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New Post 5/22/2008 12:21 AM
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Burning Sky- A NickFic 

ok, so on the other boards i posted on, this was pretty popular. Hope as many people like it on here!

The begining is kinda long, but it gets pretty good in some peoples opinions. and i'll admit, i'm not the best writer... so bare a few typos lmao! anyway, here is the first chapter!!

Hope you like it!

 

Burning Sky

Chapter 1- Meet the Newbies

I waited nervously behind the curtains with my brothers. “30 minutes Boys.” Called out manager, AKA my uncle.

 

“WHOOOO!” screamed Joe in my ear.

 I covered it with my hand from the sudden loud voice coming from my annoying brother. Kevin sighed deeply, probably thinking, as he always does.

 

I peeked out from behind the curtain. I saw our opening act. There was a girl drummer, a guy bass player and I guy singer. There was also a girl and a guy playing keyboard. The girl also had an electric guitar strapped on. And that and, wow. There was a girl with an awesome guitar strapped on. She was tuning it. Her face, very serious. In my case, serious equals attractive. She looked kind of emo, but I had learned in the past. Never judge a person on their tight and or baggy clothes or black makeup.

 

 Then she started warming up her voice. WOW! She had a beautiful voice too. Smooth and flowing. I closed the curtain when Joe yelped. Kevin had slapped his hand after he had tried to snatch a dounut out of our uncles box. Joe was rubbing his hand. He saw my rolling eyes and sighed.

 

“Nick, you need to be more fun. Stop being so serious all the time.” said Joe laughing.

 

Yah, that’s me.

Nick.

nothing special.

You may have figured out that me and my brothers form the Jonas Brothers. Yeah. Well, I rolled my eyes once again at my brothers comment. I peeked out from the stage again. the girl was looking back at the curtain, probably hearing Joe’s annoying yell, and she saw me. she smiled. Mercy! Her smile was amazing! I smiled back and waved. She waved too.

 

The announcers voice came on. She looked up, back at me, and waved turning back around. I smiled and figured out that I had to meet this girl. I could sense she was different.  She strummed a chord as the announcers voice finished talking. The mans final words were,

“And here they are, the newest teen sensation,  Burning Sky.” He announced. I listened to the chord turn into a rock song. The piano came in and they were off to a good start.

 

 

The guy

You come to me with your scars on your wrist
You tell me this will be the last night feeling like this

her

I just came to say goodbye
I didn't want you to see me cry, I'm fine

Both

But I know it's a lie

him
This is the last night you'll spend alone
Look me in the eyes so I know you know
I'm everywhere you want me to be
The last night you'll spend alone
I'll wrap you in my arms and I won't let go
I'm everything you need me to be

him

Your parents say everything is your fault
But they don't know you like I know you
They don't know you at all

 

 

her

I'm so sick of when they say
It's just a phase, you'll be o.k. you're fine

both

But I know it's a lie

him

This is the last night you'll spend alone
Look me in the eyes so I know you know
I'm everwhere you want me to be
The last night you'll spend alone
I'll wrap you in my arms and I won't let go
I'm everything you need me to be
The last night away from me

The night is so long when everything's wrong
If you give me your hand
I will help you hold on
Tonight, tonight

This is the last night you'll spend alone
Look me in the eyes so I know you know
I'm everwhere you want me to be
The last night you'll spend alone
I'll wrap you in my arms and I won't let go
I'm everything you need me to be

I won't let you say goodbye
And I'll be your reason why
The last night away from me
Away from me

 

Even know she didn’t sing much, she already had me caught up in her voice. It was amazing. They finished a few more songs. She and her band finished.

 

“Ok, well, be looking for our new album.” Called the guy. the crowed went crazy.

 

“and, you probably want to know where those Jonas Brothers are.” she called out. The crowd went wild!

 

“well, they’ll be here in the next ten seconds!” she yelled. Her and her band members came running back in through the curtain, sending us out. She smiled at me as I passed them.

 

 We finished our concert.

 

After we played, we introduced Hannah Montana.

 

“Hey, Hey, make some noise.” Finished Miley. 

 

After that was the meet and greets. Her band stood by ours. On the other side of hers was Hannah Montana. I just had the greatest luck because I got to stand next to her in the meet and greet table.

 

There was a few girls in the line. Maybe 6 years old. There was a group of ones talking and one a little farther away. You could tell they were making fun of her.

 

SHE looked over at the small girl who looked like she was about to break into tears. She frowned and studied the scean.

 

“hey Abony, pay attention.” Said a girl from her band to this girl that I liked. That was her name. Abony. Unique, but beautiful. I had never herd of anyone named that.  Abony gave a small smile and signed a guys arm.

 

The group of mocking girls came up and squealed in my face. I signed the paper they threw at me and they left laughing. The little girl who was the victim of the bullying finally got up there. Abony saw she was in tears. Small tears, but tears indeed.

 

“oh sweaty, what’s wrong?” asked Abony in a small voice. I smiled softly at that. The little girl pointed at the group of girls. They were watching us.

 

“Were they mocking you?” I asked stepping in. Abony smiled softly at me. The little girl nodded.

 

would you like a picture sweaty?” asked Abony softly. The little girl put on a small smile and nodded.

 

“I want to take a picture with you and Abony.” she said softly. Abony smiled and kneeled down next to her. I did the same. We took a picture and she smiled. I then looked over at the girls.

 

They were snickering some harsh words. I then leaned over to the small girl and kissed her on the cheek. I herd gasps from the girl group.  Abony smiled and poked the small girls stomach making her laugh. She left with a big smile on.

 

Hannah was also nice to the small child and gave her a doughnut from the body guards box. I smiled at that. your probably thinking, Hannah Montana, and Nick Jonas. What a cute couple.

 

Well, I had agreed, until I had herd about this new band. And I had disagreed more when I had met the lead girl singer, Abony. she was like Hannah Montana, but better. She played and instrument. So it wasn’t all about her and her voice, but about her, her voice, and her rad guitar skills!

 

“Nick.” I said holding out my hand.

 

“Abony.” she said shaking it. electricity went through my arm. She went back to signing autographs. Another girl, about 11, asked for a picture of me and Abony standing together. I was singing Boulevard Of Broken Dreams as I walked up next to Abony. she glanced at me and quietly began singing the harmonics to the song. Kevin took the picture and looked at it.

 

“Nick, were you singing again?” he asked sighing. I nodded in shame. A girl from the other band came over and looked at the picture. “you too Abony!” she laughed. Abony laughed and shrugged. “Its what I do!” she laughed and went back to signing pictures.

++++++++++++++++++++++

 

ok,so i wrote this a year ago, and its sounding a bit.... framiliar! haha

anyway, 

Bump people! 

 

 


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New Post 5/22/2008 10:51 PM
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Re: Burning Sky- A NickFic 

comeon people, one little reply....?


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Re: Burning Sky- A NickFic 

hey this story seems like it's going to be pretty good - can't wait to read more!

and was the song in the chap "The Last Night" by Skillet? cause it seems awful familiar

anyways, I like this so far! post more when ya can!



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New Post 5/22/2008 11:09 PM
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Re: Burning Sky- A NickFic 

yah, i love that song. most of the ones will based on songs by other groups

i should put a note about that.

anyway, thanks for the comment!


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