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New Post 6/23/2008 11:15 AM
User is offline ninja.jonas
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Miss Invisible [Nick Story] 

Miss Invisible

                "Dad make her stop!" I cried to my dad.

"What do you expect me to do?" He asked softly rubbing my shoulder.

"I don't know! You were married to her you should know how to stop this nonsense!" I whipped my tears on my sweatshirt sleeve.

"I'll see what I can do." He told me standing up to go stop my mother from dancing provocatively. My best friend Rachel was laughing at her trying to make me feel better. Mothers weren't supposed to act like that! They also weren't supposed to dress in clothes that showed their stomachs and cleavage. But she still did it anyways! It drives me insane!

My dad took my mothers arm and whispered something in her ear. She stopped dancing and looked over at me and Rachel. She flashed her pearly whites at us before saying something back to my dad. Then she laughed. She found this funny. She always finds if funny. It's not *CENSORED*ing funny. Its embarrassing. He shook his head and walked away from her.

"She said if you didn't like it you don't have to stay. You can go back to the hotel." He looked at me sadly. I sighed deeply as my mother grinded against some random guy. "I can take you there if you want."

"I can take her." Rachel said already knowing my answer. She locked arms with me and we walked out of the stupid club that I didn't want to go to in the first place. Clubs are not a good place for a 14 year old, like Rachel, and 15 year olds, like me, anyways. At least my dad was there. "Do you really want to go back to the hotel right now? I mean it's a beautiful night."

"Not really." I sighed looking out at all the pretty lights illuminating the boardwalk. "I want some ice-cream."

"Me too!" Rachel's face lit up when she saw the small ice-cream shop. The two girls started running off the shop hoping their favorite flavors would be there. Sure enough I made out with some chocolate chip cookie dough and Rachel got her favorite birthday cake flavored treat (and the boy who was working there's phone number). I had almost forgotten about my crazy mother as we walked out giggling like the girls we are.

"I love the boardwalk. It reminds me of home." I said thoughtfully taking in the salty sent of the sea water.

"Me too." Rachel smiled leaning over the railing. "I miss it. But we're on vacation! We shouldn't worry about home!"

"Nope!" I laughed. "It's us, my divorced parents and my step mother. How much more conventional could that get?" Rachel laughed loudly and spun around to lean on the railing.

"How does that work?" She asked looking at me skeptically.

"I have no idea." I sighed. "Honestly I wished my mother would have stayed home."

"She's so embarrassing!"

"I know!" I exclaimed. "This is why I don't have friends over often, besides you but your used to her!"

"and I may have seen more of her than I would ever want to." She shuttered almost violently.

"I'm sorry." I laughed softly. "I think my grandmother smoked crack when she was pregnant."

"That might start to explain it." Rachel giggled.

"Yeah, but you only have to deal with her in intervals. I have to live with her."

"And for that," She said putting her hand on my arm. "I am truly sorry."

 

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New Post 6/23/2008 11:30 AM
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New Post 6/23/2008 12:22 PM
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Re: Miss Invisible [Nick Story] 

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New Post 6/23/2008 12:45 PM
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i'm likin it.

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New Post 6/23/2008 6:12 PM
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            There I was just minding my own business when she came out of no where and captured my attention. It was like BAM! I completely lost focus on what I was doing, what my brother was saying and what my name was. There she was. Just standing there talking to another girl. She smiled and the corner of my mouth began to move up into a small detached smile.

            "Nick?" A hand waved in front of my face. Who is Nick? Oh right, me. I looked at Joe who was staring at me like I had three heads.

            "Aww!: Kevin cooed. "Nicky sees a girl!"

            "OOO!" Joe joined in ruffling my hair. I barely noticed. "Go ask her name!"

            "No!" I shouted breaking my trance. "I don’t even know her!"

            "That's the whole point of asking her name." Kevin said looking at me like an idiot. Cause let's face it, I am one.

            "But-"

            "No!" Joe shouted much like I had before. "Go or I will." I shook my head pleading with my brother to just let it be. But no. Joe strutted away while Kevin held me back. Joe talked to the two girls for several minutes before scribbling something down on a napkin and handing it to the girl. My eyes went wide when I saw her look at me and wave. I waved pathetically back feeling my knees go weak.

            "You're pathetic man." Kevin laughed.

            "I know, you don't need to tell me." I sighed and he let me go as Joe walked back to us. "So?"
            "Her name is Kinsly, she 15 years old and this is her cell number." He smirked holding up a napkin with his chicken scratch on it. I looked back at the girl and she winked at me before walking away with her friend.

            "Give!" I shouted jumping for her number, but he held it out of my grasp. "Please?"

            "Not so fast." Joe smirked. "I had to do all the work to get this for you and I think I deserve something in return."

            "What?" I asked through gritted teeth.

            "You need to admit that I am your favorite older brother and surpass Kevin in everything." He smiled at Kevin. Kevin scoffed and looked at me.

            "Sorry Kev," I whispered turning back to Joe. "You're my favorite older brother."

            "I'm sorry?" He asked cupping his ear. I glared at him.

            "You are my favorite older brother." I said louder.

            "And?"

            "You surpass Kevin in everything." I rolled my eyes and crossed my arms hoping he'll be satisfied.

            "Next time without the attitude." He scoffed handing me the number. My stomach was a flutter with butterflies as I stared down at the napkin. A smile spread across my face. "Looser."

 


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New Post 6/23/2008 6:41 PM
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Re: Miss Invisible [Nick Story] 

Great first two chapters!

haha Poor Nick... =P

Post more soon!



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New Post 6/23/2008 6:48 PM
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I love this!!

Write more ASAP!!


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New Post 6/23/2008 8:17 PM
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Re: Miss Invisible [Nick Story] 

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Whoo I'm out of breath...

 

THAT WAS AN *does cheerleading dancey thing* A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! AMAZING! Chapter.

Joe is so hilarious


I'm in love with a guy. A guy I've never even met. His name...is Nick Jonas.

Isn't it sad how the boy you are absolutly in love with, literally doesn't know you exist?

- me on Nick Jonas

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Re: Miss Invisible [Nick Story] 

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Whoo I'm out of breath...

 

THAT WAS AN *does cheerleading dancey thing* A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! AMAZING! Chapter.

Joe is so hilarious


I'm in love with a guy. A guy I've never even met. His name...is Nick Jonas.

Isn't it sad how the boy you are absolutly in love with, literally doesn't know you exist?

- me on Nick Jonas

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