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New Post 6/12/2008 3:58 PM
User is offline Ashley (is back)
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Even Cliches Can Move You (a Kevin story) Take a Breath (epilogue) COMPLETE. 
Modified By Ashley (is back)  on 6/23/2008 5:45:31 PM)

I have no idea how I came up with this, but whether you read it or not, I'm writing this.

Enjoy, and thank you.

 

 

 

 

S.O.S.

It’s clichéd and overused, but perhaps some of the best romances ever written. It’s the “best friend turned soul mate story,” and while they all end up happily and typically share the same plots, it’s the bond that you form with the characters while reading the story that sets some apart.

This may or may not catch your interest. If you’re into extremely cheesy, often pointless plots and nonsensical reasoning this is probably your type of fiction. If you want well-worded, deep and thought-provoking you may want to look somewhere else.

As most stories do, this one begins with a girl. We don’t know her name at the beginning, but we shortly find out that it’s Lauren, Ren for short. Her green eyes are glued to a novel, the words aided by her imagination creating a world she adores, one that she wishes she could live in.

She’s interrupted by a loud chuckle from across the room, and she rolls her eyes when she sees her three best friends playing video games. On closer inspection only two are playing and one is cheering them both on, changing her cheers for whoever is in the lead at that given moment. It’s an intense game, and the plastic guitars provided for the game are getting quite the workout as the two battle each other.

Once the game is finished the two collapse on the sofa next to the cheering girl with a sigh. It ended in a near tie, the male player winning by just a smidge. The girl would demand a rematch, but she knows the outcome would be the same.

Ren returns to her book, trying to return to where she’d left off. She gets about a sentence in before she’s interrupted by the curly haired boy who just won the video game. He says nothing, just hovers over her for a few moments before her eyes snap to his hazel ones in irritation.

“What Kevin?” she snaps, putting her book aside. She should know better than to think she would be able to read with him, Ashley, and Melissa spending the day at her house.

Kevin smiles, used to her random flares of temper. He jokes that it’s because of all the red hair she has, but he really figures it’s the stress and odd situations she often lands in that does it. A single curl falls between his eyebrows, and he pushes it away with his hand.

“Let’s do something fun.” He says, plopping down on the loveseat next to her. He puts his arm around her in a friendly manner and Ashley and Melissa’s heads pop up excitedly at the thought of having an adventure.

“I was before you interrupted me.” Ren said, no longer angry but not wanting to give in too easy.

“You read too much,” he replied. “Let’s go to the beach or something.”

“Ooh! The beach!” Ashley says excitedly, anticipation written all over her face.

“Yeah, let’s go!” Melissa agreed, the urge to swim running through her veins.

“But guys I—“

“We’re going to the beach!” Ashley interrupted, her face determined.

Ren just shook her head, knowing that she couldn’t get out of this beach trip even if she tried. “You need help, the lot of you.” She said before leaving the living room to pack her things.

To the beach she’d go…but that didn’t mean she would like it.

So the story begins, and you know where it’s headed. The lines between friends and lovers are not yet blurred, but you get the feeling that there’s something bubbling beneath the surface. Or maybe you’re just telling yourself that while you wait for more.

Either way, something is going to happen.

 


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New Post 6/12/2008 4:02 PM
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Re: Even Cliches Can Move You (a Kevin story) 

GO REN!
Hahah Ashley
Kevin AGAIN
I love it
LOVE IT
Seriously though Ren set Kevin straight.
He needs it


Funny(s) of the week:

Miss Cabbage&Miss Spinach
*talking about visiting Crystal*
Ahah, awhh you guys should take a zillion pictures :]

we will trust me we will.
and there will be DOZENS of pictures of her brother too lol
cause i luff him : )
Ahaha, her brother? Is he cute/hot? ahah :]
Does that make me sound like a perv if he's like a little kiddo? ahah
hahah her brother is cute.
He's blond with blue eyes and big*somethingcrystaldoesn'tneedtoknowisaidhere* : )
he's 15, so you aren't the pedophile that would be me.
Oooh! He's the same age as me! -high fives Crystal's brothahh- Wicked :]
cause we are vegetables. & that's just the way we roll.
 
New Post 6/12/2008 4:04 PM
User is offline Bonnie [8.18.08]
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Re: Even Cliches Can Move You (a Kevin story) 

 Ashley [<3's nick. thanks for best nick writer guys!] wrote

Ren just shook her head, knowing that she couldn’t get out of this beach trip even if she tried. “You need help, the lot of you.” She said before leaving the living room to pack her things.

Haha, that was my favorite part.

I wish I lived near a beach. Actually I do. But that's like 4 hours away. So not really.

Anyways, it's amazing, just like you!  =]

Post more when you can!


Fiction:
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Readers Needed!

 
New Post 6/12/2008 4:04 PM
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Re: Even Cliches Can Move You (a Kevin story) 

I'm confused at why you're writing fanfics when you should be writing best sellers!

You + writing = Meant to be

and when you're famous for writing the next big book like harry potter or something I'm gonna be saying 'yeh I totally used to comment her fanfics, I knew she was gonna be big then'

 


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New Post 6/12/2008 4:13 PM
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Re: Even Cliches Can Move You (a Kevin story) 

Gosh darnit! I'm hooked again. xD

I love this! Please keep writing.

*Also, I agree with Devvo.*


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New Post 6/12/2008 4:18 PM
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Re: Even Cliches Can Move You (a Kevin story) 

wow. this is incredible. i love the point of view you have on the story and the introduction- its really cool & different!

love it!!!!!!!!!!

<3 emily


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New Post 6/12/2008 4:19 PM
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Re: Even Cliches Can Move You (a Kevin story) 

Oh Ash.......this is so perfect. It really is, in every sense of the word. The story is intriguing and fanciful, and yet so relatable at the same time. I love the speaker's voice. Something about it gives the story this almost....ethereal quality. It does sound like some sort of fairytale. And how on earth do you know me so well? XD I swear you know me better than I do with the way you wrote this. But oh gosh--here comes the next batch of tears. It was just absolutely, astoundingly, awe-inspringly perfect. I can see why you went with your gut (like you're supposed to!) here. It's gorgeous. And meant to happen. I just.....I really, this story is something big. It's amazing, and I can't find find the right words to express exactly what it does to me. You know I've always been a fan of fairy tales. That's just one more reason to add to the list of reasons I love this story.

<3 Ren <3


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New Post 6/12/2008 4:21 PM
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Re: Even Cliches Can Move You (a Kevin story) 

 perfervid_heart wrote

Oh Ash.......this is so perfect. It really is, in every sense of the word. The story is intriguing and fanciful, and yet so relatable at the same time. I love the speaker's voice. Something about it gives the story this almost....ethereal quality. It does sound like some sort of fairytale. And how on earth do you know me so well? XD I swear you know me better than I do with the way you wrote this. But oh gosh--here comes the next batch of tears. It was just absolutely, astoundingly, awe-inspringly perfect. I can see why you went with your gut (like you're supposed to!) here. It's gorgeous. And meant to happen. I just.....I really, this story is something big. It's amazing, and I can't find find the right words to express exactly what it does to me. You know I've always been a fan of fairy tales. That's just one more reason to add to the list of reasons I love this story.

<3 Ren <3

WOW Ren make me feel like I have no literary skills
Nice long sentences and paragraph there.
LOL
<3 Stephani


Funny(s) of the week:

Miss Cabbage&Miss Spinach
*talking about visiting Crystal*
Ahah, awhh you guys should take a zillion pictures :]

we will trust me we will.
and there will be DOZENS of pictures of her brother too lol
cause i luff him : )
Ahaha, her brother? Is he cute/hot? ahah :]
Does that make me sound like a perv if he's like a little kiddo? ahah
hahah her brother is cute.
He's blond with blue eyes and big*somethingcrystaldoesn'tneedtoknowisaidhere* : )
he's 15, so you aren't the pedophile that would be me.
Oooh! He's the same age as me! -high fives Crystal's brothahh- Wicked :]
cause we are vegetables. & that's just the way we roll.
 
New Post 6/12/2008 4:21 PM
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Re: Even Cliches Can Move You (a Kevin story) 

Hey new story.

I told you last night I wanted one....and I got one :) Yeshhhh

 

<3 moree?


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New Post 6/12/2008 4:26 PM
User is offline Ashley (is back)
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Re: Even Cliches Can Move You (a Kevin story) 

I'm honestly trying really hard not to burst into tears...don't ask why, but I've been really emotional the past couple of days. From angst to reparations, my life feels like its come full circle.

But your response to this completely baffles me. In the best way. I'm so thankful I can barely form words to type. This story idea just came to me out of nowhere, and while writing it (which I'm still doing) I just feel like this story is what I should be focusing on right now.

I know I have other fics, and I know people are waiting on updates on those, but please let me do this for right now. I think it's what I need to do.

For all of you who've commented, thank you. It means the world to me.

Ugh, now I don't know what else to say.

I'm bad with words. It's a fact.


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