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New Post 6/3/2008 9:06 AM
User is offline ames! [team edward]
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best friends (a one shot) 

okay guys so here is my first one shot.i didnt say names...but yeah. here you go.comment it. =]

It was a cool spring day and the sun was covered by clouds that seemed to cast shadows on the world. There was a couple, best friends sitting on a trampoline just laying and staring up at the sky, they seemed to be in their own world and so far from reality. The silence was something quite bearable as he looked at her profile. “What if it wasn’t supposed to be like this.” she spoke in a soft voice. “Be like what.” He answered her. “What if maybe we were supposed to have a perfect fairytale story, just like everyone else.” She said as she turned her face and looked into his deep brown eyes. “Then I guess that only God can tell us. There is no changing what happened. But there is no telling what the future holds.” He said as he looked back into her piercing brown eyes that seemed to be welling up with tears. Soon as she looked away he knew that she had tears rolling down her face. “Look at me.” he spoke as he turned her face towards his own. “It’s going to be okay. Things will get better. “ he said to her as he tried to whipe up the tears that were streaming down her face. “But what if I don’t get better and I lose you altogether.” She said choking on her own words. “As long as you are trying to get better, I am not going anywhere.” He said to her as he took her hand and squeezed it. “Promise?” she asked him pleadingly. “I promise.” He said still staring at her. She smiled. “There is that smile. The one that I have missed so much.” he said with his voice full of emotions. She turned over so that her stomach was facing down on the cool surface. He rubbed her back and he soon spoke. “Do you remember when I used to do this?” he asked her and she just nodded her head slightly. “Do you remember when you would try to take pictures of me and I wouldn’t let you.” she turned so that he could see her mascara covered face. “I got a picture of you, but you don’t know that.” He said as he laid down next to her. She turned onto her side as she shivered from the cool breeze that came blowing through the trees. “Cold much?” he asked her as he wrapped his arms around her body. They seemed to fit so perfectly around her torso. “Just a little.” She said as she giggled. “Don’t make me do this!” he said as he got up and started to tickle her. “Stop! I am going to pee my pants!” she begged him to stop. He stopped and laid his head against her stomach, leaving them both looking up at the setting sun. “What are you thinking about?” she asked him. “Nothing.” He said in a cold voice. “You are lying. Tell me what is wrong for real.” She asked as she played with his brown hair. “I’m just thinking. What if it is the same, no matter who you choose.” He said as he sat up looking into her teary eyed pupils. “What do you mean?” she asked as she too sat up. “Well I can joke with her and then she can sit here and play with my hair and then we can just talk. And I can do the same with you.” he said as he broke their eye contact with each other. “But it’s not. It’s just not the same. Every kiss and every hug is going to be different.” She said trying to reassure him of his regrets. “I guess.” He said as he turned back to her leaning in closer towards her. “I think it’s time for me to go.” She said as she crawled off the side of his trampoline. She walked towards her red car as the streetlamp shown down onto her face and made her eyes glisten. Following close behind her was her best friend. The stopped after she unlocked her car. “Are you just going to let me go then?” she said as she started to climb into her car. “No, come here.” He said as he pulled on her arm and spun her so that she was facing him. He wrapped his arms around her and she snuggled her face into chest, breathing in his scent that she was so familiar with. She looked up and saw that he was staring at her. She started to cry. “Shhh, don’t do that.” He said as he rubbed her back and drew his thumb over hear face, whiping the tears away and smudging her purple eyeliner. “I just wish that I could change so much. I am so sorry.” She said as she started so rake up sobs and her body tensed up in his arms. “I know you are. But all we can do is see what happens.” He said as he tried to reassure her. She looked up and her eyes seemed to pout at him. He lightly kissed her forehead as he released her from his arms. She looked away and down the road. He could tell that something was wrong. He again pulled her into his chest as she nuzzled her face into his white t-shirt. “I think that I made the biggest mistake of my life, 7 or 8 months ago.” she said, her voice muffled. “I know. So do I. But what happened is over.” He said as he looked down towards her. “It just hurts, knowing that I broke my best friend’s heart into a million pieces. No matter what you say. It is not going to be the same. It wasn’t over then and it still isn’t over.” She said as he kissed her forehead and she got up onto her tippy toes and kissed his lips, biting the bottom lip of his mouth leaving him begging for more. She climbed into her car as she left her face standing in the culdesac of his neighborhood. She said goodbye and wouldn’t be coming back. Not until he wanted her back.


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New Post 6/3/2008 9:19 AM
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Re: best friends (a one shot) 

comments.anyone?


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New Post 6/3/2008 10:39 AM
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Re: best friends (a one shot) 

WOW. I think my heart really stopped when i was reading this.

GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
New Post 6/3/2008 10:48 AM
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Re: best friends (a one shot) 

awhhh, that's so sad.

It's so cute!

It's unexplainable!

I LOVE THIS!

*sighs*

man..this is amazing!


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New Post 6/3/2008 10:54 AM
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Re: best friends (a one shot) 

OMG wow, that was amazing!!!! I loved it!!


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New Post 6/3/2008 11:11 AM
User is offline ames! [team edward]
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Re: best friends (a one shot) 

im glad you guys liked it!

im thinking of making this one shot into a fan fic...

it might be a little different but what do you guys think?

oh and illl need a name for it. =]


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New Post 6/3/2008 11:32 AM
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I think it sounds awesome! I deffo think youn should do it!


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New Post 6/3/2008 11:34 AM
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 [twilight] wrote

I think it sounds awesome! I deffo think youn should do it!

what do you think a name for it should be?


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New Post 6/3/2008 11:37 AM
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 ames loves nick! [81 days] wrote

 [twilight] wrote

I think it sounds awesome! I deffo think youn should do it!

 

what do you think a name for it should be?

Hmm... Maybe... Always my number one?

No, i really don't know, i'm not good at finding titles...


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New Post 6/3/2008 11:47 AM
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Re: best friends (a one shot) 

 [twilight] wrote

 ames loves nick! [81 days] wrote

 

 [twilight] wrote

I think it sounds awesome! I deffo think youn should do it!

 

what do you think a name for it should be?

 

Hmm... Maybe... Always my number one?

No, i really don't know, i'm not good at finding titles...

ahh.thats actually really good.i like it.im going to go post the prologue right now!


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