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New Post 9/5/2008 2:40 PM
User is offline luckieCrystal323 [♥]
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Re: One Last Request [Chapter 13- 8/27] 

awesome i'll look for the chapter later then.
and i'm excited for the VMAs...
i think part of it has to do that Stephani will be here when it's on...
so i'll actually have someone to watch them with...
and of course go a little fan girl for JB with.
and just in case i don't remember or something...
HAPPY EARLY BIRTHDAY ALI!!
although i'm sure i'll say to you on your birthday as well.
oh and i hope that the visit from Tropical Storm Hannah isn't too bad.
hopefully everything goes okay with that.


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New Post 9/5/2008 9:19 PM
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Re: One Last Request [Chapter 14- 9/5] 
hi ladies!!!
i have a new chapter for you!!!
i'm not happy with this chapter at all...
it's not my best. and it's primarily a filler for the last chapter.
that's right.
this is the second to the last chapter...
until the sequel.
so...
here it is...
lemme know what you think... if it's as bad as i think it is.
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Chapter 14

Jennifer laid awake for the third night in a row, still unable to process everything that was happening. In a matter of days, she had gone through an operation, awakened from a coma and now had lost everything she had lived for.

She felt as though she were a stranger, trapped in her own body. She now had to be reacquainted with her mom and her sister, as well as herself. Everyone was always saying how strong Jen was, but sometimes she doubted them because of the state she was in today. Jen wanted so badly to remember, but she couldn’t and this pained her the most.

The day that Jennifer woke up, she looked around her room and couldn’t identify the faces staring back at her. Even though she had spent the previous 15 years of her life with them, her mom and Crystal were unknown to her.

Her mom explained why she was in the hospital, and informed her that her battle with cancer has lasted for 3 years until she was able to defeat it. Jennifer was constantly apologizing for not remembering anything, but her family took it in stride and told her that she wasn’t supposed to be sorry about anything, instead she should be thankful, because they could help her remember. She was alive, and that was all that mattered.

The letters from Nick remained forgotten for the time being, but the roses kept Jen guessing as to why someone would continue this kind gesture. Crystal had explained they were from Nick, but that just made Jen feel even worse. She had vaguely remembered their conversation, and from what it seemed, she knew this boy pretty well, it was just she couldn’t put a face to the name or remember much about him. She hoped that he would still feel the same way about her, because anyone who went to such extremes to put a smile on her face was truly special in her book.

Thousands of miles away, a rockstar sat in his hotel room, looking out upon the city lights. He wanted to be there with her, to comfort her so she wouldn’t be scared, but he was scared himself. Nick remembered everything about her, and he felt angry that she didn’t even know who he was. He toyed with the idea of calling her, but he knew that unfortunately things wouldn’t change and still she wouldn’t know him. Nick had been avoiding her these past few days, unable to come up with the right words to say. He pictured it as meeting her for the first time. He knew everything about her, but yet she knew nothing about him.

Every time he got on that stage, he felt as though he was empty. Nick knew had a best friend, but the problem was, Jen didn’t know she had one in him. His heart wasn’t fully in his performances, it was instead in a hospital room, with a girl he cared so much about. Nick thought that Jen might have figured out before her surgery that he had taken some interest in her, but now, he was certain that any feelings she would have held for him were now erased forever. His only hope was that she could learn to love him the way he came to love her.

Crystal had informed Jennifer that she knew the Jonas Brothers, but Jen had a hard time believing that she spent a week with them on tour. Joe had suggested that Nick give her a magazine or one of their books, which practically have their whole life stories inside of them, but Nick quickly shot this idea down. He knew what he had to do, he had to see her, to explain himself, and to help her through this. Jen might not know who he is, or what he does, but Nick knew everything, and through it all she still remained the object of his affection.

As he glanced out his window, he could see the stars and the moon. Nick knew that somewhere on the other side of the Earth, Jen saw it too. Even if only for a moment, he felt as though he were with Jen, where he truly desired to be most of all.

Nick didn’t care about anything else. He had to see her. Unfortunately their European tour stood in his way. He told everyone that nothing was going to stop him from seeing Jen once it was over. No one was going to stand in his way. They knew what was best. Nick had his path cut out for him; the sacrifices he had to make. The road that lie ahead for Jennifer was going to be a rough one, but the journey to her heart was going to be even tougher, and that was something Nick hoped to travel one day at a time.


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New Post 9/5/2008 9:43 PM
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Re: One Last Request [Chapter 14- 9/5] 

Ali...
you may not be super proud of that chapter...
but i absolutely love it.
Nick is such a sweet heart.
and it kind of breaks my heart that my (fictional) sister is going through all of this.
i would definitely try my best to help her remember things again...
but i know that it mostly depends on her.
this story is incredible.
and i'll be sad when it's over...
but i'm looking forward to a sequel.
post the next chapter whenever you get the chance chica.


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New Post 9/5/2008 11:35 PM
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Re: One Last Request [Chapter 14- 9/5] 
aww thank you crystal
you always know what to say.
<3

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New Post 9/6/2008 12:46 AM
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Re: One Last Request [Chapter 14- 9/5] 

awww Ali....that was so sweet. and cute. and sad.
even if it WAS just filler, it was da.mn good filler
and this is almost over?
*tear*
but there is still the sequel!



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New Post 9/6/2008 12:55 AM
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Re: One Last Request [Chapter 14- 9/5] 

alison

that was F*CKING awesome

oh wait its gonna censor that isnt it... oh well

lol

i told you it would b awesome

and nicholas better get his butt done with that tour and get his butt over to see jennnnnn

ok that is all.... final chappie like.. .tomorrow?!

ima gonna b bored as all sh*t tomorrow its supposed to rain here... BOO

LOVE U CHiCKA!

 


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New Post 9/6/2008 12:58 AM
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Re: One Last Request [Chapter 14- 9/5] 

oh Marina....you are so obscene....I love it
or should I say, I fu.cking love it
lol



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New Post 9/6/2008 1:07 AM
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Re: One Last Request [Chapter 14- 9/5] 

yeah you do,... and yes i am

lol

 


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New Post 9/6/2008 11:07 AM
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Re: One Last Request [Chapter 14- 9/5] 

awehh.

iloveeyouu&ilovedthischapter!

hahah

nick is so adorablee.

and i almost died at the end 'one day at a time'

AKA ITS ABOUT TIME CD

(for any jonas fans who've been around that long)

anywayss, i loved this chapter.

and i sincerely cannot wait until you post more =]


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New Post 9/8/2008 2:59 PM
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Re: One Last Request [Chapter 14- 9/5] 

bump for Ali.


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Something in the Music (joint with Ashley and Corinne)
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