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New Post 6/24/2008 11:52 AM
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I Draw Fake Smiles to Hide My Real Tears [a joe ff] *LAST CHAPTER UP* 
Modified By emily [is dreaming; day & night♥]  on 7/14/2008 7:59:44 PM)

This is my second fan fiction on here and I have like 5 chapters written already. I'll post the rest as soon as I get some comments on here, so tell me if you like it (:

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Prologue

 

 

Hey, my name’s Joe. You probably already know that though. Something else you probably already know is that I’m in a band with my two brothers, Nick and Kevin. We are the Jonas Brothers. Yeah, yeah I know you know that. Something you might not know about me, is that I hide things from the world. What do I hide, you ask? I hide my feelings, my true feelings. Yeah I might seem like the funny guy of the group. The happy one. The one who doesn’t let anything, or anyone get to him. But the truth is, that’s not true at all. Sure I’m happy at times, but I’ll never be happy like I used to be. Nowadays it’s almost always an act. I hate to lie and be fake to everyone, but I can’t help it. I can’t let everyone know how I feel. I can’t let everyone know that she won. Who’s ‘she’, you ask? Well she’s the one that made me the way I am today. It’s hard for me to think about her. It brings back a lot of memories, some good, some bad. But no matter what I remember about her, it brings me to tears. Real tears. My tears. They come out every so often, when something isn’t going good or I just have a bad day. When they come, there’s no getting rid of them until I’m all out for the time being. You don’t understand, you say? Well I suppose I can tell you how it started. How I became sad, really truly sad. I’ll tell you why I draw fake smiles to hide my real tears.


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New Post 6/24/2008 12:27 PM
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okay here's the first chapter. please comment and tell me what you think:D

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Chapter: 1

So, you convinced me to tell you the truth? Well you’re the only one. Can I trust you? Don’t go spilling the truth all over the internet or anything. You won’t do that will you? Okay good. Well it all started about a year ago…

 “Aloha Hawaii!” I said as we walked out of the airport. My parents, Kevin, Frankie, Nick and I were on vacation in Hawaii. My dad had just gotten a job for the month of June at a church here as a replacement while the other guy was visiting a sick relative in Texas. Since he had to be here all thirty days of the month, my mother and him decided to make it a month long vacation for the whole family. We all loved the idea, we needed some time to get away.

 “Whoa! Look at that water park!” Frankie shouted excitedly. “Can we go, mom?” 

“Yeah mom, can we?!” I chimed in. I wanted to make the best of this trip, from the minute we stepped out of the air port till the minute we walked back in.

“Don’t be such a child, Joe.” Kevin said laughing at me, like usual. I was okay with it though, it was my job to be the funny one.

“If being a child means having fun, I never want to grow up.” I said smiling at my big brother.

“Good one, Joe.” Nick said laughing at my brilliant comeback.

“Okay, Kevin, here’s the key to you guys’ suite.” my mom said as she handed Kevin the key. “And here’s you guys’ bags. Each of you grab some. You can go to the suite and change so you can go have some fun.”

“Sweet!” I said and grabbed two bags. “Hurry up Kevin, you got the key so run! I wanna get back out here and have fun.”

“Okay, J. Calm down, I’m going as fast as I can.” he said walking as fast as he could, which was actually pretty slow. Compared to me at least. When we finally got into the suite and found our swim trunks in the bags I put mine on as fast as I could.

“Aren’t you guys coming?” I asked Kevin and Nick. They didn’t even have their trunks on yet.  

“I’m ready, Joe!” Frankie said as he ran in front of me and jumped in the air.

“Well at least one of my brothers is ready to have some fun in the sun!” I said laughing at my youngest brother. 

“I’ll be down later. I’m just gonna kick it here for a while.” Nick said as he laid down on one of the beds.

“Same here.” Kevin said, doing the same thing on the bed next to Nick’s.

“Whatever. Me and Frank the tank are going to have fun while you old ladies take a nap.” I said to Nick and Kevin. “Let’s go Frank”

“See you later guys.” Kevin said as he waved to us. Me and Frankie walked out of the room and out of the building into the sun.

“What do you want to do first, little man?” I asked Frankie. I looked around. We were down by the beach where there was a set of volleyball courts, a few water parks, a miniature golf course, a few different pools, a lazy river, and tons more. This was definitely paradise. 

“Can we go to the water park?” He asked while he was staring at the tallest slide they had there.

“Of course, man. Let’s go!” We took off running towards the park. We got inside and headed towards the slide Frankie was looking at before. It was a really tall slide that was like a huge, long, curving tube. It was called the Black Hole, so it must be dark inside, I thought. Luckily there wasn’t a long line, there were only a few people that I could see at the top of the steps waiting to go down. Me and Frankie ran up the steps as fast as we could. When we finally got to the top I saw her. She was the life guard that was in charge of the slide, and she was beautiful. She was sitting on a stool, her dark hair blowing in the wind. I felt my heart explode. And when she smiled, oh when that girl smiled, I fell in love right then and there, and it was the biggest mistake of my life.


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New Post 6/24/2008 1:52 PM
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Re: I Draw Fake Smiles to Hide My Real Tears [a joe ff] 

okay even if no body reads this, im still gonna post more cuz i already wrote it.(:

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Chapter: 2

You didn’t think I was done with my story, did you? Well I’m not so don’t worry. Where was I? Oh yeah, the biggest mistake of my life…

I stood there staring at her for another minute, until Frankie started calling my name.

“Joe?” He said giving me a weird look. “What are you looking at?”

“Huh?” I realized he was talking to me. “Oh, nothing. Just a bird or something.” I said making up something.

“Well, it’s almost our turn. Grab a tube!” He said rushing me to the pile of tubes. I grabbed one and set it down next to Frankie. I have to go talk to this girl, I thought. I took a few steps towards her until I was about a foot away. She didn’t notice me at first, she was helping a little boy and his mother get ready to go down the slide. Once the red light next to her stool turned green, she pushed them down into the darkness. 

“Hey,” I said to her shyly, “I’m Joe.”

She turned and looked at me, her eyes starting at my head going down to my feet and back up to meet my eyes. “Hello Joe.” She said emotionless. 

“And your name is?” I asked her, my voice was begging for a response.

“Kristin.” She said and looked down over the edge of the railing and down to the pool where the slide let out. 

“Well, Kristin, it’s nice to meet you.” I said smiling at her, hoping for one in return. I needed to see the thing that made me fall in love again.

“You too, I suppose.” She said without any emotion. I wasn’t going to let her not even smile at me. I’m Joe Jonas for goodness sakes! I vowed right then and there that I would get this girl to loosen up and possibly fall for me, another huge mistake.

“Well miss negativity,” I started, trying to think of a way to get her to laugh, “You live around here?”

“Not quite.” She said looking at me with annoyance in her eyes. “My father owns this park and a few other places around here. I come here in the summer to help out, relax, get a tan.”

“Oh interesting.” I said giving her a smile. “Where are you from then?”

“Not that it’s any of your business, but I’m from Chicago.” She said. I looked into her eyes. Her beautiful blue eyes. 

“Wow.” I said out loud about her eyes, “I mean, cool.”

“What about you, Mr. Smiles?” She asked, her mouth almost formed a smile. “Where are you from?”

“Well, not that it’s any of your business,” I said stealing her line, “but I’m from New Jersey.”

“Joe? It’s our turn to go!” Frankie shouted trying to lift the big tube. I had forgotten about him.

“Sorry Frankie, come on over here I’d like you to meet someone.” I said calling him over.

“Awe, and what’s your name?” Kristin said smiling at Frankie. She was smiling at Frankie?! No wonder he was The Man, I thought.

“I’m Frankie, but you can just call me The Man.” Frankie said trying to be cool. The truth is, he was doing a good job at it. Kristin laughed. Oh her laugh, it had to have been the most amazing sound I had ever heard in my life.

“Well, ‘The Man’,” Kristin started, “You are the cutest, or should I say, most handsome boy I have seen in a long time.” She smiled at him again. Well if she liked Frankie, he could be my ticket to spend some time with her so she can fall for me, I thought.

“Well Kristin,” I started, “Frankie and I were wondering if you would like to come with us to get something to eat and spend the day with us. You wanna?” 

“Well it does sound tempting.” She said smiling, at Frankie, of course. “You know what? I’d love to.” In my head all I heard was ‘I love you.’

“I love you, too.” I said quietly.

“What?” She said. Hopefully she didn’t hear that.

“Um, I said I’d love to, too.” I smiled at her. She was so beautiful.

“Can I please ride the slide now?” Frankie asked. His voice sounded like he was bored and wanted to ride the slide really badly.

“Sure, how about you two go down the slide and I’ll close it up, up here.” Kristin said, looking at me, finally.

“Sounds good.” I said to her. “Come on Frank, let’s do this thing.” I lifted up the tube and set it into the water. Frankie sat down in the front of the double tube and I sat in the back. 

“See you boys at the bottom.” Kristin said waving at us as we headed down the slide into the darkness. If only we would have stayed there.


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New Post 6/24/2008 2:56 PM
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Re: I Draw Fake Smiles to Hide My Real Tears [a joe ff] *needs readers & comments please!* 

please comment :/


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New Post 6/24/2008 3:06 PM
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Re: I Draw Fake Smiles to Hide My Real Tears [a joe ff] *needs readers & comments please!* 

aww how cute

of course joe

tryin to land a lady

lol jk jk

it's amazing

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OMJ!!

I'm so loving this!

I'm officialy addicted!!

I swear, I dunno why you don't have more readers. That just doesn't make sense!

This fanfic is just incredible!!!

I cannot wait to read more!!



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New Post 6/24/2008 3:35 PM
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Chapter: 3

I could see again. Frankie’s and my tube flew out of the opening at the end of the slide after a long, curvy, and dark ride. A splash of water blocked my view, but once it was out of the way, I saw Kristin again. She was waiting at the bottom with a smirk on her face.

“Whoa! That was awesome!” Frankie shouted as he leaped off of the tube and into the pool. 

“Yeah it sure was.” I said staring at Kristin. I got off of the tube and lifted it out of the pool and set it with the others.

“So, where are you boys taking me?” Kristin asked with a small smile forming on her face.

“Well,” I thought for a second, “I have no idea actually.”

She smiled at me. Yes a smile! I smiled back at her. “How do you not know? You offered to take me out for the day.” She said playfully

“Well this is the first time I’ve ever been here and I don’t quite know my way around here yet.” I told her. It was true.

“Well then I’m going to have to give you a little tour, aren’t I?” she said with another smile. I was on a role.

“Yes,” I smiled, “You are.”

“Just forget I’m here.” Frankie sighed. I couldn’t help but laugh.

“Frankie, we didn’t forget about you.” I said bending my knees so I could be face-to-face with my little brother.

“Yeah, I would never, ever be able to forget your adorable little smile” Kristin said smiling down at Frankie. 

“Really?” He asked looking at her, puzzled.

“Really.” She said, “I promise I will never forget you, no matter what happens. You will always have your own spot in my memory, and in my heart.” Frankie smiled, and so did I. Was she not the most amazing girl in the world? And Frankie had to have been the luckiest boy in the world.

“Okay good!” he said and laughed. I stood up again. 

“I have to admit,” I said to Kristin, “You are pretty amazing.”

“Well thank you very much.” She smiled flirtatiously, “Oh and there’s something I just have to tell you.” 

“What is it?” I smiled. Did she love me too? Oh I just had to know. Please love me back! I thought to myself.

“Come closer,” she motioned for me to lean my head closer. She put her mouth about an inch away from my ear. This could be it, I thought. She tapped my shoulder and whispered, “You’re it!” and with that she was off. She grabbed Frankie’s hand, “Come on little man, don’t let your brother tag you, he’s it!” 

I laughed, even though I was a bit disappointed. Then I ran after them. “I’m going to get you!” I shouted after them, and I really meant it. I was going to get her, I wanted her so badly. I was in love with her already, and now all I needed to do was get her to fall in love with me.

“No, trust me, you’re not!” Kristin shouted and laughed. Little did I know, she was right.

 


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I like it!!! pms!!! pleaseee!! =D

 

 

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Chapter: 4

So what do you think of this so far? I fell in love with a girl I had just met and knew barely anything about. Was I crazy? Yeah, I admit it, I was. Crazy to think that someone like her, would love someone like me. I should have never gone on that slide, never went to the water park, never left the suite. Nick and Kevin are known as the smarter brothers, and now I know why. Stupid Hawaii. Stupid sun. Stupid girl. Stupid me. 

Well, I might as well get back to my story, I’ve told you that much already. I can’t just stop now. Where did I leave off? Oh yeah, tag. Stupid game. Well anyway after that game of tag we got something to eat at a burger place and then hung out by the beach the rest of the day. It was June first. The first day I was in Hawaii and I was having the greatest summer of my life, or so I thought. After the sun had set is when the day had ended for the three of us.

“Well, Joe.” Kristin looked me in the eyes. “I hate to admit it, but I had a lot of fun today.”

“So did I.” I said looking her in the eyes. Boy, did I want to kiss her.

“I have to go, but maybe tomorrow we can hang out again.” She smiled at me then looked over at Frankie who was splashing at the ocean’s edge. “This time, just the two of us.”

I smiled at her. “That sounds like a date to me.”

“Call it what you want.” She smiled, “I’ll see you tomorrow.”

“See ya.” I said as she began walking away.

“Bye Frankie.” She waved at him and he waved back. And then, before I knew it, she was gone.

“Come on, Frankie.” I said looking off into the distance. “Let’s go back to the suite.”

Yeah I know what you’re thinking. It sure did seem like she liked me, didn’t it? It sure seemed like she was falling for me, didn’t it? And it sure seemed like I was falling deeper and deeper in love with her, didn’t it? Well the truth is only one of those three is true, and it’s the last one. I think about that day a lot. I think about how she lead me on, about how she tricked me. And even though every time I think about it, it makes me hate her even more, I still can’t help but be in love with her. The girl that makes me draw fake smiles all over my personality, just to hide my tears. My real, true tears.


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I love this!

but poor joe! he so sad.... how dare kirstin make him sad!

Write more soon!! xD


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