Okay I have an idea...or how about I post the prologue, tell me if I should continue the fic!

Prologue

Dear Diary, I'm writing about a very difficult time for me. My name is Bethany. Bethany Howerton. My family is royalty, but my father was kidnapped, and nothing in his power worked against the evil that took him. I was only 8. I now am 15, but still very worried. Still worried that my father's gone forever! Worried that we'll all perish in the mercy of his sins. Wouldn't you be worried too? 

How was the pro?! Should I continue with the fan fic?!  

thanks for the feedback spence!! I'll post the first chapter on a different thread!

the fics called: In the Depths of My Mind!