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'Should've Said No' VOTING!!!! 
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Here are our story entries for the Should've Said No Competition!

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New Post 6/12/2008 7:33 PM
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Story # 1

I walked into the room. It was my first day of a new school and i was the new girl. eveyone looked at me like i was the freak. But except him. He had brown curly hair. he was about 5'6  brwon eyes and a dog tag on his neck. i never seen a guy like him before. he was what i always wanted in a guy. He was perect for me.Boy was so wrong about that.

Hi. my name Kati. Kati Butler. I am a new student. I said to the teacher
Ahh yes umm take a seat next to Nick Jonas. Raise your hand Nick. the teacher asked him.
He rose his hand. He was around a crowd of football jocks. He looked like he knew all them.
Umm ok thanks. I told the teacher. I walked to the back of the room
Now class, I'm....she started but i was intrupted
"Hey, I'm Nick." he said
"I'm Kati."
"Where did you move from?"he asked
"Umm. Actually London. But I used to live in New Jersey."
"Oh. If you need ant help being shown around town or school, it would be an honor to take a pretty girl like you and show her."
I started to blush. I mean you dont have a really hot guy that might be a jock showing you around town and the school.
"I love that."
"Let me see your schudule." he said as he graped it out of my hand
"1st lanuge arts
2nd gym
3rd science
4th social studies
5th spanish
2nd lunch period
6th math
7th chorus
8th study hall
omg you have all the same classes with me" he said
"Wow thats great."
"Umm mrs. Butler is there anything you like to share with the classs" the teacher asked
No. I am just having a great day so far. I looked at Nick. His eyes glowing and everything. I didnt know at the time that those eyes didnt mean the truth.

School was going great. I meet Nick family. Joe was the funny one. Kevin was the sweet one. And Frankie was the cutie of the family. After dinner one night at his place, we decide to go for a walk around the lake. It was fall. So leaves would fall and we would hear crunching everytime we walked. We arrived to a swing. I sat down and Nick just stood there
"Nick why are you standing?" I asked
"Just admiring the view." he told me
"Oh. Nick thanks for everything these last couple of weeks. You have been a huge help. Most guys wouldnt do that but you are not like them at all. You are different."
"Kati. I have never like this before."
"What you mean?"
"I mean that I have tons of girlfriends in the past but I never felt like this towards a girl before."
"Nick what are you asking me.?"
"Will you be my girlfriend?"
"Yess i love that. I said as i gave him a hug. I just shouldnt told him no and just walked away, but i didnt."

The next couple of months were the best months of my life or so I thought. Nick and I did everything with each other. He helped me write this song and even decided to sing along and have his own voice in it.

I've always been the kind of girl
That hid my face
So afraid to tell the world
What I've got to say
But I have this dream
Right inside of me
I'm gonna let it show, it's time
To let you know
To let you know

This is real, this is me
I'm exactly where I'm suppose to be, now
Gonna let the light, shine on me
Now I've found, who I am
There's no way to hold it in
No more hiding who I want to be
This is me

Do you know what it's like
To feel so in the dark
To dream about a life
Where you're the shining star
Even though it seems
Like it's too far away
I have to believe in myself
It's the only way

This is real, This is me
I'm exactly where I'm suppose to be, now
Gonna let the light, shine on me
Now I've found, who I am
There's no way to hold it in
No more hiding who I want to be
This is me

Nick part
You're the voice I hear inside my head
The reason that I'm singing
I need to find you, I gotta find you
You're the missing piece I need
The song inside of me
I need to find you, I gotta find you

Me singing
This is real, this is me
I'm exactly where I'm suppose to be, now
Gonna let the light, shine on me
Now I've found, who I am
There's no way to hold it in
No more hiding who I want to be
This is me

Nick sang this as I sang the part abouve
You're the missing piece I need
The song inside of me (this is me)
You're the voice I hear inside my head
The reason that I'm singing
Now I've found, who I am
There's no way to hold it in
No more hiding who I want to be
This is me.

We finshed writing it up.
"Nick that was amazing" I told him
"Well its about u." He said
"Aww" i said as i gave him a kiss
Suddenly his phone started to vibrate.
"I have to take this. be right back." He said
Ok. it was his parents he always told me. But sometimes i got the idea it was some other girl. But i knew Nick would never do that to me.
When he came back into the room we started to write a little more.
"Kait i have to leave at 6:30 cuz i need to be home for dinner" he told me
"Ok it 6:15. You better leave now"I said
"Thanks baby. I love you." he said as he walked to the door
"Love you too." I said as he walked out the door.

I closed my door and went back up to my room and praticed the song
My phone started to vibrate
I looked at my phone

****1 new text****
It was from Gossip Girl
It said
Looks like N is having fun with her. And its not K. And this isnt the first time N has done something like this. K should have a leash on him.
xoxo
Gossip Girl

 I couldnt believe it. He promised me that he would never do any of this kind of crap. Everytime i wasnt next to him or near him, he was with anyother girl. I heard rumors about this kind of stuff Nick did, but I never told him. This must be the guilt I have been feeling since I meet him. We were perfect, but now I cant take it anymore. I picked up my phone and dialed his number

"Nick. I you know what you have done"
"What you mean baby?" he asked as he sounded like nuthing was wrong
"Dont play that stupid baby crap on me. Its not going to work anymore. I thought you meant forever. Well you know what have fun finding your true one cuz that girl isnt me. And I cant believe I all you lies. WE ARE OVER AND THAT IS FINAL". i said as I closed my phone and threw it on my bed.

I went to my journal and started to write. I finshed writing and put down my gutiar. And fell asleep singing the song in my head. The talent show was the next day and I had a perfect plan.

I got to the school and see everyone was getting ready to perform. I went up to my best friend who was the annoucer of the show and told her the plan. She gave me a hug and told me it was a perfect plan. I walked away smiling about tonight.

"1 mintue, Kati" said Doug
"Ok."
"Now here my best friend Kati, singing a song that she just wrote last night." she annouced.
I walked on stage. I looked around to see if he was here. Of course he was. He was in the 4th row staring right at me
"Hey you guys. I am Kati. And mostly all of you guys know me for dating Nick Jonas. Well tonight I have a little song for him. Nick can you come up here." Everyone was cheering and telling Nick to get that. But he didnt now what was going to happen next. "Hey Nick, I have a song for you and I think it tottaly relates to you. here it goes." I started to strum my guitar and start to play. I started to sing

It's strange to think the songs we used to sing
The smiles, the flowers, everything: is gone
Yesterday I found out about you
Even now just looking at you: feels wrong
You say that you'd take it all back, given one chance
It was a moment of weakness and you said yes...

[Chorus:]

You should've said no, you should've gone home
You should've thought twice before you let it all go
You should've know that word, bout what you did with her
Would get back to me...
And I should've been there, in the back of your mind
I shouldn't be asking myself why
You shouldn't be begging for forgiveness at my feet...
You should've said no, baby and you might still have me

You can see that I've been crying
And baby you know all the right things: to say
But do you honestly expect me to believe
We could ever be the same...
You say that the past is the past, you need one chance
It was a moment of weakness and you said yes...

[Repeat Chorus]

I can't resist... before you go, tell me this
Was it worth it...
Was she worth this...

No... no no no...

[Repeat Chorus]

I finshed the song.  I started to speak."Ladies for the longest time, this boy who I thought would help me and loved me was a cheater. No many how many times he says I love you, dont believe it cuz its not the truth and it will never be the truth"
Nick was all red. He was really piss.ed, but he got a taste of his own medicine. This is what he gets with messing with me.

Now I am waiting in my dressing room. About to sing this song to millions of my fans on the last night of my tour. My life chaged so much after that night. Everyone was happy that finally one of the girls that dated Nick Jonas is speaking out and speaking the truth. Everytime I sang it I think about the times I should just said no but I was young and inlove. Every girl is like that. But I have done moved on.

**Knock Knock**
Hey. Omg Joe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I screamed
Hey I have missed you. He said as he handed me some flowers
"I have missed you so much baby. I cant believe this is your last night."
Me too. I said
"Kati we need you". Someone said as I kissed Joe.
"Come on. He said as he reached out his hand
"Ok." I said as I took Joe hand. Hey I never said dating his older brother was a bad choice for me. Besides he is so much funnier and cuter than Nick will ever be.


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New Post 6/12/2008 7:37 PM
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Re: Should've Said No VOTING 
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Story #2

 

My One Regret. 

Kevin’s POV


Am I happy? It seems as if I have no reason not to be. I’m in band with my brothers, and we’ve gone from high school performances to big, blown out, sold out arena tours. Our self-titled CD has gone platinum, and we've got thousands… no millions of girls that would kill to be with us. So, there’s no reason for me to be upset right? But sometimes, when I’m up on that stage singing and playing my guitar, I look onto the crown and see girls, cheering, crying even fainting for us. Sure, I love my fans... but sometimes I just wish that her face would be in the crowd. I wish that she would be standing, front row with her perfect smile. She really would be the only one I see. It’s her face, that smile that makes me wonder, if I could go back in time, I would change my mind. I can’t help but think that... I should’ve said no, said no to a big life of fortune and fame.... all because of her.

I remember it like it was yesterday. We were in my living room, alone. Her head was rested on my lap, while I played with her blonde, wavy locks. I could feel her tears, seeping into my jeans, but I was okay with that. 

“It will be okay” I comforted her. “You’ll be okay” 

“No, I won’t” She breathed as she trembled. “What am I suppose to do without you Kevin?”

“You won’t be without me Shelbee” I replied, as I kissed the top of her head, “I’m only a phone call away.” 

“That’s not good enough.” Shelbee sighed. “I’d rather have you here with me.”

“Kevin….” Joe’s voice calling for me snapped me out of my flashback. I was now in reality, back in the same four walls of my dressing room. The rest of my band, my parents, and little Frankie surrounded me.

“Huh?” I replied to my brother. 

“Are you ready for the show?”  I nodded as I huddled up with the rest of the crowd, and said our prayers. 

The show dragged on. Finally, it was over. Another night without her. When the show was over, I looked at my cell, out of habit. Like always, no missed calls, no new text messages.  I sighed inwardly. I miss her voice, I miss hearing her laugh on the other line. 

Days droned by which turned into months. But no matter how much time has passed, I still miss Shelbee just as much as I did when we just left

It was the day of my 20th birthday, and we were back in my hometown of Wyckoff, New Jersey. I was with my family in Rita’s Ice’s. A big ice cream cake was laid out in front of me, with 20 candles floating gently above it.

“Make a wish” My mother whispered in my ear. I closed my eyes, and wished for one thing. The thing that I have been wishing for since we left. Every 11:11, shooting star and birthday wish since then was dedicated to her. I wish she would come.  I blew out the candles. Not one flame stayed alive.  The rest of the day was fairly simple. I opened my presents, and watched Joe and Nick fighting over… who knows what. 

Nighttime rolled by slowly, and when it did, I decided to take a walk. I needed time to myself Time to think, and reflect. It was a really quiet evening, all I could hear, were the crickets chirping and the sound of my own feet hitting the pavement. I didn’t realize where I was going, or what time it was. I stopped, and looked around me only to find that I was in front of Shelbee’s house. My heard thumped as I swallowed the big lump in my throat. This was fate. I didn’t mean to stop in front of her house, it just happened. After a few long minutes,  I decided to go to up, and knock on the door. 

“Kevin?”  I heard her soft voice coming from behind me. I swiftly turned around. And there she was. Her hair was shorter than I remember, and her face seemed to have more wisdom. But she was still beautiful. If not, even more.

“Shelbee” I felt my cheeks tighten as I smiled. She smiled right back. The smile that I haven’t seen in three years. I saw tears form in her eyes, as mine copied hers. 

“Kevin!!”  She repeated, I opened up my arms as she ran to fill them; I felt her headrest on my shoulders as I held her in a long embrace. “I can’t believe its really you”

“I missed you so much baby”  I breathed in her ear. “Now, we can finally be together” 

She let go of me and wiped her tears way. “Together?” She gulped

“Yeah” I replied. “I mean. I love you, and I never stopped. Ever since I left, I couldn’t get my mind off you. I was miserable without you Bee, and then, I ended up at the front of your doorsteps. Isn’t this fate?”

She ignored my question. “Kev, I have a boyfriend” 

My heart stopped. “A boyfriend? But what about us?  Didn’t our relationship mean anything to you?” 

“Kevin” She sighed. “We were only seventeen, teenagers”

I gulped, and waited for her to finish. 

“I mean, what we had was great. But, now I love Derek. I love you too, but I moved on. I mean, if you didn’t leave, we definitely could have been together still. But what you did.  It really hurt me, and all I wanted to do was forget you…”

Her words pieced in my heart. 

“…But I know that was wrong. I know, you are here now, but for how long?”

“Baby” I grabbed her into another hug “Im never going to leave you again. You hear me?” 

“Kevin” She let go for the second time. “Im sorry. You’re too late” 

“But…”

“Look, Moving on was the hardest thing that I ever had to do. But I did it. And if I can, so can you. I bet, you can find another girl someone who will knock you off your feet. I will always love you Kevin, but there’s someone out there, who will love you more than I do. You’re a great guy Kevin, you’re so strong. So please, for my sake, find someone who will make you smile no matter what okay. And, if you ever need me, I am only a phone call away.” Shelbee rested her hand on my cheek and then kissed it. “I love you Kevin” 

And just like that, she was gone. She left, just like I did many years ago. She left with nothing but her words. Her words that I will never forget. Her words, that made me think about how I left her. My one regret. 

 


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New Post 6/12/2008 7:38 PM
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Re: Should've Said No VOTING 

Story #3

Should've said No


    Nick's POV

    You'd think that being in the public eye for so long would teach us a few things, right?  Like, how to dodge tricky questions, how to use fake names at hotels, and how to hide from crazed fans.  Well, Joseph has picked up 2 out of 3 of those things.  As I sit in the waiting room at the hospital, let's recap how I got here, shall we?

  

    The flight from New York to L.A. was long and tiring.  Frankie sat with his DS the whole time, Joe was studying for a test that we had, Kevin was strumming away at his guitar, and I just couldn't focus!  I had to be alone to work on the song, but I guess I just couldn't. 

    The plane landed and we were finally free to relax in out our own home for the first time in months.  Personally, I was beat, but Joe still had his five-year old type of energy and was running all around the house screaming, "Home Sweet Home".  I wasn't quite sure how he did it.  Mom and Dad said he was born that way, but it still amazed me.  Kevin headed up to unpack and Frankie sat and watched TV, which meant I could finally get some alone time.  Or, at least, I thought.   

    "Hey Nick, mom wanted you, me, and Kevin to run to the store.", Joe said, walking into the room.
    "Why does it take three people to go?", I asked.  Joe gave me the same look mom would have and I knew that meant to just go along with it.  He was scarily good at that glare.  I followed behind him down the steps and into the living room.
    "Are you ready, guys?", asked Kevin as he slipped on his shoes and grabbed his keys.  We both nodded.  I grabbed a large pair of sunglasses and a hat to shield my identify.  Kevin did the same.  Joe, on the other hand, only opted for the glasses.  So, as you can imagine, his hair pretty much gave it all away.
    "Joe, you aren't going to go out like that, are you?", Kevin asked with a stern voice.  Mom looked at him too, shaking her head.
    "I'm warning you, Joseph.  You know how crazy those girls get."  He just shrugged his shoulders and reluctantly grabbed a large hat from the rack.

    What hopped into the car and headed off to the direction of Wal-Mart, which was a never a good place to go, but when Mom needed something, she needed something!  And, I wasn't one to say no.
    "You better put that hat on once we go in", Kevin rebuked. 
    "Yes, Mommy", Joe joked in a high pitched voice.  I laughed a little, but then, Kevin gave me the same, cold glare.  Was I the only one without that power?

    We pulled into a parking space and prepped ourselves for the possible, impending chaos that was going out in public.  Walking through the front doors went smoothly.  The three of us made our way back to where we needed as Joe spotted the forbidden aisle.
    "Joe! No! Not again!", Kevin demanded.  Joe ignored the statement and, like a giddy little four-year old, skipped off towards the toy section with a smile from ear to ear. I didn't understand his obsession with pushing all the buttons on the kid computers, or making the play firetrucks' sirens blare, but it was like a need.  He had to do it. 

    That's when it happened!  The moment that landed me here, in this room, in this hospital.  Joe wasn't badly hurt, but a few stitches were needed.  That was his first mistake.  He should have just said no to the toys!  But, he couldn't.  It's like there a switch in Joe's head that goes off when he sees flashing lights and whistles.  I, seriously, think that there is a little kid trapped somewhere in the back of his mind. 

   
I watched him run and then fall.  He fit the floor.  Not hard, but as he did, his hat and glasses fell off. That was probably the worst place in the whole store for that to happen.  Luckily, he picked them up and and put them back on before anyone really noticed.  Except for one little girl.
    "Excuse me, Mr.", the little girl, who didn't look any older than three, said as she tugged on Joe's shirt.
    "Yes?", he answered, bending down to her level.  She had a pad of paper and pen in her small hands and was holding it out for him.
    "Are you a Jonas Brother?", she asked. 

    He could have said "no".  That's all it would have taken.  "No, I'm not a Jonas Brother"  Was that so hard?  But, I guess he just couldn't turn down that little girl.  Who could?  I'll tell you who could.  Someone who could see into the future.  Because if Joe knew what would happen next, he never would have said "yes".

   
He kindly signed the little girls paper and replied, "Yes, as a matter of fact, I am Joe Jonas."  She smiled, and before he could hand the paper back, the damage had been done.
    "Mommy!  It is the JONAS BROTHERS!", the little girl screamed. Her voice echoed through the store, sending a swarm of girls right in Joe's direction.  They didn't seem to notice Kevin and I, but as we watched Joe's head bob through the crowd, heading to the door, and soon disappear, we decided that we better go help.
  
    Kevin and I made our way to the front of the store, in the direction that the mob was leading.  We found that the group of people had stopped and were now huddled around something.  We inched closer, not worrying too much about our covers anymore to find Joe lying on the floor, clutching his head. 
    "Move!  He's hurt!", yelled Kevin as he pushed his way past all the hysterical girls and fell down to the floor next to Joe.  Joe wasn't very talkative, which scared me. He was Joe!  He loved to talk, but all he could do was hold his head and lie there.  He wasn't in tears, just yet.  But, his eyes were filled with them.

    "Someone call 911!", Kevin yelled again.  The people scattered and just watched in awe.  It's not every day that you see a Jonas Brother on a Walmart floor. Well, except for that one time when Joe sat down in the middle of the toy aisle and insisted on playing with the Tonka trucks, but that was different.  I sat down on the floor, next to Kevin and just waited.  I didn't know what to do exactly.
    The ambulance soon came and Joe was put in the back.  He was bleeding a little, but not too much to worry.  The paramedic said a few stitches and some precautionary x-rays would do the trick.  Mom and Dad were waiting at the hospital and they took him back.  And, that's where I am now.

    As I look back on this crazy day and think, I notice that one thing makes me laugh.  The fact that Joe could have went in the store without his hat and would have had the same result.  So, for as much as we badgered him before we left the house, it didn't change the outcome much.  I guess Joe is just accident prone.
    The nurse came into the waiting room and said that we could go back.  Frankie rushed into the room and gave Joe and hug, which made him smile.  Kevin sat by mom, telling her the accounts of the day and I stood by Joe.  As a smile formed on my lips, Joe looked up at me with apprehensive eyes.
    "Dude, what are you happy about?  Look at me!", he said half jokingly.
    "Nothing.", I replied. 
    "You know something, Nick . . . ", he started.
    "What?"
    "I should've said no"


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New Post 6/12/2008 7:43 PM
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Re: Should've Said No VOTING 

Again, I am stressing it....

 

PLEASE VOTE!

 

by pm'ing me at Lovemissmandie


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ive only received 1 vote people! You need to VOTE!


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Re: Should've Said No VOTING 
& it was mine!! lol. anyway...... yup. i voted :) haha.
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