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New Post 6/9/2008 9:46 PM
User is offline Meg {Nick Chick} l{...pushin' me away ♥...}l
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"Break The Ice" a Kevin fanfic  
Modified By Meg {Nick Chick} l{...pushin' me away ♥...}l  on 7/24/2008 9:03:55 PM)

Okay, I'm not totally starting it, just thought I'd give a sneak preview....
IT HAS BEEN STARTED!!!!

Comments are appreciated!!
{siggie by me!!}

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Prologue

 

“And there she goes, three-turn, her signature move. I wonder if she’ll go for the loop jump. Oh! And she does and lands it perfectly!” Jennifer Bartlin announced.

“She’s so graceful out there on the ice. Just look at how nicely she handles herself.” Brett Jackson announced. “And there she goes on the two-foot spin!! Look at her go!”

“The judges are going to love that one! That’s going to rack her up some points” Jennifer said.

 

Ashley-Noel Sanders glided across the ice, following her routine that she’d been practicing for months. She was about to make Olympic-qualifiers, something she always got to but never made it past. She’d spent her entire life skating, all for the Olympic team. She had to make it this year, or else she’d completely lose all hope in everyone…especially herself.

 

“And she lands the jump!” Brett said into his microphone.

The crowd cheered loudly as she finished up her routine.

Ashley-Noel finished in the center of the ice, with her final pose and a huge smile on her face. The crowd threw flowers onto the ice and stuffed animals as the applauded, and she picked up one of the roses that had landed on the ground, waving and smiling as she skated off the ice.

 

 

“You were great Ash!” Lloyd, her coach, told her.

“Thanks” she said, breathlessly, taking a drink of her water.

“Let’s go see your score” Lloyd guided her over to the waiting area.

 

“And let’s see what this 20-year old skater scored!” Jennifer announced.

The scores appeared on the scoreboard, reading 8.8, 9.4, 10, 10, 8.5, and 9.5.

“And that’s it!! Ashley-Noel Sanders has made it to the Olympic qualifiers! Now all she has to do is make it past that and she’ll be on the U.S. Women’s Olympic Team!” Brett announced.

The crowd cheered, and Ashley gave her coach a hug.

“Thank you” she whispered to him.

“Hey, it was all you. And you still have to make it past qualifiers” he whispered back.

“I know, but if it weren’t for you, I would’ve given up a long time ago” she told him.

“You love skating, you would’ve kept going. With or without me and your parents pushing you” he said.

“Maybe, but I wouldn’t be doing it competitively.” Ashley laughed.

 

 

 

~Meanwhile~

 

“Don’t you think they get cold in those tiny outfits?” Nick asked, watching figure skaters on TV.

“I’d think so. They were like, nothing practically” Joe joked.

“She’s pretty” Kevin said, as a blonde girl waved to the camera, smiling as she got her amazing score.  

“Yeah, she is.” Nick agreed.

“Wait, isn’t that that girl whose like, dedicated herself to skating since she was, like, 8 or something” Joe asked

“They all have” Nick said.

“No, he’s right. One of them has been doing this her entire life, all for the Olympics” Kevin said.

“Whoa, that’s dedication, big time” Nick said.

“Seriously” Joe agreed.

“She is pretty though” Nick said.

“Yeah, she is” Joe agreed.

“What’s her name?” Nick asked.

“Ashley-Noel Sanders” Kevin told him, starring at the skater on the television.

 


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New Post 6/9/2008 10:37 PM
User is offline Meg {Nick Chick} l{...pushin' me away ♥...}l
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Re: Sneak peek at "Break The Ice" a Kevin fanfic 

No one likes it?!


Thanks Ari! First Concert On Valentine's Day In Houston!!
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New Post 6/9/2008 10:47 PM
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Re: Sneak peek at "Break The Ice" a Kevin fanfic 

ahhh i do

i love it!!!

the idea so far, the plot, the writing everything is fantabulous!!!

please please start this fic like now

i would love you forever!!!

kthanks

<3


KEVIN JONAS
 
New Post 6/9/2008 10:49 PM
User is offline wicked_cool
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Re: Sneak peek at "Break The Ice" a Kevin fanfic 

 Meg {A Proud Nick Chick} wrote

No one likes it?!

whoa, wait-a-minute!! Don't go thinking No one likes this amazing fic! 'cause I definately like it. =D
but then again, I am a No one so yeah, I guess No one likes it.

Hello I'm No one :) and I can't wait for more.

~Belles <3 [wants to be a Turtle when she grows up]

 


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New Post 6/9/2008 10:57 PM
User is offline Getcha Good♥[Is in love with 3 rockstars, 3 vampires, and a werwolf. this could be bad.]
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Re: Sneak peek at "Break The Ice" a Kevin fanfic 

meg that was awesome! u gotta post more!


JBF girlz(in no order) My Jonas Angels girls, My Superhero girls,Aaryn, Sam, Gabby,,Ashlynn, Catilin, Johanne,Megan, click 2 check out my ffs and oneshots




Rosalie:Is she even italian?
Emmet: Her name's Bella!


Edward: You killed it!
Bella:Oh well.

thanks meg 4 the bottom 1! :D
 
New Post 6/9/2008 10:59 PM
User is offline Meg {Nick Chick} l{...pushin' me away ♥...}l
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Re: Sneak peek at "Break The Ice" a Kevin fanfic 

Awwwwww!!Thanks guys! U rock!!

Belles, u are so a someone!! U are an awesome someone too!! =]

I'm typing up the next chapter!! =]


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New Post 6/9/2008 11:04 PM
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Re: Re: Sneak peek at "Break The Ice" a Kevin fanfic 

that was amazing!

cant wiat for the chapter : )


< thanks ari,molly&+laura!
 
New Post 6/9/2008 11:41 PM
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Re: Re: Sneak peek at "Break The Ice" a Kevin fanfic 

sweet! a new chapter! can't wait!

~Belles <3 [will try to be a 'someone']


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New Post 6/9/2008 11:45 PM
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Re: Re: Sneak peek at "Break The Ice" a Kevin fanfic 

haha yay!!!!

i love people typing up new chapter

it makes me extremely happy

hehe

love

<3


KEVIN JONAS
 
New Post 6/11/2008 12:18 AM
User is offline Meg {Nick Chick} l{...pushin' me away ♥...}l
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Re: Sneak peek at "Break The Ice" a Kevin fanfic 

Sorry it took so long!!

 

Chapter One

Ashley-Noel’s POV

 

“You were amazing honey!” Mom gave me a huge hug.

“Thanks Mom” I yawned.

I’d just skated my heart out. Now all I wanted to do was eat, take a shower, and go to sleep.

“Yes, you were. But you’ll have to be even more amazing next time if you want to go to the Olympics” Dad told me

“I know. I know” I assured him.

“So, what do you want for dinner pumpkin?” Mom asked.

I shrugged. “McDonalds?”

“Absolutely not! You have to stay in shape, and McDonald isn’t going to help you do that” My handler, Jessica, said.

“So? I think I deserve it” I said.

“No, you can’t get out of shape this far in the game. Do you want to win, or not?” Jessica asked

“Yes, I do” I mumbled.

“Now, how about we go to the vegetarian restaurant downtown? They just got a new salad bar!” Jessica said, trying to make that sound appetizing.

I groaned “I’m SICK of salad!! I’m going to turn into a rabbit!”

“And there’s nothing wrong with that!” Lloyd said, trying to convince me. He liked Jessica, it was a bit obvious.

“Yes there is. I don’t want a little tail and floppy ears!” I joked.

“Okay Ash, we need to get serious. How about we go for Chinese, and you can have a vegetarian selection? No fat there!” Jessica said joyfully

“I’m not a vegetarian. I like my meat” I said

“Well, no shame in being a vegetarian. It keeps you healthy, strong, and you don’t have to worry about fried garbage, like McDonalds” Jessica said.

This made no sense. I was too tired to argue with them though

“Fine” I mumbled.

“Great! Downtown it is!” Jessica exclaimed.

I groaned. “Ashley-Noel, stop complaining. Without us, you’d be totally out of shape from eating McDonalds” Jessica told me.

I rolled my eyes “Whatev”

 

 

“Ashley, eat” Mom told me, as I pushed salad around on my plate. I was starving, but not for rabbit food.

I finally just stuffed some of the salad into my mouth, because I was starving.

 

“Okay, let’s go!” Jessica said about 30 minutes later of me pushing my food around.

I had a stash of chocolate in my suitcase, they didn’t know about it, so I could go eat that later.

“Ash needs her rest! Practice 6 am tomorrow!” Lloyd said.

 

I groaned and climbed into our rental car.

“Ashley-Noel, please try to act excited. They’re looking out for what’s best” Mom told me.

“Because that’s what they’re paid to do” I mumbled, and put my iPod earplugs into my ears, putting it on my favorite playlist.

 

When You Love Someone

And They Break Your Heart

Don’t Give Up

Have Faith Restart

 

I listened to my favorite band, the Jonas Brothers. They were incredible, so positive. They’d helped me get through the days that were hard, when I thought about giving up it all, and flushing my life down the toilet.

 

I owed some of my success to them. Actually, 98.7% of my positive energy was because of them. The other percent was from my best, best friend forever, Lisa, and chocolate (the all important chocolate. Also known as a girl’s best friend. That, and her credit card, or, daddy’s credit card…just some access to cash)

 


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