER that accompanied raising four boys, she knew that the best strategy in situations like this was to keep a level head.

While my mom put away the first aid kit and Rob called 911, I sat by the girl to make sure nothing happened to her.  She was covered in dust and scratches, and a thick layer of gauze had been wrapped around her hands where the bleeding was worst. 

“Joe?”

I turned around to see Kevin, his messy curls going every direction, as his eyes went from me to the girl on the counter.

“Umm…What is that?” he said while pointing a finger in our general direction.

I glanced over at the girl and stifled the urge to make a joke about the situation.

“Remember that news report about the kidnapping?”

Kevin nodded a bit, then his eyes widened in realization.

“Wait do you mean…”

I nodded in response.

At that moment I felt a hand gently brush against my arm, and turned in time to see a quick flutter of eyelashes.

My breath caught in my throat when I saw her eyes. They were a bright green color,  but what really caught my attention was how hollow they looked- as if there was a shield between them and the rest of the world.

“Who are you?”

I stopped for a moment to realize she was talking to me, and I was definitely blushing. I had been so caught up in those eyes that I hadn’t noticed her mouth forming a question, and now she had a puzzled expression as she peered nervously at Kevin and then around the room.

“Well,” I said softly, “I’m Joe, and this is my brother Kevin. We’re taking you to a hospital right now, er…” I stumbled a bit. What was her name again? Cassie? Catherine?

“Caitlin.”

“Right…thanks.” I replied

For a while no one said anything and she just continued looking around the bus.

“So…where are you from?” Kevin asked, breaking the awkward silence.

“Colorado. I live near Ft. Collins with my grandmother.”

“What’s it like there?” I asked, desperate to keep the strained conversation flowing.

She was quiet for a minute before answering me. “It’s very outdoorsy, lots of bike trails and places to hike or swim. And it’s a pretty small town- kind of old fashioned, but they just put in a new movie theater and a bowling alley.”

“Is that the kind of stuff you do for fun?”

She raised an eyebrow. “What is this? 20 questions?”

Ouch. She definitely seemed annoyed and I didn’t really blame her. I just hated silence, and there was something that made me want to know more.

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Emily’s POV:

“No. You just seem like the kind of person worth knowing more about.” He said thoughtfully.

 “Oh.” I replied lamely, feeling a little bad about my snappy response.

 “You can ask us some questions if you want…” Joe said softly.

We talked for a while in this way, the three of us asking each other questions- some of them normal (“Where are we?”- Me. “Somewhere in Nevada, I think just outside of Reno.”- Kevin), and some questions were completely random (“If you could choose to be stuck on a deserted island with either Johnny Depp or Bear Grylls, who would you pick?”- Kevin. “What’s your favorite piece of furniture?”-Joe.) Both of them were sweet, but Joe was definitely more of a comedian. I noticed when he flashed a charming grin that the smile would light up his warm brown eyes, and the way that his dark shaggy hair somehow fell perfectly around his face.

He definitely made it hard to concentrate on whatever we were talking about.

After a while Kevin left to answer some texts from his girlfriend, and Joe showed me a collection of DVD’s.

“The Notebook?”

“Too sad.”

“Home Alone?”

“Too Christmas-ish.”

He listed a dozen other DVD’s before we agreed on “Ten Things I Hate About You”, my all time favorite. Curled up on the couch with a warm blanket, the movie and Joe’s commentary momentarily made all my thoughts about the previous day disappear.

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Kevin’s POV:

 

Can’t wait to see you at the concert tomorrow

<3 Em

 

I smiled as I read the text message again for the fifth time that night, thinking about my plan for the next day. Emily and Katie, Garbo’s girlfriend, had been planning on driving a couple hours to see our concert that night, but when I found out that we would be stopping at a hospital 30 minutes away from her hometown, I asked for permission to visit her that morning, so that we could pick up her and Katie and they could ride with us to the venue.

 

And the best part is that she doesn’t know about it yet, I thought to myself as I texted her back.

Sorry about the lack of Nick- He will most definitely have a part in the next chapter <3

 
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amazing.plain and simple.<3


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I love it!!!PMS!!!


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New Post 5/14/2008 1:07 PM
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Modified By guitarXheroine [loves summer]  on 5/14/2008 12:09:16 PM)

Okay first off:

In a nutshell...

I hate this chapter. It's obvious filler, and I'm sorry. It really is quite suckarific.

Second:

OMFG. I have what could either be the last chapter or the next chapter already written- it would probably work better later on since its a huge pretty big twist, but I'm really impatient so it might come sooner. I just need to figure out a good context for it.

 

Chapter 5

Joe's POV:

“Joe?” I heard my mom whisper as she gently nudged me awake.

I glanced to my left and noticed an imprint where Caitlin had been sleeping.

“Are we at the hospital?”

When I asked the question part of me was hoping that we were still parked outside- I hadn’t gotten her number or even a chance to say goodbye. My heart fell a bit when my mom shook her head, but it jumped right back as she told me we were parked at a McDonalds a few blocks away, and that we would be able to visit her that afternoon.

After she left, Kevin walked into the room with Emily. Her dark hair was curled into soft waves, and her brown eyes sparkled with laughter when Kevin told her about Nick and the supermarket.

“So when do we get to meet this girl you’ve been crushing on? I need to personally thank her- after all she saved me and Katie from 8 hours of driving.”

“I do not have a crush on her!” I blurted out, my face burning.

Kevin grinned, “You are so full of it. You were staring at her and trying ten times harder than normal to make her laugh last night.”

I groaned. Okay, so maybe I liked her a little bit. She was pretty, and clever, and so down to earth when we were talking- when we told her we were celebrities she didn’t even flinch- but there was something else there. I couldn’t put my finger on it, but there was something strangely familiar about her.

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Caitlin's POV:

I didn’t even realize that I had drifted off to sleep until I woke up. There was a gentle beeping coming from a machine on the wall, and I was attached to an IV. Lying in the cold hospital bed, a million thoughts rushed through my head.

First there were the kidnappers. I had run away and they were still out there, probably pissed off and worried that I’d give away their hideout.

Then there was the phone call from my grandmother- she was coming out to see me and take me home, but she didn’t want to spend money on plane tickets. A friend had agreed to give her a ride at the end of the week, so I had 5 days to recover.

And there was Joe. I usually hated it when people tried to make me laugh or tried too hard to impress me, but there was something about his character that made it seem natural. We had talked for a couple hours and somehow I felt like we had known each other forever.

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 Nick's POV:

“Look Heather, I’m sorry-”

“Save it, Nick.” She snapped back, “I understand why you can’t come, but why did you have to lie about it?”

A breath caught in my throat as her words spilled out- I could tell from her voice that she had been crying, and I wished that I could take everything back.

“I-I can explain- it’s not what you think!” I shouted in desperation, hoping that by some miracle I could fix the situation.

“Well then enlighten me.” She said, her voice was a little softer but it held the same tone of hurt and anger.

I took a breath. How exactly do you explain to someone that you’re a rockstar?

We had met a few months ago when I ducked into an empty coffee shop. She was the only one working and gave me a puzzled glance as I nervously adjusted my hat. My normally curly hair had been straightened and if it hadn’t been for an especially observant fan, I probably would have gone through the mall unnoticed. The conversation between us came easily, her bright blue eyes shining as I described my crazy brothers and I laughed when she revealed that she had three sisters- all of them younger than her. I was shocked when I looked at my watch- we were scheduled for an interview that afternoon and I had to go. After I left the store I started to throw away my Styrofoam cup, then I got a better idea. I pulled out a sharpie and wrote on it. While she was busy I put the cup on the counter and walked out the door again. Watching from outside, I knew what she was reading.

 

Heather,

To be honest I can’t stand coffee, but I would probably come here every day if it meant I could talk to you again. I’m sorry I had to leave, but maybe we could finish our conversation sometime?

-          Nick

Below that was my number, scribbled hastily in sharpie.

 

She had called before I even reached the parking lot.

 

I froze up, and for once I didn’t know what to say. A few seconds later my heart fell when I heard the empty click, and knew that she had hung up on me.

Oh no! Just general sucky confusion all around. HEATHER- I am sorry and it gets better

Well I promised some Nick. I'll have a short section for him and Kevin next time too, and then more Nick later on. And of course a Garbo chapter whenever I can fit it in.

<3

 

 
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That was an awesome filler chapter!!!I can't wait to find out what happens next!!PMS!!


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i love this.pms =]


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