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 6/9/2008 7:19 PM
 
 Modified By TayJonas♥[Celebrity couple nickname...Torey, or Kaylor...which sounds better?]  on 6/9/2008 6:51:19 PM

I stared with a sudden loathing at a poster on a telephone pole. It had a picture of a girl, who looked somewhat like me. Under the picture it read:

"KATI JOHNSON AGE: 14 STAT: KIDNAPPED IF U HAVE ANY INFO, PLEASE CALL THIS NUMBER...."

I wasn't kidnapped, I was merely a runaway! I ripped it off, and threw it on the ground. I stomped to a nearby bench with all my stuff, and crossed my arms.

"Why doesn't anyone drive at 11:00 pm? I need to hitch a ride!!!" I whined to myself. I was planning on leaviing my non-cozy home in Wisconsin and find my true self in Hollywood, but all that was just fantasy.

'How do they know Kati was kidnapped? How do they know she wants to be found?' "Trust me," I whispered to no one in particular. 

"I don't want to be found!"

This story is for Kati. I'm probably gonna' change the title to: "The Last Night."  Comments are appreciated!

 

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 6/9/2008 7:26 PM
 

N e one like it?

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 6/9/2008 7:52 PM
 

does Kati like it so far? Should I continue?!

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 6/9/2008 7:55 PM
 

i like it i cant wait till more


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 6/9/2008 7:57 PM
 

finally a comment! See people it's as easy as that!!

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 6/9/2008 7:57 PM
 

i like it. :]

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 6/9/2008 8:16 PM
 

 

 

Prologue!

I stared with a sudden loathing at a poster on a telephone pole. It had a picture of a girl, who looked somewhat like me. Under the picture it read:

"KATI JOHNSON AGE: 14 STAT: KIDNAPPED IF U HAVE ANY INFO, PLEASE CALL THIS NUMBER...."

I wasn't kidnapped, I was merely a runaway! I ripped it off, and threw it on the ground. I stomped to a nearby bench with all my stuff, and crossed my arms.

"Why doesn't anyone drive at 11:00 pm? I need to hitch a ride!!!" I whined to myself. I was planning on leaviing my non-cozy home in Wisconsin and find my true self in Hollywood, but all that was just fantasy.

'How do they know Kati was kidnapped? How do they know she wants to be found?' "Trust me," I whispered to no one in particular. 

"I don't want to be found!"

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Chapter 1

The reason of my escape from home was to just be gone!! My mom became a really bad role model and I never knew my father. Of course I didn't want to be found or else I'd be taken back to live with my mom! My bluish green eyes started emitting tears. I stood up from my perch on the bench and started walking. Nowhere to go...

I walked all the way to the next town and stopped. There was no way I was gonna' get to Hollywood before the police stopped me. I sat down on the curb it was about 2 AM now. No cars were passing by, everyone was sleeping peacefully in their beds. Couldn't someone drive at night? What about giant diesel trucks? Nope, none. I took out my iPod, the only gift I actually cherished that my mom has given me. A very depressing song that expressed what I was feeling right now began playing. I looked down at the ground, mouthing the words to the song as I watched the ground.

"Is there anybody here...I know? Cuz' nothing's going right, and everything's a mess and nobody likes to be, alone!" I sang, longing to hear a voice. My voice was possibly the worst voice in the world. Well that's what I thought, and my mom. "Kati you're the worst daughter a woman could ever have, and quit singing, you'll never get anywhere in life with your voice!" Mom's voice echoed in my mind. I tried tuning it out, but it was inpossible. Nobody could tune out my mom's loud, obnoxious, scratchy old woman voice. I knew it would ring in my ears for the rest of my life.

A car passed me. I didn't see it but I knew it came past. Suddenly a man wa in my presence. "Young lady why aren't you at home?" the man asked. I looked up. I took an ear bud out. "Why aren't you at home?" the man repeated. I shrugged. "Do you need a lift?" the man asked. I shook my head. "Really? Oh well, I have extra room so you could have stayed in my truck." the man said. "On second thought...I do need a ride!" I said. "Where to?" the man asked. I suddenly remembered my grandparents...they lived in San Fransico. "San Fransico California." I said. "You live all the way there?" the man asked. I was puzzled, but I nodded. The man told me to get in his truck. I followed. The passenger seat was really weird and smelly but I learned to enjoy it that night.

Being found never felt so comforting!! I felt like people actually cared for me...even if it was a complete stranger!

How was chapter one?!

 

 

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 6/9/2008 8:21 PM
 

I love it!! i loved the prologue "I don't want to be found!!" thats was such a great begining!! Please post more soon!!

-courtney


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 6/9/2008 8:22 PM
 

tAyLoR♥[doesn't exist to the real world! Just in her fantasy world!] wrote

 

 

Prologue!

I stared with a sudden loathing at a poster on a telephone pole. It had a picture of a girl, who looked somewhat like me. Under the picture it read:

"KATI JOHNSON AGE: 14 STAT: KIDNAPPED IF U HAVE ANY INFO, PLEASE CALL THIS NUMBER...."

I wasn't kidnapped, I was merely a runaway! I ripped it off, and threw it on the ground. I stomped to a nearby bench with all my stuff, and crossed my arms.

"Why doesn't anyone drive at 11:00 pm? I need to hitch a ride!!!" I whined to myself. I was planning on leaviing my non-cozy home in Wisconsin and find my true self in Hollywood, but all that was just fantasy.

'How do they know Kati was kidnapped? How do they know she wants to be found?' "Trust me," I whispered to no one in particular. 

"I don't want to be found!"

________________________________________________________________________________

Chapter 1

The reason of my escape from home was to just be gone!! My mom became a really bad role model and I never knew my father. Of course I didn't want to be found or else I'd be taken back to live with my mom! My bluish green eyes started emitting tears. I stood up from my perch on the bench and started walking. Nowhere to go...

I walked all the way to the next town and stopped. There was no way I was gonna' get to Hollywood before the police stopped me. I sat down on the curb it was about 2 AM now. No cars were passing by, everyone was sleeping peacefully in their beds. Couldn't someone drive at night? What about giant diesel trucks? Nope, none. I took out my iPod, the only gift I actually cherished that my mom has given me. A very depressing song that expressed what I was feeling right now began playing. I looked down at the ground, mouthing the words to the song as I watched the ground.

"Is there anybody here...I know? Cuz' nothing's going right, and everything's a mess and nobody likes to be, alone!" I sang, longing to hear a voice. My voice was possibly the worst voice in the world. Well that's what I thought, and my mom. "Kati you're the worst daughter a woman could ever have, and quit singing, you'll never get anywhere in life with your voice!" Mom's voice echoed in my mind. I tried tuning it out, but it was inpossible. Nobody could tune out my mom's loud, obnoxious, scratchy old woman voice. I knew it would ring in my ears for the rest of my life.

A car passed me. I didn't see it but I knew it came past. Suddenly a man wa in my presence. "Young lady why aren't you at home?" the man asked. I looked up. I took an ear bud out. "Why aren't you at home?" the man repeated. I shrugged. "Do you need a lift?" the man asked. I shook my head. "Really? Oh well, I have extra room so you could have stayed in my truck." the man said. "On second thought...I do need a ride!" I said. "Where to?" the man asked. I suddenly remembered my grandparents...they lived in San Fransico. "San Fransico California." I said. "You live all the way there?" the man asked. I was puzzled, but I nodded. The man told me to get in his truck. I followed. The passenger seat was really weird and smelly but I learned to enjoy it that night.

Being found never felt so comforting!! I felt like people actually cared for me...even if it was a complete stranger!

How was chapter one?!

 

 

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i love it pms


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 6/9/2008 8:53 PM
 

Thank you for the comments!! Here's chapter 2!!

Chapter 2

When we finally got to San Fransisco two days later, he just dropped me off at a corner. He wasn't right in the head, I assumed. I took out a quarter. I went to the nearest payphone and dialed a number that was saved onto my iPod. "Hello?" an old voice greeted. "Grandma, it's Kati. Can I come stay with you?" I asked. "Of course Hun, you know where I live." Grandma said. The phone turned off, assuming Grandma had hung up. I stepped away from the phone booth. Where did Grandma live? I huffed a sigh.

I started walking, attracting stares from passers by. I loathed everyone in this world. Starting with that man in the black suit I just walked passed, who tripped me. Hurriedly I stood back up. My palms were stinging. I turned them upside down and looked. Stratches covered my palms. Probably from the hard pavement. With the agonizing pain in my hands, I walked more, my suitcase trailing behind.

With absolutely nowhere to go, I sat on the nearest bench. This wasn't going as I had planned. Suddenly throgh tear-srticken eyes, I saw a luxurious hotel across the way from me. It was labeled: "Camicko INN." I walked up to the rotating door. I stared at the building...how could I afford to stay here? I thought. Shrugging off that thought,  I waltzed right in. This hotel was beautiful, with the greek wallpaper and the red velvet carpet and a dangling chandelier(sp?) hanging above my head. I had never seen a place as beautiful as this before in my life...well besides the hospital. The hospital was beautiful because I didn't have to see my mom there.

"May I help you?" A young clerk asked. "Yeah, uhm...I need a room." I said. "Okay for how long?" the lady asked. "I don't know, two days?" I guessed. "Okay, 150$ upfront." the lady said, pushing all sorts of buttons on the cash register. "Uhm...I don't have that kind of money." I said. "Well then no room." the lady said. I sulked. No place for me to stay. I went ack outside. Passing a sign that read: "Hotel Performer wanted. No experience neccesary, just be able to sing! Comes with a free room, and a minimum wage of $6.50 per performance."

I ran back inside. "Ma'am do you have the money?" the lady asked me. "No." I said, regaining my breath. "Well there's nothing I can do." the lady said. "I can be the hotel performer!" I said. The lady glanced at me. "Can you sing?" th lady asked. "Can I sing? Dude, I was born crying out words from songs!" I lied. I was still doubting my singing talent. "Here's an application." the lady said, handing me a piece of paper and a pen. I sat on the floor in front of the desk and filled out the form. Thinking about my last question..."parent's name." I wrote down: "Dawn Johnson" which technically wasn't a lie. It was my mom's name.

I took it back to the lady. "Okay...

you have the job!"

How was chapter 2?

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