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New Post 6/11/2008 4:43 AM
User is offline Corinne Marie [Live Like You Were Dying]
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Fanfic Idea :] Feedback? 
Modified By Corinne Marie [Live Like You Were Dying]  on 6/11/2008 2:45:01 AM)

“I love you Megan,” Joe said softly from the other side of the couch, his attention slowly drifting away from yet another chick flick that was playing on the television.

“Aww Joe, I love you too. You’re the best friend I could ever ask for!” Megan exclaimed happily. Friend. Every time Megan reminded him that they were only friends, his heart sank a little bit more. No matter how much Joe hoped and prayed that they could be more than friends, he knew it wasn’t possible; at least as long as she was still going out with Marcus. Just the thought of Marcus made Joe mad. He didn’t know much about him, but he knew one thing. He didn’t like him.

Joe thoughts were interrupted by Megan slowly sliding up next to him and resting her head on his shoulder. Joe looked down slightly to see dark bruises covering her arm.

He shot up out of his seat instantly and grabbed her arm to get a better look.

“Megan?! What happened??” Joe exclaimed, jumping out of his seat.

“Its nothing Joe. I was just being a klutz.” Megan mumbled, looking down at her lap.

“He did this to you didn’t he? Didn’t he?!” Joe roared, his face getting red with anger.

“Joe please, just drop it. If he knows you know, he might hurt you.” Megan pleaded.

“How long? How long has this been going on?!” Joe demanded.

“Five months.” Megan whispered.

“Five months!!?? Megan, why didn’t you tell me?” Joe said, tears coming to his eyes at the thought of someone hurting her.

“He told me not to tell you,” Megan said, her eyes remained staring at her hands.

“Megan! You can’t just let him keep doing this to you!” Joe exclaimed.

“Joe! Don’t you understand? He’s a dangerous person. He threatens me. If I ever broke up with him, he’d hurt me even worse. I can only imagine what he’d do to you.” Megan said through the steady stream of tears traveling down her face.

As soon as Joe was about to speak, Megan’s cell phone interrupted him.

She quickly grabbed her phone out of her pocket and looked at who was trying to contact her. As soon as her eyes scanned the name on the phone her face paled.

“Megan? Who is it?” Joe said in a concerned tone.

“I-Its Marcus. I h-have to get home. Right now.” She replied in a hurried voice.

“Why??” Joe questioned, a confused look spread across his face.

“He’s coming.”

 

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New Post 6/11/2008 4:49 AM
User is offline Trista. :]
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omg. you have to continue with this! it sounds really good already and the plot seems really interesting =]

Continue!


 
New Post 6/11/2008 4:51 AM
User is offline Corinne Marie [Live Like You Were Dying]
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Thank you! I'll probably continue :]


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New Post 6/11/2008 4:53 AM
User is offline luckieCrystal323 [♥]
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Re: Fanfic Idea :] Feedback? 

Corinne....am i going to get another story by you that has me at the end of my seat? cuz if you continue this...i'm thinking that the answer to my question will be yes. i love it already and you could totally count on me reading it. =]


My Stories and Joint Stories
Who's The Dog?
Childhood Memories Turn To Teenage Woes (CSKS Joint)
Something in the Music (joint with Ashley and Corinne)
Captured In The Moment {Kevin ff}
My Oneshots
 
New Post 6/11/2008 4:53 AM
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your welcome =) and i would totally read it if you did continue =D


 
New Post 6/11/2008 4:56 AM
User is offline Corinne Marie [Live Like You Were Dying]
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Re: Fanfic Idea :] Feedback? 

 luckieCrystal323 [wants the heat to let up some♥] wrote

Corinne....am i going to get another story by you that has me at the end of my seat? cuz if you continue this...i'm thinking that the answer to my question will be yes. i love it already and you could totally count on me reading it. =]

Aww Crystal, your comments always make me smile :] even though I feel so awful because what I really should be doing is writing my chapter for Something In The Music. ugh I'm a badddddd person.


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New Post 6/11/2008 4:59 AM
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Wow...*drools*...

LOL sorry Corinne, I got distracted by the banner in your sig. But yeah, this is really good so far! Please continue! :D

*whispers* and go read my fic too please! i love getting new readers! =)


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New Post 6/11/2008 5:01 AM
User is offline Corinne Marie [Live Like You Were Dying]
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 skittles08 wrote

Wow...*drools*...

LOL sorry Corinne, I got distracted by the banner in your sig. But yeah, this is really good so far! Please continue! :D

*whispers* and go read my fic too please! i love getting new readers! =)

Haha thanks :] and don't worry, I find myself starring at that banner for hours on end ;)

I'll definitely check out your fic :]


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New Post 6/11/2008 5:04 AM
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 Corinne Marie [yeah you're so jaded] wrote

 luckieCrystal323 [wants the heat to let up some♥] wrote

 

Corinne....am i going to get another story by you that has me at the end of my seat? cuz if you continue this...i'm thinking that the answer to my question will be yes. i love it already and you could totally count on me reading it. =]

 

Aww Crystal, your comments always make me smile :] even though I feel so awful because what I really should be doing is writing my chapter for Something In The Music. ugh I'm a badddddd person.

you're not a bad person Corinne. trust me. i know how it is....you should be working on one thing but instead you're working on something else entirely. you'll get the chapter for Something In The Music done, when you get it done. but on another note....i'm happy to know that i can always make you smile with my comments. =]


My Stories and Joint Stories
Who's The Dog?
Childhood Memories Turn To Teenage Woes (CSKS Joint)
Something in the Music (joint with Ashley and Corinne)
Captured In The Moment {Kevin ff}
My Oneshots
 
New Post 6/11/2008 5:08 AM
User is offline Corinne Marie [Live Like You Were Dying]
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Re: Fanfic Idea :] Feedback? 

Thank you <3 I just hope it doesn't take me too long :]


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