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I'm with the band: The story of Maggie Jonas. Chapter TWENTY-Nineizzle!! 9/10!! 
Modified By SofieAlwaysKnows  on 9/10/2008 4:05:57 PM)

I've been reading Fanfictions off this site for a little while, and I thought I'd try posting one of my own. I came up with this story on my way to class. It's a little different but hopefully you'll like it. Let me know what you think. I hope it's all good...

I'm with the band.

Chapter1.0

           What if I told you, that America’s hottest band of brothers was hiding something? You, being the die hard fans you are, wouldn’t believe me right? Of course. Well, they are. Don’t get me wrong, it really was my choice not to have a legion of fans at my feet because of my last name. I wanted a normal life. Who am I kidding though? My brothers, that’s right, are part of one of (if not THE) “biggest music phenomenon” like, ever and they want to share it with me. My name? Maggie Jonas and this? This is my story as the Jonas sister.

“Mags! Mags, wake up” Joe Jonas shook my covers off.
“Joe! Go away” I muttered, still half asleep.
“Uh-uh, not happening. Get up” He poked my back repeatedly.
“I swear if this is about another one of your Barney dreams…” I trailed off, sitting in bed.        
“G’Morning” he sat on the edge of my bed with a foolish grin on his face.
“Morning” I tried putting on a serious face but truth be told, Joe makes it impossible. After a second of staring at his Cheshire cat-like grin, we both started laughing madly.
“Seriously now, Mom says breakfast is ready” Joe stopped laughing and told me.
“I’ll be right down” I nodded and slid off my bed as Joe walked out of my room.
Let’s recap, shall we? While 99,99% of you girls would probably sell one of your body parts to have Joseph Adam Jonas wake you up almost every morning, I get it whether I want it or not. Don’t get me wrong, he’s my twin brother and I love him to death but I just don’t see him like you do. To me, he’s clumsy-trip on everything in sight-Joe, not Rock-superstar-sings like an angel-Joe. Anyway, I got out of bed and straightened out my plaid purple flannel pajama pants along with my black t-shirt(here!) and went out in the hall towards to bathroom. Finding it empty, a rare and almost impossible occurrence, I went inside to quickly brush my teeth and wash my face.
“Maggie?” Frankie, the smallest of my brothers, poked his head in the bathroom. “Breakfast is ready” he added as I dried my face off with a towel.
“’Kay, let’s go” I followed him down the hall and then down the stairs.
I walked in the kitchen and breathed in all the delicious smells coming my way. Waffles, bacon, eggs, you name it and my mother probable cooked it.
“Good Morning everyone” I greeted as I took my seat between my older brother Kevin and my twin brother Joe.
“Good Morning Margaret” My dad, Paul Kevin Jonas said looking up from his newspaper.
“Coffee, Maggie?” My mom, Denise, asked from her seat.
“Please, Mommy” I nodded smiling.
“Hey Mags, pass the juice please” Nick, my younger brother, asked with a full teeth grin. Be jealous fangirls, be jealous.
“Here you go Nick J” I passed him the juice as I joined hands with both Kevin and Joe. Everyone else joined hands and bowed their heads as we gave thanks for everything; the food, our family, the boys’ success, Nick’s health, the list goes on…
“Amen” My dad said and everyone dug in.
Fangirls, meet my family. My 20 year-old brother Kevin, guitarist for none other than THE Jonas Brothers; my 18 year-old twin brother Joe, singer for the same band; younger brother 1 is 15 year-old Nick and he’s the reason it all got started; younger brother 2 is 7 year-old Frankie, what can I say? He’s the man. My mom, Denise is my best friend and my companion through the whole boy-invaded-house thing. My dad, Paul Kevin Senior, he’s some character. I respect and admire him a lot but he’s quite overprotective of me, which puts a strain on our father-daughter relationship. My brothers help me out though.
I looked around the table and smiled broadly. I love our family breakfasts; they don’t come enough so I enjoy them when they do.
It was finally Summer and I was looking forward to spending time with my brothers until I heard the news.
“Have you boys told your sister the news?” My dad said in between bites of waffle.
“Not yet Dad, but thanks for ruining it” Joe piped up, glancing at Nick and Kevin.
“What crazy award did you guys win now?” I chuckled, enjoying my own waffle.
Kevin shook his head and looked at Nick.
“What’s the news then?” I asked putting my fork down.
“We booked a Summer-long tour” Nick said calmly, waiting for my outburst.
“Oh…That’s great guys” I smiled and turned back to my breakfast, finding fascination in a stray piece of bacon on my plate. I didn’t say anything else for the rest of the meal.
Nick, Joe and Kevin exchanged looks and nodded. I shrugged inwardly, who knew what those boys were up to?

-SofiePWNS!
 
New Post 5/29/2008 1:17 PM
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Re: I'm with the band. a Garbo Fic. 

That... Was... AWESOME!


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Ah, welcome to the fanfiction writing community!

First of all, I think you have an amazing start to this and you should hurry and write some more! Secondly, I know it's gonna be awesome, because it's a Garbo fic. Me like the Garbo fics.

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New Post 5/29/2008 1:55 PM
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Re: I'm with the band. a Garbo Fic. 

I'm so glad you like it!

*does happy dance* I have to go to work now. but I can post more tonight! :P

-Sofie.

 


-SofiePWNS!
 
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Here's chapter two! hope you like it! Comment please!=D

Chapter 2.0

          “May I be excused? I have an assignment I need to finish” I said, speaking for the first time after hearing the news.
          “Go ahead” My dad nodded as I stood up and picked up my dish and my glass, before washing them and putting them away.
          I walked back up to my room and shut the door behind me. I sat at my desk and took out the folder I was looking for. My college applications. I was applying to all the UC schools, at my dad’s request, but my mom knew I wanted Parson’s school of Design in New York more than anything. I started filling out the forms before taking a break to play some music off of my iPhone. Halfway through my fifth or sixth form, I heard someone knock.
          “Come in” I said after putting the forms back in the folder.
          “Hey Mags” Joe poked his head in my room.
          “Hey Danger” I said from my desk.       
          “Whatcha’ doin’?” He asked, approaching me.
          “Y’know, stuff” I said with a smirk.
          We both looked at each other and started laughing. “Awkward…” We both said between laughs.
          “Listen, Me, Nick and Kev--” He started.
          “Nick, Kevin and I” I interrupted and corrected.
          “Whatevs. We need to talk to you so we’re taking you out for Pinkberry. Get ready” he said, leaning against me desk.
          “’Kay, gimme 20 minutes” I told him, getting up from the desk and moving towards my dresser.
          “Twenty” He repeated. “No more, no less. Talk is kind of important” Joe said from the door.
          “Got it” I rummaged through my dresser for something to wear, while I thought about what my brothers could possibly have to say. I grabbed a pair of black skinny jeans, what can I say? We Jonas love the skinnies, a plain white t-shirt and slipped on a funky pair of Nike sneakers (here!). I let my long curly, brown hair out of its bun and grabbed a pair of sungl*CENSORED*.
          “Guys?” I called out on the hallway. “I’m ready” I said walking into Kevin and Joe’s room.
          “Ready Mags?” Kevin asked, car keys in hand. “Let’s go” he said after I nodded.
          “Nick c’mon! Let’s go!” Joe called from downstairs. We stepped out into the sunny Los Angeles day and piled into Kevin’s Jeep before driving to the nearest Pinkberry.

-SofiePWNS!
 
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Re: I'm with the band. a Garbo Fic. 

Aww, this is cute.

I can't wait to find out what they are wanting to talk about.

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Re: I'm with the band. a Garbo Fic. 

Wow, Sofie, this was...I'm seriously at a loss for words. I saw the words "Garbo fic" and that you (my Skylartastic reader) had written it and decided that I HAD to read. And I am sooo glad that I did!!

Please post more soon!!

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Re: I'm with the band. a Garbo Fic. 

They do love their skinny jeans. xD


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Modified By SofieAlwaysKnows  on 5/30/2008 12:18:04 PM)

       Here you go guys. Chapter 3. It's a bummer no one else is commenting, but I don't really mind I actually like this story.  Enjoy and Comment please! =P

 

Chapter 3.0

 

 

          “I want lots of Fruity Pebbles, Joe” I told my brother as he went to get my ice-cream along with Kevin, while I stayed behind with Nick.
          “Summer-long tour huh?” I blurted looking at my younger brother.
          “Yeah, it’s pretty crazy” he said carefully.
          “I’m happy for you guys” I said, receiving a look from Nick.
          “Really, I am” I told him.
          “MJ that might work on everybody else, but not on me” he started. “You know that” he finished.
          I half-smiled. My younger brother knows me like the frets of his guitar. “You guys just came back though” I admitted.
          “I know, but it won’t be so bad this time. Trust me” Nick said, smiling.
          “Nick J web-cam chats and text messages suck” I complained with reason. All I got when my brothers were away on tour were once-a-week video chats and everyday (if I was lucky) text messages, which to you fans might not sound half bad but they’re my brothers and I can’t really live without them.
          Nick chuckled. “Just trust me Mags” he told him as I shot him a questioning look.
          At this point, Kevin and Joe had returned with our ice-creams. I enjoyed mine happily, while sitting next to Kevin.
          “So…you didn’t bring me to Pinkberry to just sit there, did you?” I asked, looking at my brothers. “Spill” They looked at each other in the eyes and then back at me.
          “We’re going on tour” Kevin started.
          “For the entire Summer” Joe added.
          “We’ve been over this, guys” I stopped them and said.
          “We’d miss you insane amounts” Nick added and I looked at him, my eyes clouding with tears.
          “So…” Kevin started again but trailed off once he realized that I was no longer looking at them and tears were sliding silently down my cheeks.
          “Mags don’t cry! This is all good I promise” Kevin said and put his arm around me.
          I hastily wiped the few tears off my face and turned to my brothers.
          “We talked to dad and we want you to come” Joe said, smiling.
          “On tour?” They nodded. “With you guys?” They nodded again. “Dad said yes?” I asked a third question.
          “For the love of Barney, yes!” Joe blurted laughing.
          I chuckled. “If you guys scream the word Poned any second, you’re going to make your fans very say, because I will come after you” I said calmly.
          “No joke MJ, you’re coming with us. If you want to, that is” Nick smiled and said.
          “If I want to? Are you kidding? Of course I want to!” I scoffed and giggled.
          “Great, it’s settled then. All you have to do is pack” Kevin told me.
          “When do we leave?” I asked.
          “Tomorrow” all three of them answered.
          “Tomorrow?” I swallowed hard. “Of course”
          “Mags?” Joe asked, worried.
          “It’s nothing Danger, we’re going on tour” I told him smiling and sticking my tongue out.
          We laughed and finished the rest of our ice-creams before heading back home to pack.
          We each went our separate ways when we got home. I went to find my mom. Somehow, I knew she had something to do with this.
          “Hey Maggie, you’re back” I heard her say when I entered the kitchen. I didn’t say anything. I walked right up to her, and gave her the tightest, most bone-crushing hug I’ve ever given.
          “Thank you Mom” I said and she smiled.
          “You’re welcome, sweetheart. Dad and I have to talk to you before you go though” She said, stroking my dark, hazelnut curls.
          “Okay, I’m going to start packing” I nodded and smiled as I left to my room.
 

-SofiePWNS!
 
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Yay, she is finally getting to go on tour with them. That's awesome.

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