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New Post 6/15/2008 9:45 PM
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Kung Fu Grip - A FanFic 
Modified By Xyzzle  on 6/15/2008 8:04:33 PM)

Hey dudes! This is my first time posting a fanfic here so im super stoked :) I'll just post the intro first. I hope you enjoy!

 

 

The California sun beat down on my already tanned skin as I layed out on my towel. The beach was crowded with little hyped up kids running away from their parents and gossiping teens and tweens drooling over the latest hottie in Popstar! magazine.
Feeling like I was 5 seconds from being burnt to a crisp, I packed up all my stuff and slid on my newest Ray Ban avaiators. The beach was only a few blocks away from my house so driving there was pretty pointless.
While I was walking on the heated sidewalk and about a block away from the casa, a humongoso, like I mean huge tour bus passed by. Me being a very curious person started to jog after the bus. I mean when do you ever see a big, gold bus driving around your neighborhood? After about a minute of following it I saw first one, then two more heads pop up in its window.
'Hmm maybe some new stars I could meet' I thought.
'Wait a second! This is my block!'
I sprinted to my house, ran through the front door, and flew up the stairs to my room. Perfect view. The bus came to a halt in front of the house across the street.
'Oh great just what I need. More diva stars added to the neighborhood. As if Lindsay Lohan wasn't enou-'
The thoughts running through my head came to an abrupt stop as three tall boys stepped off the bus. No. Flippin. Way.

 

 

 

6 comments and I'll post the first chapter!

 

*Xyzzle*

 

 


"I'm like, yo, stop makin the bus so bumpy." -Nick J


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New Post 6/15/2008 9:58 PM
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Re: Kung Fu Grip - A FanFic 

OOOHHH> Me likey :) good job. right more please :) I'm saying that politely, but if you don't write more, it'll get worse, trust me. it will.

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New Post 6/15/2008 10:02 PM
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Re: Kung Fu Grip - A FanFic 
Modified By Xyzzle  on 6/15/2008 8:05:02 PM)

I'm a little scared....

But don't worry I have a chapter ready for ya. Only 5 comments and we're good to go!

 

*Xyzzle*


"I'm like, yo, stop makin the bus so bumpy." -Nick J


Burning Up Tour

8.8.08

8.9.08

8.10.08

8.11.08

That's right. All Jonas 4 days straight.
 
New Post 6/15/2008 10:06 PM
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Re: Kung Fu Grip - A FanFic 

make that four comments!!!! :p sooo, this sounds like its gonna be KILLA AWESOME!!!! heh, i seriously really like the sounds of it!!!! and i'm using a lot of exclamation points, cuz they're coolioso!!!!!! heh, erm, yeah, im kinda borded slash hyoer right now soooo.... :P


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New Post 6/15/2008 10:12 PM
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Re: Kung Fu Grip - A FanFic 

haha exclamation points are the awesomest!!!!!

yuppers. four comments yo.

 

*Xyzzle*


"I'm like, yo, stop makin the bus so bumpy." -Nick J


Burning Up Tour

8.8.08

8.9.08

8.10.08

8.11.08

That's right. All Jonas 4 days straight.
 
New Post 6/15/2008 10:17 PM
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Re: Kung Fu Grip - A FanFic 

this is really good!

pms!


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New Post 6/15/2008 10:24 PM
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Re: Kung Fu Grip - A FanFic 

BUMP!!!!only three more comments untill a chappie!!!!!!!! COME ON!!!


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my fics:
Country Girls Have All the Fun Joe Fic {complete!!}
Jonas A La Mode Kevin Fic {complete}
The Name's Burns. Sean Burns. J.O.N.A.S. fic, starring an original character, Sean Burns. (in progress)
 
New Post 6/15/2008 10:27 PM
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Re: Re: Kung Fu Grip - A FanFic 

The intro really intrigued me! I`m really excited to see where this is gonna go.

Post more soon!


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New Post 6/15/2008 11:11 PM
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ahhh alright well since my parentals are sending me to bed now i'll post chapter one. her it is!

 

The first thing that popped into my head for me to do was to scream, really loud. And I did. At the top of my lungs.

Apparently my screaming was louder than I had initionally thought because through my window I saw the three boys staring at the house. After I screamed my fill, I ran outside to the front lawn.

“JONIE BOYS!!!!!!!!” I yelled to them across the street.

Three confused faces stared back at me, probably wondering who the maniac from across the street was but then it dawned on them who I really was.

“ TESS-NESS!!!!!!!!” my three favorite boys yelled right back.

They ran over to me and I was given the biggest , longest, and best hugs ever imaginable.

~Flashback~

“I’ll miss you Jonie Boys” I cried to the three retreating backs that were walking to a large and official looking SUV. My 14 year old body was racked with sobs as I watched my best friends walk away from me and practically out of my life. One by one, each head looked back at me like a ripple effect, with sorrowful eyes.

“ We’ll miss you too Tessa Bo Bessa” said Joe giving me a big hug. Never in my life had I’d seen him so serious. Nick then gave me an equally large hug and whispered a “Never forget us” into my ear. Lastly, Kevin gave me a long, meaningful hug and a kiss on the forehead. I was so close to him that I literally thought him my brother.

Ever since I was born, Nick, Kevin, Joe, and I were inseparable. Their parents were mine. My parents were their’s. When my mother died they were all there for me and my dad. The whole Jonas clan, including tiny Frankie. The boys were just as devastated when she died, as if losing their own mother.

We coped together, and everything was bearable again. Until my very own support system left me.

They were now the Jonas Brothers. Nick 14, Joe 17, and Kevin 19. They were leaving me like my mother had. They kept in touch after that sad parting day . But as they got more famous, our contact dwindled to almost nothing.

~End Flashback~

 

We all stepped back from each other, taking in our different appearances. I had changed so much from the young girl they left behind years before. Now, 4 years later, I stood at an average height of 5’5’. My originally butt length black hair was now honeyed blonde and just above shoulder length. My emerald green eyes were as bright as the glaring sun on our backs. And my how these boys grew. Nick’ hair was curlier and longer than I had remembered. He was also way taller than I had remembered. Kevin’s hair was also ten times curlier and longer and were those … sideburns?! Joe’s hair was straight and long too. We all just stood there silently grinning at each other until Frankie ran up to me.

“Who are you?” he asked.

I felt like I was going to cry right then and there.

How could my little Frankie not remember me?

Joe leaned over and whispered something to Frankie. Realization spread over his small face.

“ Tessy-Wessy?”

Oh the wonderful nicknames. How they have been missed.

“Frank the Tank how could you ever forget me?!” I said .

He jumped into my arms and I hugged him like there was no tomorrow.

 

Alrighty then people! Hope you liked it! I'll try to post as soon as possible but I have state testing the rest of the week so whenever I can squeeze in a chapter I deff. will! Nightie-night peeps!

 

*Xyzzle*

 

 


"I'm like, yo, stop makin the bus so bumpy." -Nick J


Burning Up Tour

8.8.08

8.9.08

8.10.08

8.11.08

That's right. All Jonas 4 days straight.
 
New Post 6/16/2008 12:10 AM
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Re: Re: Kung Fu Grip - Chapter Une Up! 
oh it's wonderful!! lol. I love it... sorry if i scared you :P but, hey, it worked! i got my chappy!! lol.
:.Libby.:

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