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New Post 6/16/2008 12:14 PM
User is offline Ashleigh <3
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                      Chapter Three - Nick's POV

 

    Sarah and I sat on the side of lake, soaking our feet in.
    “You never fail to amaze me, Nicholas.”, she said as she rested her head on my shoulder.  “This is so beautiful.  I’ve never had a real picnic before.
    “Well, I’m glad I’m the one to share it with you.  Sarah, I have something that–“, he was interrupted by the buzzing of his cell phone.  I looked down to see that it was Kevin.  I just put it back in my pocket and continued with what I was doing.  “It was just my brother.  I’m sure the news can wait.”
    “Nick, he’s your brother.  What if it’s about the baby?”, Sarah protested.  Kevin was always calling me about the stupidest little things.  Once, he called because Chip and Dale was on TV.  I didn’t feel like sitting through another five minutes of that again.  I gave Sarah my sad eyes and reassured her that everything was fine. “So, what did you want to tell me?”, she asked.
    “Oh yea.  Kevin asked me to ask you something.  Joe and Ash are Madison’s god parents and they want me to be the baby’s god father.”, I started.
    “Aww . . . That’s so sweet!”
    “Well, Lexy and Kevin want to know if you’d be the god mother?  Since, Brielle is a bit young.”  Her eyes lit up.
    “Of course I will!”, she agreed. “Now, we have to call him!”  I pulled my phone out of my pocket again and dialed his number.  He answered quickly, a little too quickly.  Sarah grabbed the phone and exclaimed, “Of course I’ll be the little baby’s god mother!”.  She giggled and handed the phone back.
    “Uh . . . Nick”, his tone of voice worried me.
    “What’s wrong, Kev?”
    “Lexy and I are at the hospital.  Can you get here, I could really use someone.”  He sounded like he was crying. My stomach was doing cart wheels.  Why hadn’t I answered my phone earlier.  Was I really that selfish?  I looked over at Sarah, who was still beaming with excitement.  Her expression changed when I told her what he said.  We both rushed off to the hospital, anticipating why they were there.  A thousand reasons rushed through my head, but I kept going back to one.  The baby.  My foot was heavy on the peddle as I saw flashing lights in the rearview mirror.  Not now, Not now!



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New Post 6/16/2008 12:27 PM
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Re: Life Isn't Suffocating . . .  
oh no. very tense. love it.
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New Post 6/16/2008 3:28 PM
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yay :)
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very intense, post more!


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New Post 7/3/2008 4:18 PM
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Re: Life Isn't Suffocating . . .  

                               Chapter Two - Kevin's POV

 

    I paced the waiting room, thinking of who to call, what to do.  I had never really been in this situation before.  When Nick was in the hospital, I was just a kid myself, I had my parents there to rely on, but now, I'm the parent and my wife is the one in that cold, white room.  If there was any way to test adulthood, this was one of them.  Nick, I needed here.  He was the level-headed one, the one that's calm under pressure, the one that has been in this situation before.  He knew what it was like to be in that room; he was no stranger to that feeling of isolation.  I didn't but, I had a feeling that I would soon learn.

    I hesitated calling my parents.  They were in New York, enjoying their time.  Was this something I was supposed to handle myself?  Do I call Lexy's parents?  Or is that a decision for her to make?  What if her dad answered?  He never approved of the marriage; what would he say to me?  I couldn't call Joe.  Who else was there?  This is the time in life where I appreciated friends.  Ones that have been there through everything.
    I looked through the contacts on my phone and found "Garbo".  But, before I could dial, the phone rang.
   
    "Hello? . . . ", I asked.
    "Kevin!  Hey, what's up?"
    "Joe! I'm glad you called."
    "Yea, me and Ash are just doing some shopping.  I just wanted to check up on everything back there.  How's the wife and kids?", Joe laughed.  I didn't. 
    "Umm . . Joe.  Actually, everything is . . ."  I tried my hardest to hold the tears back.
    "Kevin, what's wrong?", Joe screamed into the phone.  I could only imagine the image on the other line.  I could faintly hear Ashleigh in the back ground, panicking. I felt bad already.  This was their honeymoon.  Their time to be alone and care free.   But, I knew Lexy also be happy to have Ash here.
    "Lexy's in the hospital", I finally said into the phone.  Silence held for a moment, all I could hear was Ashleigh in the background demanding that Joe put it on speaker phone.
    "Kevin, we're on our way".  Joe hung up the phone.  A million and one things ran through my mind. 


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New Post 7/3/2008 8:01 PM
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