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New Post 5/28/2008 6:27 AM
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Not Quite A Cinderella Story (chapter 2! comments made my day!) 
Modified By ETphoneJonas?  on 5/29/2008 11:04:19 PM)

I'm new here!

 

 

I’m obsessed with Cinderella Story, right now. Any suggestion on FanFiction I should read on? Give me the URL.

 

So, here’s Chapter 1. Comment please!

 

Not Quite a Cinderella Story.

 

“Gabby! Can you please take my beetle to the car wash and have them wax it. And take my clothes at the launderette.” My day become miserable since my dad died a few years ago when I was 10. Now, I’m 16, working at the Denny’s 4 hours a day, 4 days a week. And get paid $6 per hour. And become a maid to my step-mother, Denisya and her 2 daughters, Felisha and Ferina. I have a brother who is 6 years older than me. But he’s on tour with a band about to get big.

 

“Yeah, I’m on my way!” I answer weakly. She always asks me to do something for her, not her own daughters. F&F are in beauty pageant, that’s means they’re complete drop-dead gorgeous. But sadly they’re really snobbish beyond the infinity. “Hey Gabby, can you get me 2 latte for me and Ferina after you get mom’s clothes.” I’m not able to say no to people. I don’t have any self-confidence. “Okay, do you guys want the usual?”

 

“Of course!”

 

I grab the keys and start to go to Carly’s Carwash. I waited for half an hour to get the car’s done. And I did the rest of my to-do-list. Yes, my life is boring, boring than a card board.

 

I stop at the Starbucks, I’m working at. I’m glad it was Lila’s shift. She’s 3 years older than me. and we’re best friends like no other. She’s a part-time job freak! She has so many jobs at the same time. She’s working with me in my shift, a sale-girl at UrbanOutfiters, a kindergarten teacher and she walks the neighbor’s dog every evening. She’s a working machine!

 

“Hey Gab, rough day?” she asks me as soon I approach at the counter. “*sigh* same-O, same-O. Two usual lattes for two evil twin, please.” After a few minutes, she returns with 2 cups in her hands. “It’s been a while; your brother had called you yet?” Lila asks me.

 

Lila has a little crush on my brother since they were in the same high school. but my brother had graduated and she’s just a sophomore.

 

“Nah, he’s busy touring. He’s opening for Backstreet Boys, you know?”

“Yeah, I know.”

“I better get back home before the almighty want something.”

“Yeah, say hi to Greg for me if he calls.”

 

I went the car and suddenly my phone rings, an N*Sync song. “Dirrrrrrrty pop!” speaking of my brother, it was him. I put the lattes into the cup holder. “Hey Greg! I miss you. When you’re coming home? I’m miserable here, as always.”

 

“Hey sis, it’s funny you ask, I was just about to tell you, we’re going to stop by tomorrow with the Jonas.” He said. Yeah, he’s playing as a bass player with this Jonas Brothers. I don’t really know them. I bet they don’t know me. But let me tell you, they’re so cute, 3 brothers and their collection of Ed Hardy shirts.

 

“How’s home?” he asks.

“Evil as always. Oh, Lila said hi.” He laughs. I know we’re 6 years apart but we’re pretty close. He is the best big brother a sister could have.

“Ditto. Uh, we catch up tomorrow okay, I’ve got sound check. Bye Gab.”

“Bye.”

 

 

 

 

I will probably update soon. Comment!!

Uhh, and Greg is Garbo…


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New Post 5/28/2008 9:00 AM
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Re: Not Quite A Cinderella Story (new story! comments made my day!) 

OH! I REALLY really love this!

PLEASE!!!!! PMS!!!!

you should read  my jonit story with my Friend Cana.  

The links under my siggy.

~Audrey~


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Re: Not Quite A Cinderella Story (new story! comments made my day!) 

 <3~Audrey~<3 wrote

OH! I REALLY really love this!

PLEASE!!!!! PMS!!!!

you should read  my jonit story with my Friend Cana.  

The links under my siggy.

~Audrey~

 

thank you.. I will check that out!


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*bumping Party*

cause this story roxs my soxs!


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Re: Not Quite A Cinderella Story (new story! comments made my day!) 

 <3~Audrey~<3 wrote

*bumping Party*

cause this story roxs my soxs!

Oh! Please!!! PMS!!

Like more people should comment this,


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chapter 2 

Coffee. check!

Silent environment. Check!

Barney Bear. Che— wait where’s my Barney?!

Mama!!!

 

 

Chapter 2.

 

Oh my gosh. I can’t wait to see Greg. It would relieve my stress a bit, But yeah, the stress still there. “Hey Gabby,” Ferina leans against my frame door, “you finish my Mrs. Harper’s report yet?” she asks while checking her nails. “Yeah, wait, it’s not print yet.” I open the file and push the icon print. When am I going to learn to say no?!

 

Ferina walks in slowly and sits the corner of my bed. “So, Greg coming home today, right?” she asks me shyly and still playing with her fingers. “Yeah…” I reply but something fishy, I look at her face, she blushes. “Eww, Ferina! He’s my brother! He’s your step-brother! Don’t think about hooking up with him. That’s like against the law.”

 

She panics, “what? I’m not saying anything.”

“That’s the point.”

 

DING DONG!

 

“Can someone get that?” Denisya’s voice command as usual. But I’m glad to do what she said this time. I need to get away from Ferina. It’s too awkward. I handed her the report and off to the front door.

 

DING DONG!

 

“Wait a sec.” I run and open the door. It reveals a tall teen that has dyed blonde at the edge of his brown hair. “Greg!” I jump and hug him.

“Gab! How are my lil sis?”

“Do I need to answer that?” I ask in low voice. He shrugs.

“So, how’s the tour?” I motion him to come in and walk in to the kitchen.

He sits on a stool; I grab a redbull and hand it to him, “it’s awesome. You should meet the band. They’re pretty hilarious.”

“How many people you get to perform?”

“About a couple hundreds.  Meh, I know it’s going to grow. The boys are rockin’”

“I bet you’re rockin’ too.” I look at my phone and its 2pm. I’m going to be late for my shift.

“Oh shoot, I got to go to Denny’s. Bye G.” I kiss on the cheek and run to get my totes upstairs and car key.

 

XXX

At the diner…

 

I rush to the diner but accidentally bumped into a boy. My totes fall on the ground and my stuff comes out of it.

“I’m sorry.” The boy said and helps me pick my stuff.

“Nah, it’s my fault. I’m in a rush.” I took my silver phone on the ground and put it in the totes. I run to the diner, hope Ashley, the manager doesn’t cut my pay.

“Wait!” I heard him calling me but I chose to ignore him.

 

XXX

Joe’s POV

 

“Wait!” I call the girl. she looks familiar. Brown hair and smells like strawberry. Okay, I just act like a stalker. Weird.

“Joe, come on, we’re going…” Nick shouts at me.

“Yeah, I’m coming.” I pick up this little purple notebook and my silver phone. I jog to the van.

 

 

 

Sorry, I thought I was going to post sooner but there are technical difficulties. So, comment!!


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Yay!!!!!!!! I love this Story

It Roxs my Soxs!!!!!!

can't wait for more.

~Audrey~

 


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*~Bumbin it up~*


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