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New Post 5/27/2008 8:30 PM
User is offline Katie =] ™
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Citizen Solider[oneshot] 

Citizen/ Solider.

A one-shot.

He was a well respected man in his town, a blood brother to one other brother and three sisters. He had a two children of his own along with a wife. But not only that, he belonged to a huge brother/sisterhood. He was a small part of the National Guard. His baby sister, at the age of fifteen, would be little into her tenth grade school year when he leaves for Afghanistan. Not only was he a citizen…but he was also a soldier.

-The day of his leave-

His family and friends had known about this day since November of the previous year. But they figured the war would be over by then. But it wasn’t.
“I’m proud of you son.” His father had said.
He too had been in a war before, so it made him proud that son was doing the same. His baby sister had thought about giving him the cold shoulder for numerous reasons. Like for leaving; but that wasn’t his fault, so she couldn’t do that. Or for joining the National Guard; but it’s never bothered her in the five years he’d been a part of it, and she didn’t want to be hypocritical, so she couldn’t do that. And what if he didn’t come back? What would she do if she didn’t speak to him on his last day in the States and found out that he didn’t make it? She wouldn’t know what to do with herself. Tears rolled down her cheeks, she knew she was selfish for not wanting him to go, she knew she should be proud of his accomplishments, but she was proud. In her own way, she just didn’t want him to leave. Then it was her turn to tell him goodbye. She was the last one to do so.
“I’ll miss you crazy kid.” Her brother embraced her into a hug.
“I’ll miss you more.” She replied.
-After his leave-

She cried, and cried. Until her best friend came back from touring…but he had no clue what was going on.
“What’s wrong?” Nick asked.
“He’s gone. My brother left for Afghanistan.” She sobbed.
“Everything will be okay.” Nick hugged her tightly.
“How do you know?” She said. It was an obvious fact that she was in denial.
“This rock star has some common sense. You’re just thinking the worst case scenario.” Nick explained to her.
From then on, she knew her brother would be fine and she’d see him in a year.

==
Ah. That felt just a little more refreshing after getting the worries off my mind.
Probably not the best...but my mind feels a lot less cluttered now.


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New Post 5/27/2008 8:35 PM
User is offline Graci Nicole [[was born to dance :)]] I'm proud to have a crush on Michael Phelps ♥
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Re: Citizen Solider[oneshot] 

yay Nick for making Katie feel better!!!!

and for some reason when in the story it said How do you know i thought of That's How You Know from the movie Enchanted...

but that was really good! you wrote it very well!


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New Post 5/27/2008 8:37 PM
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Re: Citizen Solider[oneshot] 

haha.
i know.
thanks Graci. 
And I'm glad you liked it.
=]]


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New Post 5/27/2008 8:39 PM
User is offline Graci Nicole [[was born to dance :)]] I'm proud to have a crush on Michael Phelps ♥
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Re: Citizen Solider[oneshot] 

it was really good!

your welcome!


Please read my fan fictions: Chasing Grace [a one-shot ]. Complicated [ON HIATUS] Not Like Them [Finished] code;; Photobucket p.M. me at grace n. wuz here :) ♪ August 24! I get to see the Jonas Brothers! ♪ thanks Katie for making the amazingical siggy!
 
New Post 5/27/2008 8:45 PM
User is offline Katie =] ™
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I'm glad you liked it.
I think you're the ONLY one.
Probably cause the name doesn't seem to relate that much to any of the Jonas Brothers huh?


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New Post 5/27/2008 8:47 PM
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Re: Citizen Solider[oneshot] 

that was amazing Katie. and it kind of reminds me of my uncle who's over in either Iraq or Afghanistan right now. and i miss him like crazy.

but that was incredible katie. and i'm glad that Nick came back to make her feel better.


My Stories and Joint Stories
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New Post 5/27/2008 8:48 PM
User is offline Graci Nicole [[was born to dance :)]] I'm proud to have a crush on Michael Phelps ♥
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Re: Citizen Solider[oneshot] 

eh.

whenever i think no one read my stories, i just think of the people who don't have accounts on this site reading it!

whoever they are but still...

i read three whole fanfics before i ever joined this site.

so i don't think i'm the ONLY one...

because your writing is good!


Please read my fan fictions: Chasing Grace [a one-shot ]. Complicated [ON HIATUS] Not Like Them [Finished] code;; Photobucket p.M. me at grace n. wuz here :) ♪ August 24! I get to see the Jonas Brothers! ♪ thanks Katie for making the amazingical siggy!
 
New Post 5/27/2008 8:48 PM
User is offline Graci Nicole [[was born to dance :)]] I'm proud to have a crush on Michael Phelps ♥
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Re: Citizen Solider[oneshot] 
Modified By Graci Nicole [[was born to dance :)]] I'm proud to have a crush on Michael Phelps ♥  on 5/27/2008 6:48:28 PM)

and see?

crystal read it!


Please read my fan fictions: Chasing Grace [a one-shot ]. Complicated [ON HIATUS] Not Like Them [Finished] code;; Photobucket p.M. me at grace n. wuz here :) ♪ August 24! I get to see the Jonas Brothers! ♪ thanks Katie for making the amazingical siggy!
 
New Post 5/27/2008 8:48 PM
User is offline Katie =] ™
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Re: Citizen Solider[oneshot] 

I'm glad you liked it Crystal.
My bubby is heading over there in October.
The same figure I used in the oneshot indeed.


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New Post 5/27/2008 8:50 PM
User is offline Katie =] ™
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Re: Citizen Solider[oneshot] 

 Graci [[is still grounded and is wondering if he really likes me ♥]] wrote

eh.

whenever i think no one read my stories, i just think of the people who don't have accounts on this site reading it!

whoever they are but still...

i read three whole fanfics before i ever joined this site.

so i don't think i'm the ONLY one...

because your writing is good!

you could be right.
And thanks.
You're [[and Crystal too]] pretty spiffy at writting too.
I haven't used spiffy or nifty in a bit.
haha


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