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New Post 6/16/2008 1:49 AM
User is offline Yankii
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Can't Knock Him Out 

It's been a really long time since I've written a fan fiction. Like Lemonade was the only one I finished and Rock for a Lolita died out.

I'm here with another idea. I'll try to complete it this time around.

Plot: Casey Parker could care less about the big and popular Jonas Brothers. In fact, she thinks they're just another sell-out boy band. Joe can't seem to make up his mind about where he stands with love. When these two collide head-on, weird things start to happen. Joe is smitten but Casey could care less. What's to do when one guy can't leave you alone?

Chapter 1: What a Joke

 

“Eeeeeekkkk!” screeched Josie as she turned her head away as a needle plunged into her friend’s cartilage. Her friend just rolled her eyes at her shrinking sidekick trembling in the chair next to her. The piercer blinked as he cleaned up the girl’s bleeding cartilage.

 

“Is she going to be okay?” asked the piercer as he watched Josie quiver in her seat, “It looks like she’s going to have a heart attack any second now.” The girl who was just getting her cartilage pierced, named Casey, nodded in response.

 

“Yeah don’t worry about her,” sighed Casey as she watched Josie, “Watching this freaks her out. I mean, I’m getting a needle stabbed into my ear. How many people watch that happen for a change?” The piercer shrugged and placed the mini hoop into place. “Hey Josie,” began Casey as she slid off her chair, “Chill girl. It’s over.” Josie uncovered her eyes and relaxed to see Casey standing before her with a ring in her cartilage.

 

***

“You know, it’s not that freaky to watch,” sighed Casey as they walked out of the piercing shop, “You got your ears pierced just last month.” Josie winced and wrung her hands anxiously.

 

“Can I help it if the sight scares me?” blurted out Josie as she tossed her hands up in the air, “Come on already! I just freak out for weird reasons.” As the two girls walked down the street, Josie spotted a sign in the window of a trendy boutique, saying there was a sale that day. “Come on!” cried out Josie as she dragged Casey into the store with her, “A sale means good things.” Casey groaned as this was the kind of shop she tended to avoid. It was loaded with fashion forward trends and glitzy Hollywood styles, something she loathed greatly.

 

Josie made a mad dash for the shoes and Casey trailed behind her. Josie skimmed the shelves for her size and selected a leopard-print flat. “What do you think of these?” she asked Casey as held them up.

 

Casey wrinkled her nose before answering, “As long as a real leopard wasn’t killed in the process, they’re fine.” Josie confirmed that the shoes were made of suede and velvet as she slipped them on. As she admired herself in the mirror, the hidden speakers in the store began playing S.O.S.  “Ooohh, this is an S.O.S. Don’t wanna second guess. This is the bottom line, it’s true. I gave my all for you, now my heart’s in two…” crooned the voice of Joe Jonas. Casey gagged as soon as she heard those lyrics.

 

“This is such a cliché song,” she grumbled as Josie started dancing to it. Why did such a lame song exist? Obviously this was another sell-out boy band just like the Backstreet Boys and N’Sync. It was really stupid to see how far some girls would go for a bunch of posers that were cute.

 

Josie stopped dancing and turned to face Casey. “I had no idea that you didn’t like the Jonas Brothers.” Her expression became one of disappointment and amazement.

 

“They are sell-outs!” shot back Casey, “It’s just another Backstreet Boys or N’Sync clone. Honestly, the whole music industry has gone whack! Hilary Duff is a sell-out, Lindsay Lohan is a poser-need I say more?” Josie busied herself with the shoes and put them back in the box.

 

“Uh yeah,” she tried to agree, “They are I guess. How lame. They only look cute because that’s what it’s all about these days. Looks.” She stood up and walked over to the counter. “I’m gonna buy these,” she said mostly to herself, “I need a cool pair of flats so yeah.”

 

“I’m going outside okay?” Casey muttered as she moved toward the door, “This song is giving me a headache.” She stumbled out the doorway and walked a few steps away from the storefront. The nearby beach breezes blew across her face gently and swept her hair up in the waves of wind. “Honestly, those guys are such losers,” muttered Casey as she walked down the sidewalk. She hadn’t been looking where she was going and had collided with a guy as she was saying her negative comment.

 

“Hey,” said a voice, “Who did you just say were losers?”

 


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New Post 6/16/2008 2:10 AM
User is offline luckieCrystal323 [♥]
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Re: Can't Knock Him Out 

i must say that i'm interested in this.

it sounds good and i really want to read more of it.

post more soon chica please.


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New Post 6/16/2008 2:05 PM
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Re: Can't Knock Him Out 

Here's Chapter two. I'm glad that you like it-regardless of it being the first chapter.

Chapter 2: Ouch! I’m Going Down.

 

Casey’s eyes traveled up from the ground to the boy’s black shirt which hugged his slender, yet slightly muscled torso. Her eyes continued to travel up his chest until they met his eyes. The almond-shaped eyes blinked the long lashes attached to them as she stared back. She found herself having a really hard time trying to break his gaze with hers. My friend freaked out while my ears were pierced, I heard the worst song in the world, and I got knocked down by a decently cute guy.

 

The boy extended his hand to help her up and she took it. She couldn’t help but study his hand. His skin was paler than hers, almost porcelain-like. His hand covered her small hand, almost like an older sibling with a child. The sound of him asking her, “Hey are you okay?” snapped her out of her thoughts.

 

“Yeah, I’m cool, I guess,” Casey mumbled as she dusted herself off. The boy’s face broke into a smile and her face warmed up. It was exactly the kind of smile she couldn’t help but feel weak. Lips turned up slightly, gentle, warm eyes on her. But it was the sweet innocence in his smile that made her melt. She didn’t know who the heck this guy was but he seemed okay by her standards.

 

His eyes grew worried as they zeroed in on her fresh piercing. “Um,” he began nervously, “Your ear is bleeding.” Casey jumped nearly out of her skin and shakily reached up to touch her cartilage. Her fingers slid across her skin to feel something wet. She withdrew her fingers to see traces of deep red blood on them.

 

“Oh yeah,” she answered lamely, “Well uh, I did just get my cartilage pierced today so uh, I guess that’s why.” The boy sighed in relief and came closer to examine her ear. A bee flew around them and Casey backed up a bit.

 

“What’s wrong?” he asked her as he watched her back up. Casey watched the bee circle them, terrified. It flew in between them and landed on her arm. She grew pale and horrified as it crawled on her arm. The boy tried to brush it away but it was too late. The aggravated bee stabbed Casey’s arm and she began wobble dangerously.  Nerves stung her insides like a thousand needles and everything started to move out of focus. She felt herself beginning to fall until he caught her. The last thing she heard or thought she heard was, “Hang on, I’ve got you.”

 


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New Post 6/16/2008 2:14 PM
User is offline Libby ♥ The Middle ♥
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Re: Can't Knock Him Out 
Ooooh snap. a bee. i've never been stung before, so i'm scared of them. but *ahem* I LOVE N*SYNC AND BACKSTREET BOYS!!!!! Even though JB sounds nothing like them. lol. this is good, though. PMS!
:.Libby.:

8.24.08 = first JB concert. Best night of my life.
Jonas Fo Sho-ness!
Nick Jonas= l.o.v.e <3
Leigh made this siggy =) I love those boys! Photobucket Thanks Jenny =) love ya. Go read my fanfic, Regret. ! people!
Photobucket Love Ya Jenny! =)
Denial ain't just a river in Egypt- Mark Twain =)
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thanks Jenny <3
One in the same, never to change, our love was beautiful <3
 
New Post 6/16/2008 2:41 PM
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Re: Can't Knock Him Out 

Yep. I definately like it all ready. Thanks for the heads up. =D
I seriously can't wait for the next post. I wanna see (read?) her reaction when she finds out who he is.

~Belles <3 [wants more of this fantastic fic]


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New Post 6/16/2008 11:16 PM
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Re: Can't Knock Him Out 

Well you'll know now. I'm on a roll today!

Chapter 3: Why Bother Saying Thank You?

 

“I, I, I don’t know her really well,” said a worried male voice to the doctor, “I bumped into her and we talked for a while. Then the bee stung her.” These words entered Casey’s mind as she began to stir slowly from her unconscious state. A strong smell of antiseptic cleanser stung her nostrils and she coughed violently. She was in the hospital. Oh boy. Not.

 

How more pathetic can I get? she thought as her eyes slowly pried open, I faint from my allergies in front of a cute guy and he probably saw the nasty wave of hives on my skin. Ewww. Casey’s cough had caught the boy’s attention and he dashed over to her side.

 

“Hey welcome back,” he told her, “As soon as you went down, I panicked and called 911. You really scared me back there.” The doctor examined her data on the machine she was hooked up to and confirmed that she was free to go home.

 

“First of all young lady,” he added as he turned to face Casey, “I need to know your name since this gentleman didn’t know what it was.” Casey opened her mouth to tell him when Josie came bursting into the room.

 

“Oh my God! Casey!” screeched Josie as she swooped down on her friend, “I was so worried! I saw you on the ground when I came out of the store and he was over you and, and… Thank God that he called!” She broke her hug with Casey and turned to face the boy. “Oh Joe, you are a hero!” cried out Josie as she crushed him in a hug. As soon as his name came out into the open, Casey’s dazed expression turned into one of irritation.

 

Wait a second did Josie just say Joe was his name? As in Joe Jonas of that stupid band the Jonas Brothers? Her feelings of embarrassment became ones of anger. And I can’t believe I thought this guy was cute. Since Casey was fuming in her mind, Josie dictated all of her personal information to the doctor for his report.

 

“I will have to contact your parents about this incident,” reported the doctor before leaving Casey alone with Josie and Joe, “I would highly recommend resting, drinking plenty of fluids, and having someone else transport you for at least the next 24 hours.” As soon as he closed the door, Casey clenched her fists and slipped out from under the covers. She stood up and started out of the room, heading for the front of the hospital. Joe stood up swiftly and followed her.

 

“Hey!” he yelled at her, “Casey, wait! Look will you just stop and talk to me?” She whirled around and glared at him. Her nails dug into her palm viciously and her entire body was quaking with anger. What did he think I was? she thought, A lost cause? A charity case?

 

“Why should I?” she snapped back, “You are such a sap! And I let you take advantage of me and my feelings!”

 

“I never took advantage of you!” Joe shouted back, his voice raising, “You’re the one who fainted after being stung! I was just trying to help…someone in need.”

 

Casey snorted at his last remark. She wasn’t buying it. To her, saving her from a bee sting was just another publicity stunt to boost his ego. “Sure, you were. Sounds real convincing,” she remarked bitterly before walking to the doors of the hospital. She paused and looked him straight in the eye as she spat, “Remember when I said ‘They are such losers’? Well I meant you and your band.” Joe stared after her crestfallen as Casey slammed the hospital door and stormed off down the streets.

 

Josie came up just as Casey had slammed the door. She turned to Joe and murmured, “Look, I’m really sorry about her. I’ve, I’ve got to go after her. Later?”

 

“Yeah, later,” muttered Joe as Josie pushed the door open and started to run after Casey. He watched her through the glass thoughtfully and smiled a bitter, slow smile.  

 


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New Post 6/17/2008 12:49 PM
User is offline Libby ♥ The Middle ♥
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Re: Can't Knock Him Out 

Joe isn't a wuzew! apowogize, casey! lol. jk. but seriously.. i love this :) more. soon. :)
:.Libby.:

8.24.08 = first JB concert. Best night of my life.
Jonas Fo Sho-ness!
Nick Jonas= l.o.v.e <3
Leigh made this siggy =) I love those boys! Photobucket Thanks Jenny =) love ya. Go read my fanfic, Regret. ! people!
Photobucket Love Ya Jenny! =)
Denial ain't just a river in Egypt- Mark Twain =)
Photobucket
thanks Jenny <3
One in the same, never to change, our love was beautiful <3
 
New Post 6/17/2008 1:37 PM
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Re: Can't Knock Him Out 

awww this is fantastic. I really like your writing. =D
can't wait for more!!!

~Belles <3 [is watching Disney Channel right now XD]


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New Post 6/29/2008 2:29 AM
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Re: Can't Knock Him Out 

pure awesomeness.but wut is that girls problem?he was just trying to help.

PMS!

~Hannahxoxo


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