OK, this is my first FF and I dont think its like TOTALLY awesome, but lets see what you think :
“I’m going to miss you Nicky.” Samantha said.
“I’m going to miss you too,” Said Nick holding Samantha in a tight hug.
Samantha said goodbye to Kevin, Joe and their parents. Samantha had been their neighbors forever, 8 years. Now her dad was making her move to Michigan. Why can’t we just stay in New Jersey? Samantha thought. She’s lived her all her life, in this house and she didn’t want to move. Everything she knows is here. Everything she grew up with. All of her friends are here, especially Nick. He was Samantha’s best friend. Samantha was going to miss Nick most. Her farther and mother said goodbye to the Jonas family and they got into the car. Nick gave Samantha one last hug before she got into the car. Samantha looked out to nick tears in her pretty blue eyes, her long brown hair in her face. She waved goodbye through the window, then the car pulled away. A tear ran down his cheek. He was never going to forget Samantha.
[7 years later]
“Make a wish!” Samantha’s dad said.
It was Samantha’s 15 birthday party. All her friends were there. They waited patiently as Samantha thought of her wish. I wish I could see an old friend from New Jersey again. She thought. She has been in Michigan for 7 years and nothing was wrong with Michigan it’s just she still missed her New Jersey friends. She blew out the candles and all her friends cheered.
“Present time!” Someone from the crowd yelled. Everyone went over to the table were all the presents were. Everyone let Samantha get to the table and she started to open presents. She got lotion, clothes, some things for her room and a lot more.
“I guess that’s it, Thanks everyone!” Samantha said.
“Wait! I forgot to give you mine,” Said one of Samantha’s best friends, Ally.
Ally hand Samantha her present and Samantha opened it. It was a CD from the band called Jonas Brothers. She had never heard of the band before but the name Jonas sounded familiar. There were three boys on the cover. Two boys had dark brown straight hair. One of them looked nineteen or twenty, the other one looked eighteen or nineteen. The youngest one looked about fifteen or sixteen. He had big curly dark brown locks on his head. Then I realized why the name Jonas sounded so familiar. It was her old neighbors’ last name. And the youngest one was her old best friend from New Jersey, Nick.
Ok so thats the beggining. Please post a comment bout what u think of it!! Once I get some comments I'll post the next part. xD Hope you like it
