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New Post 6/2/2008 4:48 PM
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Secret Identity 

Okay, so here's a new fanfiction. You might not get the first couple of chapters, like what it has to do with the Jonas Brothers, but you'll find out. :D Hope you enjoy! BTW, please, please, please!!! tell me what you think. Thanks :]

Chapter 1

            I sat patiently in the brown leather office chair as the medical waiver hung limp from my hands. It was the first day of school at Eastwood Lincoln Memorial High School and students rushed past the office while secretaries scrambled around the room, trying to keep order as new students filed in. I leaned back in my seat and glanced at the new students; there were five. They all seemed to be pretty normal, but one especially caught my eye. He had jet black hair that stopped just above his eyebrows and halted at the middle of his ears. It was very straight and stuck up in all directions as if he hadn’t combed it for days. Meanwhile, his green eyes darted everywhere under the shadows of his thick horn-rimmed glasses. He was wearing regular, faded old Levi’s and an old band t-shirt. He seemed very nervous and kept tapping his fingers against the side of his legs as he bit his lower lip continually.

 

“Sweetie…sweetie….hello?”

 

“Oh…sorry.” I mumbled as I got up out of my chair and headed across the room to the front desk. The secretary just mumbled something in reply and told me that my medical form for this year was way past due and was supposed to be turned in at the end of last year.

 

“I know,” I blushed, “but I was kind of absent the last couple of weeks of school last year.” As memories flooded past from those last weeks of May from the previous school year, the secretary just took my form and thanked me as I quickly turned around to leave. The first bell had already rung and I was already filled with nervous anticipation for the new school year.

 

“Um…honey?”

 

“Yes…” I replied before heading out the door.

 

“Could you please come back here?” I slightly nodded as I made my way back over to the front desk, wondering what could possibly be wrong. When I reached the front desk, I noticed the boy with the green eyes that I had been looking at earlier, standing absentmindedly a few feet away from the desk. The secretary then leaned over and spoke quietly as the jewelry on her neck jiggled up and down from the jiggle of fat rolls that lay underneath her chin.

 

“Um…this boy is new here---from Canada, and it would be a big help if he could follow you around for this first week of school so he can get the feel of things. He’s just arrived in here two days ago and hasn’t got a clue about anything, so could you?”

 

“Uh…sure. No problem.” I faked a smile as I glanced over at the boy who was looking intently at the wall in front of him.

 

“Thanks.” She smiled as I hurried over to mysterious boy.

 

“Hi, I’m Remy.” I said happily, but not too much so so that he wouldn’t think I was an over-enthusiast.  I held out my hand for him to shake, but he just turned away from the wall and nodded. As I let my arm fall against the side of my body, he leaned over to pick up his bag from off the ground.

 

“John Paul.” He gruffly replied, clearing his throat afterwards.

 

“So they told me you just moved here from Canada…” He just nodded in reply.

 

“Which part?” I urged on.

 

“Um…Toronto,” he said, barely above an audible whisper.

 

“Well, my first class is English so I guess you can just come with me.” I said as I made my way into Room 1200, Mrs. Peck’s class. Class had already started and I quickly made my way to the back of the room where two empty desks sat, one behind the other. As I was about to sit down, Mrs. Peck cleared her throat loudly and motioned for me to come up to the front where she had been talking to the class. After making my way up there, the whole class staring at me, she led me to her desk.

 

“What’s your name?” She said in hushed tones.

 

“Remy…Remy Thomas.” I gulped.

 

“And who’s that?” She snipped, throwing her head towards John Paul who sat idly in the back of the room, staring at his desk.

 

“Uh…he’s new…from Canada. His name’s John Paul. The office just asked me if I would show him around the school for a week, that’s all.” I said, quickly relaying the information as I looked around the classroom nervously.

 

“Okay, you may return to your seat and please try not to be late again.” She emphasized, saying it louder so that the whole class could hear.

 

“Sorry,” I mumbled as I took my seat in the back of the room. The next two classes passed in the same manner except for the short episode that had occurred in English. John Paul followed me, barely speaking while I filled the teachers in on the affair and explained to John Paul whatever was necessary. Finally, after third period, lunch arrived and I led John Paul into the cafeteria, handing him a tray and some plastic silverware as we approached the lunch line.

 

“There’s hot lunch, which seems to be spaghetti today, and sandwich line which usually consists of hamburger, hotdog, or corndog. There’s also a sandwich fridge over there for regular sandwiches such a peanut butter and jelly or ham and turkey, and there’s a salad bar. There’s also pizza if you don’t want any of that.” I explained as we waited in the lunch line. I expected him to take off for the pizza or the salad bar as many kids did on their first day, fearing the school lunch, but he just waited beside me, looking aimlessly around the cafeteria, not saying a word. As I stepped up to receive the spaghetti, John Paul followed suit, taking exactly everything I had from the lunch counter: a bowl of spaghetti, a piece of garlic bread, a pudding cup, and chocolate milk. After paying for our lunch, I led us to my usual table and found that Grace, one of my best friends and a frequent at our table, already there, chowing down on a piece of pizza.

 

“Hey…” She said, sneaking suspicious glances at John Paul as he took a seat beside me.

 

“Grace, this is John Paul. John Paul, this is Grace.” I responded, introducing the two. While Grace waved and smiled, John Paul just nodded in reply and started eating, keeping his head low. “John Paul is from Canada and I’m showing him around the school for a week.” I continued to say.

 

“Cool” Grace simply replied as she took another bite of pizza.

 

“Where is everyone?” I asked curiously, wiping my face after taking a few bites of spaghetti.

 

“They still must be in line,” Grace shrugged, taking a sip of her milk.

 

“Um…we usually have about seven other people sit with us at lunch, but they still must be in line or coming in from their third period class.” I explained to John Paul as I looked around the cafeteria for any hint of my friends. Finally, I spotted Amber and motioned for her to come join us. She then hurried over, a brown paper lunch bag in hand, as she took a seat next to Grace.

 

“Amber, this is John Paul. John Paul, this is Amber.” I ushered, introducing the two. “John Paul is from Canada and I’m showing him around school for a week.”

 

“Hi!” Amber chirpily responded as she flicked her straight, long brown hair over her left shoulder.

 

“Hey,” John Paul mumbled, moving on to his pudding. After everyone else had joined the table and each person had been introduced to John Paul, we then started to chatter aimlessly about summer, school, boys, and anything else that happened to come up. Meanwhile, John Paul just sat there, having finished his lunch, tapping his hands against his legs and bobbing his head up and down to an invisible beat.

 

“So what did you do this summer, John Paul?” Emma asked, her head perched on palms of her hands as she leaned across the table towards John Paul.

 

“Oh....uh…nothing really,” he stuttered, caught off guard.

 

“Oh, come on. You must have done something.” She said, playfully tapping his arm and batting her long, black eyelashes.

 

“Um…go to Disneyworld?” He slightly smirked, not phased one bit by her pretentious flirting.

 

“Oh…that sounds fun.” She said as she shrank back in her chair, disappointed by the lack of response from her flirtatious attempts. After that, John Paul said nothing at lunch and the rest of us continued with our usual routine. After lunch, the day flew by slowly, and I soon found myself, dropping John Paul off back at the office like he was a little boy in trouble.

 

“So do you need a ride home? My brother could bring you if it’s not too far.” I offered, taking my cell phone out of the front pocket of my schoolbag.

 

“No thanks. My mom’s coming, but thanks anyway.”

 

“Wow…I think that’s the most you’ve spoken all day.” I remarked, leaning up against the wall as I secretly hoped he wouldn’t take my joke too seriously.

 

“Um…yeah…sorry about that,” he nervously laughed, playing with a loose string on the end of his shirt.

 

“No problem,” I smiled as I started to head out the door. “You sure you don’t need a ride?”

 

“Positive.” He stated as a slight smile spread across his face.

 

“Okay…well I’ll see you tomorrow then. Bye” I waved as I headed out the door, prepared to face another day with this mysterious boy.

 

 

****I'll post chapter two if y'all like it.*****

 
New Post 6/2/2008 4:55 PM
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Yes! PLEASE DO POST ANOTHER CHAPTER!!

Hm... maybe a Jonas Brother in disguise, trying to be "normal" and covert (Nick maybe)... or ahh! I don't know! You'll just have to post more so that we can find out (*hint* *hint*)!!

Anyway, Please Continue and Post More Soon! !

 
New Post 6/2/2008 5:20 PM
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PMS!!! I love this story!! It's my new favorite fanfic, besides the ones that I'm writing!! lolz!!! PMS!!


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New Post 6/2/2008 9:57 PM
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wahhh post more now !!

i love it alreadyyyyy !


 
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BUMP !


 
New Post 6/2/2008 11:09 PM
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Here's the second chapter, hope you like it!

Chapter 2

 

I stepped onto the clean pavement, wet with rain from last night’s fall. I quickly grabbed my sweatshirt from the back seat and waved goodbye as my mom pulled away from the curb. I entered the double glass doors streaked with rain and walked down the hall to my locker. As I neared my locker, I noticed John Paul leaning up against the side of it, his arms folded. He was dressed similar today in the same jeans and same black converse that covered his feet. The only difference was his shirt which bore a new design. It looked awfully familiar and I couldn’t quite place where I had seen it before. ‘Maybe in a store window…’ I thought to myself as I carefully approached my locker.

 

“So how did you find it?” I questioned, hardly concentrating as I turned the dial on the door of my locker.

 

“Find what?” He asked, looking up at me with a confused expression plastered on his face.

 

“My locker” I dubbed as the door of my locker swung open, almost hitting him in the head.

 

“Oh, the ladies in the office told me where it was,” he said, ducking his head out of the way so that the locker door wouldn’t hit him.

 

“Okay, well, the bell doesn’t ring for another ten minutes so I’m gonna go sit with my friends in the cafeteria… you wanna come?” I offered, grabbing my bag from off the ground.

 

“Sure” He quietly responded, following me down the hall towards the cafeteria.

 

“I recognize your shirt, where did you get it from? It looks really familiar like I’ve seen it somewhere before.”

 

“Huh…huh…maybe you just saw it in a store,” he guessed, keeping his head low.

 

“No…it’s like I’ve seen someone wearing it, but I don’t think I know anyone who has that shirt,” I contemplated slowly, ruminating over family members’ and friends’ outfits as they flashed through my mind.

 

“Maybe you saw someone on the street with it on…” He spoke up, still keeping his head low.

 

“Maybe…well, here we are.” I announced as I took a seat at the same table we ate lunch at the day before. As I sat down, I noticed a new kid at our table. He had medium length, dirty blonde hair and freckles splattered across his cheeks and his slightly big nose.

 

This is Jacob Widmer. He’s new here,” my friend Kimberly stated, showing off her latest find. “Jacob, this is Remy and this is a new boy she also happens to be showing around, John Paul.”

 

“Hi…” I smiled shyly as I took my seat at the table, recognizing him as one of the kids I saw in the office yesterday. John Paul then stopped short in his steps after looking up at the boy and suspiciously glanced at him, almost as if questioning the boy with his stare.

 

“Hey, what’s up?” Jacob replied, flashing a mouth full of braces and ignoring John Paul’s sudden strange behavior.

 

“Jacob’s just moved here from Indiana and I found him trying to get in the school through the outside door to the teacher’s lounge, he hasn’t got a clue where anything is.” Kimberly giggled as Jacob nodded his head in agreement.

 

“Yeah…I was home schooled before this,” he said, “but my mom decided to put me in school here so I could make some friends.”

 

“Jacob’s in a grade above us, a junior,” Kimberly added thoughtfully.

 

“Hey man, you wanna go grab a Coke with me?” John Paul spoke up, getting up out of his chair as he flicked his head towards the drink machine.

 

“Yeah, sure,” Jacob responded, taking off from his seat at the table to join John Paul who was on the other side. As I watched the two walk away, I noticed they began to speak closely to each other, almost as if they were whispering. John Paul even seemed to be getting frustrated at one point, making fleeting hand gestures and taking worried glances back at the table.

 

“That’s weird…” I muttered to myself. It was almost like the two boys had known each other. John Paul’s strange reaction to when we first walked up the table suddenly flashed across my mind as I remembered his suspicious glances and knowing looks as he cautiously took a seat at the table, almost as if he didn’t want to attract attention. But Jason just ignored him, not even looking at or saying anything to him.

 

            “What’s weird?” Grace asked, interrupting my thoughts.

 

            “Nothing...nothing…” I muttered, keeping close eyes on the two boys as they continued to walk over to the drink machine. As I watched the two, I began to notice Jacob’s clothes; Ralph Lauren khaki shorts and a crisp, white oxford shirt that hung un-tucked from under his matching Ralph Lauren blue sweater vest. I was surprised to see that he dressed very nice, but was still home schooled back in Indiana. Couldn’t his parents have afforded a nice private school? Even here, why was he in public school? The private schools here were very nice and had all the latest technology.

 

“Why do you think Jacob was home schooled?” I wondered aloud to my friends.

 

“He told me that his parents only wanted the best for him so they hired this really good tutor who could attend to his every need.” Kimberly shrugged. “Why?”

 

“Well, he just seems very well off, that’s all. I mean money-wise…” I responded, taking a look at the clock hanging on the wall above. “Well, I better grab John Paul and get going, we have English next, Mrs. Peck, and we were late yesterday so need I say more?” Grabbing John Paul’s schoolbag from off the ground where it lay, I hurried over to the drink machine and arrived just as first bell rang.

 

“We better get going John Paul; Mrs. Peck’s going to be really mad if we’re late again. Here, I got your schoolbag for you.” I said, handing over his schoolbag as he just stared at me in bewilderment.

 

“Okay…well, I’ll see you later Jake.” John Paul waved as I led him out of the cafeteria. Jacob just walked back over to the table and followed Kimberly out as she made her way to her first class.

 

 
New Post 6/2/2008 11:27 PM
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simply amazing !


 
New Post 6/3/2008 5:09 PM
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Okay, here's Chapter 3 and I put some lyrics from a song in Camp Rock in it because I'm terrible at writing lyrics, poems, etc. , but pretend it just goes with the story. thanks!

Chapter 3

 

“Oh! Sorry dude…” The jock senior mumbled as he knocked into me while running down the hall.

 

“It’s okay…” I shyly responded, picking up my books that had fallen out of my hands as a result.

 

“Here, let me help you,” he smiled as he bent down to pick up some papers that had flown out of my binder. I then looked up into his face and realized that I hadn’t seen him around the school halls before and recognized him as one of the new kids I had seen in the office earlier this week. His wavy, light brown hair fluttered in front of the sunglasses he wore and the diamond earring that he wore in his right ear sparkled under the florescent light. Though his face sported interesting attire, his clothes were basically the same Abercrombie&Fitch shorts and sports t-shirt that all the jocks in the school wore.

 

“Dude! Are you coming?!” Brian Roe, the school’s quarterback, yelled from down the hall.

 

“Yeah! Hold up!” My current companion shouted back in response as he quickly jumped up to his feet and handed me my papers. “Again..sorry.” He mumbled before heading down the hall to join his friends. I watched as he joined his friends and began laughing along with them, acting like any normal high school boy. However, something about him seemed…different. I couldn’t tell if it was the way he picked up my books after he had accidentally knocked them down or the way he wore sunglasses inside and an earring in his right ear, but it nagged at me as I continued down the hall towards my locker. It was the end of the day on Wednesday and I was beat, ready to go home and snuggle up into my sweatpants and watch TV. John Paul had left early to go to some dentist appointment at lunch which left me alone for the rest of the day, a relieved, but unsettling feeling. Though having John Paul around was sometimes a hassle, it felt weird to be alone, without him following me around like a little kindergartener trailing his teacher. As I rounded the corner, heading towards my brother’s car, I noticed Jacob sitting on the outside steps, scribbling something down on paper.

 

“Hey,” I waved as I walked over to where he was sitting.

 

“Uh…h-hi,” he stuttered as he franticly tried to stuff the piece of paper into his school bag, but failing all the while.

 

Seeing my brother no where in sight, I sat down on the steps next to him, setting my bag onto the ground next to me. “What’s up?”

 

“Uh…nothing…just doing some homework,” he said, tilting the paper to where I couldn’t see it.

 

“You sure? You seem kind of anxious, everything alright?”

 

“Yeah, yeah, I’m fine.”

 

“Can I see what you’re writing?”

 

“Like I said, it’s just homework…”

 

“You sure? It doesn’t seem like just homework to me.” I then swiftly reached over and grabbed the paper, holding it up over my head and waving it around as he desperately tried grabbing it from my hands.

 

“Please, can I have it back? Please,” he begged solemnly as he effortlessly tried to rescue the paper.

 

“Why? What is it? A love letter?” I teased, playfully making faces at him.

 

“No…well not quite,” he mumbled, letting his head fall as he traced the patterns in the sidewalk with his fingers. Seeing that he had given up wrestling the paper from me, I slowly unfolded it, expecting a sappy love letter or careless doodle. As my eyes ran down the page, my heart began to beat faster and my face flushed.

 

“Jacob…this is beautiful,” I gasped as I continued to read the words that lay sprawled out on the crinkled paper.

 

“You really think so? You think it’s good?” He lifted his head, eyes sparkling with hope.

 

“Yeah…it’s really good,” I replied truthfully.

 

“I can sing it for you if you want?” he offered, taking the paper from my hands. I nodded, biting my lip as he straightened out the paper and began.

 

“Everytime I think I'm close to the heart….What it means to know just who I am…I think I've finally found a better place to start…Where no one ever seems to understand…I need to try to get to where you are…Could it be you're not that far?...You're the voice I hear inside my head…The reason that I'm singing…I need to find you…I gotta find you… And that’s it,” he blushed. “So what do you think?” Instead of responding, I just got up and hugged him.

 

“Well, I’ve got to go. I’ll see you tomorrow, bye.” I said, feeling the vibrations of my phone in pocket of my jeans. I then ran off the steps towards my brother’s car where he sat, his phone in hand.

 

“Where have you been?” he asked, hanging up the phone and starting the car.

 

“I was…with a friend,” I replied hesitantly as I smiled and looked out the window.

 

 

 

 
New Post 6/3/2008 7:07 PM
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Um...is it good so far?

 
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another word for amazing...uhm...second best thing I've ever read!! Now when do the Jonas's come in?!


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