Please Read...  
 Forum  
 
  Forum  Jonas Brothers  Fan Fiction  One Last Request [Chapter 15- Last Chapter- 9/10]
Previous Previous
 
Next Next
New Post 7/26/2008 2:16 AM
User is offline ♥Ali
1556 posts
9th Level Poster




Re: One Last Request [Chapter 7- 7/23] 
BUMP!
♥ 3/14/08 & 8/18/08 ♥
Photobucket Image Hosting
My FF's
Brightest One
One Last Request
 
New Post 7/31/2008 1:06 PM
User is offline *♫*Marni*♫*
4028 posts
6th Level Poster




Re: One Last Request [Chapter 7- 7/23] 

omg ali

amazin

ok amazin

that is all i can say bkz im at a lack of words


Wanna PM me??? sleepingonabeach



March 15th 2008 ♪ Look Me In The Eyes Tour ♪ Verizon Wireless Arena ♪ Manchester, NH
August 7th 2008 ♪ Burnin' Up Tour ♪ Tweeter Center ♪ Boston, MA
 
New Post 8/2/2008 4:28 PM
User is offline ♥Ali
1556 posts
9th Level Poster




Re: One Last Request [Chapter 7- 7/23] 
hi guys!!! here's a chapter for you. I'm still on vacation in FL, but I wanted to give you something to read. I apologize for the sadness of this chapter. It gets better, I promise. So don't kill me.
<3
p.s. If you guys leave ooberly amazing comments, I might give you the second part tonight. So remember to leave the love!
______________________________________________________________________________

Chapter 8

Nick hated hospitals. He didn't know why he volunteered to escort Jennifer to her chemo treatment that afternoon. He knew she would need somebody there for support, so he offered to go along. Once they entered the hospital room, Jen took her rightful spot on the bed, waiting for the doctor. Nick lowered himself into a chair next to where Jen was, taking in his surroundings. The last time he was in the hospital was when he was diagnosed with diabetes a few years ago.

The doctor walked in, smiling at Jennifer who put a brave face on. Nick saw right through her; he saw the pain and misery in her eyes and in that instant, he wished that it was anybody but her that this was happening to. He watched as the doctor inserted a needle into the fragile girl's arm, turning on a machine and jotting a few notes down on a clipboard. Nick's heart fell for the girl. He often wondered what she looked like with hair, what color it was, how long it might have been.

Throughout the past couple of days, Nick began to befriend the girl. He now considered her one of his best friends, even though they met just days before. He felt the pain hit when he realized that she would be taken from his life soon. He valued that Jen saw him for who he was, not just a rockstar. She could make him laugh like no one else; he saw the innocence in her eyes, the thing that made her had to resist. Everytime Nick saw her smile, he couldn't help but smile himself.

Once the treatment had finished, they walked slowly out of the building and into a car waiting to take them back to the venue. The treatment session had drained Jennifer physically, causing her to fall asleep shortly after leaving. She opted not to attend the show and quickly apologized to the guys after returning. Exhausted, Jen walked back to her bunk and climbed in, leaving Nick to watch her from the front lounge. He felt defeated, unable to express exactly how he felt inside about a girl who had captured his heart.

Three days later, goodbyes were exchanged as Jennifer clung to Nicholas for dear life. Her departing words with Joe and Kevin were short but heartfelt, nothing like the one she feared the most, with Nick. Unknown to her at the time, Nick also didn't want to let go. He knew that this would be the last time he saw her, the last time he held her, and the last time he looked in her eyes.

Neither one of the two owned up to their feelings, both knowing that things would never work out, simply because Nick could never love someone that was soon to be six feet under. With one last thank you, Jennifer released Nick from her grasp. She sighed deeply, trying to hide the tears from the boy that meant everything to her, but it was no use. Nick caught on and quickly wiped the tears from her eyes, kissing her gently on the cheek before joining his brothers on the bus.

Jen watched as Nick boarded his home on the road, the door closing behind him. He sat down by the window, looking out to her where she stood with her family on the front porch. Kevin and Joe were also present in the window, Joe waving frantically at the girl, but she was too preoccupied with staring at Nick to notice. The four planned to keep in touch through emails and phone calls, but Jen knew that nothing would ever replace the real thing.

The bus lurched into motion and tears began to flow at such a rapid rate, Jen couldn't catch her breath. For once in her life, Nick and his brothers treated her like a normal person, and for this she was forever grateful. She watched as the bus began to pull away from the curb in front of her house, as the figure in the window began to wave slowly. Nick's heart was torn, quickly retreating to his bunk after Jen disappeared from sight. He didn't want his brothers to notice his tears, now present in his eyes. Nick had realized that the one thing he needed in his life, the one thing that made him feel complete, was Jennifer, and he knew he could never have her. He knew this would be the last time he saw her, but reminding himself that he would see her once again in eternity.


♥ 3/14/08 & 8/18/08 ♥
Photobucket Image Hosting
My FF's
Brightest One
One Last Request
 
New Post 8/2/2008 5:02 PM
User is offline mrsNICKJONAS1694 [STOP THE KEViN JONAS HATE!!!]SORRY I HAVEN'T BEEN READIN/POSTIN SCHOOL IS INSANE I
224 posts
No Ranking




Re: One Last Request [Chapter 7- 7/23] 

ahh new reader.. this is the cutest thing i've ever read.. it's so sad but I know nick will find a way to get to her.. ahh i'm legit crying right now. it's so sad but i love it

 

good job and PMS

<3katelyn

 
New Post 8/2/2008 5:33 PM
User is offline luckieCrystal323 [♥]
4794 posts
www.myspace.com/crystal_cutie323
6th Level Poster


Re: One Last Request [Chapter 7- 7/23] 

Ali...
i kind of hate you at the moment...
only because you made me cry
with that sweet yet very heartbreaking chapter.
but don't worry
i actually love you
i just don't like the fact the i cried.
anyway
the last chapter before this one was amazing
and chapter 8 was well...
heartbreaking.
i absolutely love this story Ali.
post more soon chica please.
p.s. hope your grandma is okay
and that you are having some fun in Florida.


My Stories and Joint Stories
Who's The Dog?
Childhood Memories Turn To Teenage Woes (CSKS Joint)
Something in the Music (joint with Ashley and Corinne)
Captured In The Moment {Kevin ff}
My Oneshots
 
New Post 8/2/2008 7:45 PM
User is offline ♥Ali
1556 posts
9th Level Poster




Re: One Last Request [Chapter 7- 7/23] 
Welcome to the new reader!!!

And thanks Crystal!!!

You two made my day... and I am so freaking sorry that I made you cry. Gah, I didn't mean to... I swear!!! If this made you cry, I really don't wanna write the remaining chapters. those will probably have you bawling.

this story is my baby... It's certainly my favorite.

love you guys!
<3

♥ 3/14/08 & 8/18/08 ♥
Photobucket Image Hosting
My FF's
Brightest One
One Last Request
 
New Post 8/2/2008 8:53 PM
User is offline luckieCrystal323 [♥]
4794 posts
www.myspace.com/crystal_cutie323
6th Level Poster


Re: One Last Request [Chapter 7- 7/23] 

you are quite welcome Ali.
and the rest should make me bawl you say?
well at least i have a warning this time around.
i'll be sure to keep the tissue box near by when i read the other chapters.
but for me to do that...
those chapters will need to be posted. *hint hint*
ok i think i'm done being a dork for the moment.


My Stories and Joint Stories
Who's The Dog?
Childhood Memories Turn To Teenage Woes (CSKS Joint)
Something in the Music (joint with Ashley and Corinne)
Captured In The Moment {Kevin ff}
My Oneshots
 
New Post 8/2/2008 10:08 PM
User is offline krissyxlovesxya
1077 posts
9th Level Poster


Re: One Last Request [Chapter 7- 7/23] 

New reader. This is amazing. You're an amazing writer.

PMS Please.:D


Krissy always laughs when they act stupid:]
"There's a beautiful side and something important in every single person out there no matter who they are. No matter what you might say to them, they might be someone who can change the world." -Paul Kevin Jonas the second.
Photobucket Photobucket
JBelles♥Family
 
New Post 8/2/2008 10:30 PM
User is offline Hey Brittany!♫I'm sure as hell the happiest I've ever been♪
2045 posts
8th Level Poster




Re: One Last Request [Chapter 7- 7/23] 

Ali why would I be mad after this chapter?
it was fabulous and sad and just...guh
I feel awful cause I didn't cry
but then, I never cry



PMs go to sixteencandles77

August 7 ♫ guess who I get to see?
 
New Post 8/2/2008 10:33 PM
User is offline Hey, Stephani!♥[He Bit My Neck & Stole My Heart♥ Emmett]
5747 posts
5th Level Poster




Re: One Last Request [Chapter 7- 7/23] 

i also didn't cry and was like
is something wrong with me
but the last time i cried was like three days ago
for no reason at all.
seriously I was crying over icky
and there was no reason to cry
Brittany, where is that thing in your name from
the sush girl shut your lips do the helen keller and talk with your hips
cause i swear i know it
But i can;t think of from where


Funny(s) of the week:

"Your mom is awesome."
"Don't talk about my mother!"
"Okay."


cause we are vegetables. & that's just the way we roll.
 
Previous Previous
 
Next Next
  Forum  Jonas Brothers  Fan Fiction  One Last Request [Chapter 15- Last Chapter- 9/10]
 Top Threads  
In the past month, we have 2226 new thread(s) and 60005 new post(s)
The most popular thread has been Flight 705 [a KERNT joint] NIKI UPDATE.
The most active thread has been The {G}onas Thread
Copyright 2007 - 2008 by JonasBrothersFan.com - Privacy Statement - Terms Of Use 
Another Fansite Hosted by Fangap.com
 
Register | Login
 Check Out Our Sponsors »  

 Your Messages...  
You must be logged in to use this module.
 UsersOnline  
Membership Membership:
Latest New User Latest: $teph@n!3
New Today New Today: 61
New Yesterday New Yesterday: 77
User Count Overall: 138681

People Online People Online:
Visitors Visitors: 456
Members Members: 24
Total Total: 480

Online Now Online Now:
01: Live2LuvJB
02: abercrombie
03: JonasArmy210
04: jessie345
05: MrsTaylorJonas
06: marylovesacting
07: sexy maria
08: katerz201988
09: phaythnakacutie pie
10: chocolatelover93
11: joelover_x
12: nickjaylover2
13: ericka94
14: clarockhouse
15: Sharika
16: I LUV JT
17: josh89
18: lucy:)
19: bahoo
20: sadness is darkness revield:P
21: kimmykinz
22: crazy4nickjonasteter54
23: jonasjunkie9599
24: miajonas001