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New Post 5/25/2008 4:15 PM
User is offline *♫*Marni*♫*
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§ In Just A Little Too Deep § 
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§ In Just A Little Too Deep §

 

Cast

 

Nicholas Jonas… as the youngest Jonas in the band, the serious, quiet one. But what no one really knows is that he has a fun loving smiley side, brought out by none other than Nicole.

Nicole… as Nicole Delaney, Nick’s fun loving girlfriend of six months. She’s from Connecticut and they met at the hotel pool when he was there for a concert. They hit it off pretty much instantly.

Joseph Jonas… as the middle Jonas brother who… everyone loves because he’s the jokester and of course gorgeous.

Alison… as Alison Parker, Joe’s long standing girlfriend of two years. She was a fan from the beginning, living across the street from the boys they had known each other most of their lives and decided to officially date just before Joe left for California. She’s a typical girl next-door, shy and cute, overly optimistic and fun loving also a diehard romantic, whisked away by her knight in tight pants, also known as Joseph Adam Jonas.

Paul Kevin Jonas II… the eldest of the three in the group. He tends to always look on the bright side of things.

Erin Marie… as Erin Marie Hayes, the nineteen-year-old girlfriend of none other than Kevin Jonas. She’s pretty much the girl who is ready to do anything or go anywhere. She is ready and willing to accept change and will never back down from a challenge. Pretty much, she’s a dare devil, but Kevin tends to keep her in line.

Jamie… as Jamie Hayes, Erin Marie’s little sister. Hyper and off the walls, she and Joe have a lot in common and even though he is four years older than her he tends to hang out with her and Frankie a lot.

Olivia… as Olivia “Liv” Smith, the boys Press Manager. She handles all the press coverage and helps them plan out what to say in sticky situations.

Brittany… as Brittany Matthews, the personal hair/makeup/clothing stylist of the three boys. She has an eye for great style and can make even a tablecloth look good (provided it is not blue and have blue pigs on it). She’s extremely opinionated and once she starts something, she has to finish.

 

Ok, so I AM going to need Best Friends, but I’ll choose those from the Auditions Thread as it comes time for them to enter…

 

And Here's Chapter ONE

 

 § One §

 

§ Take Off and Go §

 

"Flight 216 Boarding Now, Flight 216. Gate B." The Baltimore Airport announcement system boomed.

Alison Parker looked up from her People Magazine as she heard her flight number called.

She threw her magazine in her carry-on, grabbed her boarding pass, and made her way over to Gate B.

Standing in line to board, Alison looked out the window at the many different planes coming and going on the runway. When it came her turn to board she handed the flight attendant her boarding pass and quickly made her way down the tunnel onto the plane.

She found her seat and sat down pulling out her ipod in preparation for the two-hour plane ride to JFK International Airport in New York City, where her boyfriend was picking her up.

As more people boarded the plane, Alison zoned out, listening to the latest sounds of David Cook issuing from her earbuds. She wasn’t really paying attention to her surroundings, her lips moving along with the music as she mouthed the words to some of her favorite songs.

As more people boarded a guy, who couldnt have been more than twenty took the seat beside her. Another man, older than the first, took the seat on the aisle.

She never even acknowledged the two guys until the flight attendant informed everyone that all electronic devices needed to be turned 'off'.

She pulled the headphones out of her ears and shut down her ipod, carefully placing in in her carryon bag at her feet.

She looked over at the good-looking guy next to her, "Hey." he said.

"Hi," she replied bracing herself as the plane began moving.

"I'm Ryan." he said flashing a 'million dollar' smile.

"Alison."

"So, where you headed Alison?" he put an emphasis on her name.

"New York City, for my boyfriend's CD Release."

"Oh," his dark blue eyes dropped in disapointment upon hearing she had a boyfriend.

Once the plane was in the air successfully the flight attendant boomed over the loud speaker, "Ladies and Gentlemen, you may now make use of electronic devices and you may move around the plane. Thank You and Please Enjoy your flight."

Alison pulled her ipod back out and turned the music on. She leaned her head back on the chair and dozed off into a light sleep.

 

 

Nicole Delaney boarded the Train from Hartford to New York City's Grand Central station after saying goodbye to her mother.

She found a seat and turned on her ipod, ready, more than ever to greet her boyfriend after she hadn't seen him in a few weeks.

She sat staring out the window at the open fields thinking about nothing but him. She could never get him off her mind.

Someone shook her from her daydream.

"Hey, Can I sit here?" a dark hair girl asked.

“Yeah, I’m Nicole.” She said moving her purse from the seat next to her.

“Crystal.” The girl said sitting down and pulling out her own ipod.

“So why are you headed to the city?” Nicole asked figuring that small talk could make the ride go faster.

“Oh, I’m visiting a friend and we’re going to the Jonas Brothers’ CD Release party tonight, You?”

“Visiting my Boyfriend and I’ll be at the party too.” Nicole said, neglecting to say exactly who hwe boyfriend was.

“Oh that’ll be cool, I’ll see you there.” Crystal said smiling as her favorite Jonas Brothers song came on her ipod.

Nicole was left there to daydream and smile as she listened to her boyfriend’s sweet voice issuing from her headphones before the train stopped at Grand Central Station.

 

 

ok, so before i change this again, i'm posting it.

so comment, tell me what u like or dislike or whatever

constructive criticism is like... greatly appreciated

Thanks Girlies!

♥ Marni ♥


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New Post 5/25/2008 4:33 PM
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this pretty awesome so far marni! pms :)


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New Post 5/25/2008 4:35 PM
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yeah, you killed me with that... the david cook references... haha oh boy

my mom came in and was like "what are you smiling at?" and i said, "you wouldn't understand" and went back to reading. hehe

ok this was an awesome start! i love how you put so much detail into the story... do continue chicka! haha

lalala, i loved it!
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New Post 5/25/2008 4:38 PM
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Re: § In Just A Little Too Deep § 

you of course already know how I feel about this....haha

and I too love that you use SO MUCH detail....you are like the detail queen! haha

don't be so hard on yourself!



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New Post 5/25/2008 4:47 PM
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that was incredible Marni. and i totally wasn't expecting to make an appearance in this, let alone in the first chapter. yay for getting to go to the Jonas Brothers' CD release party. i would love to go to that in real life....but then again wouldn't we all? haha =]

i love the story already Marni. and i can't wait to read more of this.

post more soon chica please.


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New Post 5/25/2008 5:13 PM
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thanks Linz, Ali, Brittany, and Crystal

glad u all like it...

and yeah im a detail crazy person... i like it to be like, wow, i can so see that

u kno?

♥ Marni ♥

 


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New Post 5/25/2008 5:23 PM
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Re: § In Just A Little Too Deep § 

you are quite welcome Marni.

and i understand about being a detail crazy person...i would love to say that i am as well, but i don't think i am that much...although sometimes i am.

and i love detailed stories cuz it makes me feel like i'm there and i love that.


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New Post 5/25/2008 6:24 PM
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hahahah marni, i love how im described as hyper and off the walls xD

soooo me! well most of the time :D

i love detail too! i will like describe any situation with detail, no matter what it is. i love to write, btw. xD


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New Post 5/25/2008 6:29 PM
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Ha Ha Jamie thanks...

YOU said you were hyper or whatever, so i just used it.

lol using extreme detail is FUN!

cuz like i see it in my mind and i cant figure out how to write it so im like... spend forever writing it so its as detailed as possible lol

im a really hard critic on myself

 


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New Post 5/25/2008 6:32 PM
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Re: § In Just A Little Too Deep § 

not be! that was amazing and dont be so hard on yourself!

detail is good..u can like...picture it!


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