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New Post 6/25/2008 4:40 AM
User is offline emily [Go Penguins! ♥]
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Re: I Draw Fake Smiles to Hide My Real Tears [a joe ff] *needs readers & comments please!* 

thank you so much everyone(:

im typing up the next chapter right now. it'll be up real soon!


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New Post 6/25/2008 5:26 AM
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Modified By emily [Go Penguins! ♥]  on 6/25/2008 3:27:44 AM)

 

 

Chapter: 6

So there I was, following her around like I was her pet and she had me on a leash. Why did she have to be so beautiful? Why did I have to fall so hard? Well those questions don’t have answers so I might as well stop asking them. So anyways, I had been following her for a while…

 

 

“Kristin!” I whined like a little kid, “Where are we going? Please tell me!” I pouted at her. She laughed.

“Can’t you wait one more minute?” She asked as she laughed at my childish act.

“No.” I told her and smiled.

“Well that’s just to darn bad cause you’re going to have to.”

She was so cute when she got an attitude. She was so cute when she took the lead. She was so cute when… well heck, she was always so cute in my eyes.

“Are we there yet?” I whined like Frankie did for about an hour on the plane ride here.

“Almost.” She said. We walked a little bit further until we came to what seemed to be a gigantic rock sitting on the beach.

“Oh look, a rock. How cool!” I said sarcastically. She punched my shoulder lightly.

“It’s not just a rock.” she said pointing at it.

“Oh, Isn’t it?” I said with curiosity.

“Nope.” She said smiling, “It’s my rock!”

“Aren’t you the luckiest girl in the world!” I said, once again using sarcasm. “I asked for my very own rock last Christmas, but all I got was a stupid leaf!”

She laughed. The wind was blowing her hair around her face that was glowing with beauty. Never in my entire life had I seen a girl who had the effect she had on me.

“Before you make fun of it anymore you should come check it out inside.” she said walked around to the other side of the huge stone.

“Inside?” I asked following her around. I stepped inside of the rock, I guess now cave, and was amazed. There must have been small holes in the top of the rock because thin strips of light shown through, making the whole inside shine. The cave wasn’t huge but it was big enough to walk around in and had room for several people.

“So is this where you have all of your late night parties?” I asked jokingly.

“If you call sitting alone and thinking a late night party, then yes it is.” she smiled and sat down on one of the three large pieces of stone on the ground and motioned for me to sit next to her, so I did.

“Oh I see.” I said being serious. “What do you think about when you come here alone?”

“Well, just about anything and everything.” She said looking around the cave. “This is like my very own secret hide out. I come here when I need a break from life. It’s the place I can relax and tell myself that everything’s going to be alright.”

“That’s really nice.” I said smiling at her.

“Thanks.” She said smiling back. “You know, Joe, you’re the only person I’ve ever told about this place.”

“Thanks for trusting me enough to bring me.” That was a great feeling. Knowing that this was our thing. No one else shared this place with her, only me. I was the only one. That was a good thought.

“It really is beautiful the way the light hit’s the walls, just right, and make the whole cave glow.” She said looking me in the eyes. My heart was beating fast, and I had a feeling she could tell. She moved closer to me. “It’s one of the most beautiful things I’ve ever seen.” She continued.

I looked at her beautiful face. The cave’s walls couldn’t even compare to how the light made Kristin’s already beautiful face look. Her eyes shined a bright blue. “Kristin,” I said putting my hand on hers, “you are the most beautiful thing I’ve ever seen.”

“You sure know how to make a girl feel good.” she said smiling at me. Was it possible that her smile just got prettier? She squeezed my hand for a few seconds and then loosened her grip without letting go.

“And you sure know how to make a guy feel like he’s falling in love.” I said staring deep into her eyes.

Then something happened that I had wanted to happen since I first saw her, but wasn’t quite expecting to happen for at least another week. Kristin leaned over, held my hand with her left and put her right hand on the side of my head. And then she kissed me. I closed my eyes. Was this happening? Oh yes, it sure was. After about ten seconds of pure amazingness, Kristin’s lips separated from mine and she sat back in her seat smiling and still holding my hand.

“Wow.” Is all I could say. I had a huge smile on my face.

“Right back at ya,” She said smiling, not as big as I was, but it was still a smile.

Just then my iPhone rang. Backstreet boys. I hurried and got it out of my pocket before Kristin could hear too much of the song. She giggled as I answered it.

“Hello?” I said to the caller.

“Hey, Joe where are you at?” it was Kevin, I could tell by his voice and lack of introduction.

I looked at Kristin before answering. She was looking at the cave’s walls again. “I’m with a friend.” I told him, not giving away my whereabouts to keep our hide out hidden.

“Well Mom and Dad want you to come to the suite, like now.” He said. I could hear Frankie in the background asking where I was.

“Ugh why?” I moaned. I didn’t want to leave Kristin already.

“I honestly don’t know, but they said to hurry.” he said. He sounded serious so I guessed it wasn’t a joke to get me to go home for no reason.

“Okay fine. See you soon.” I said and hung up. I slipped my cell back into my pocket and went back over to Kristin.

“Hey, I got to go. My parents want me back at the suite.” I told her sadly.

“No sweat.” She said like it was no big deal, “I have to go soon anyway.”

“Okay, well then I’ll see you tomorrow?” I asked her.

“It’s a date.” she said smiling.

I had left the cave and let my eyes adjust to the change in brightness before I sprinted back to the suite. I didn’t want to keep Mom and Dad waiting.

Okay, so doesn’t that sound like a fairytale? Like a dream come true? Well I sure thought so. I had spent less than two days with Kristin and we had already kissed and I was already in love. If only it could have stayed like that. Like a dream come true. But instead, I woke up from that dream and when I fell back asleep, little did I know that a nightmare was waiting for me.


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New Post 6/25/2008 1:32 PM
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Re: I Draw Fake Smiles to Hide My Real Tears [a joe ff] *needs readers & comments please!* 

I'm pretty muh addicter to your story haha. :]   I can't wait to read moreee


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New Post 6/25/2008 10:01 PM
User is offline emily [Go Penguins! ♥]
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Re: I Draw Fake Smiles to Hide My Real Tears [a joe ff] *needs readers & comments please!* 

i'm gonna start working on the next chapter now, but while i do that you should read me and luna's joint, Dear Diary; Where have you been. It is in need of readers and comments. please and thank you very much:D


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New Post 6/25/2008 10:59 PM
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Re: I Draw Fake Smiles to Hide My Real Tears [a joe ff] *needs readers & comments please!* 

Love it!

wow... super unexpected...

I never thought that would happen =P

Can't wait to read more!!


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New Post 6/26/2008 12:07 AM
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Re: I Draw Fake Smiles to Hide My Real Tears [a joe ff] *needs readers & comments please!* 

 

 

 

 

 

Chapter: 7

On my walk back to the suite after ‘The kiss’, I couldn’t stop thinking about it. Kristin must have liked me too, it seemed obvious. She was the one that kissed me. She showed my her secret hide out. She said that she’d see me tomorrow for a date. Either she really liked me or she was a good actress and liar.

I made it back to the suite to find that my parents weren’t there. Only Kevin and Nick. Kevin was sitting on his bed reading some book. Nick was sitting at the table eating a sandwich.

“Where’s mom and dad?” I asked looking at Kevin. “Why did I have to come here?”

Nick and Kevin looked at each other and laughed. “Dude he actually fell for it.” Nick said to Kevin, still laughing.

“You bet he did.” Kevin said, “You owe me five bucks.” I guessed that they had made a bet on this stupid trick they played on me.

“Good one! That was a good one guys!” I said with extreme sarcasm. I was mad at them at first, but then I thought how Kristin said she had to leave anyway. I was just glad Kevin hadn’t called any earlier. I sat down in the chair next to Nick.

“So how was Kristin?” Nick asked me with a smirk on his face. I smirked back at him and grabbed his sandwich out of his hands. I took a big bite and then set it back on his plate. Once I had swallowed I answered him.

“Better than your sandwich.” I said smiling at him.

“Anything’s better than this sandwich now that it has your germs on it.” he said dangling the half eaten sandwich in the air like it was contaminated. I ignored him.

“So what’d you two do?” Kevin asked me, not looking up from his book.

“Well,” I said smiling, “I don’t kiss and tell.” Kevin looked up at me and Nick raised his eyebrows.

“No way.” Nick said not believing me.

“It’s true.” I smiled at him and tried to act cool.

“Joe, you’ve known the girl two days!” Kevin said in disbelief.

“And I’m already in love.” I smiled.

It was true. My love was true. I was true. She was not true.


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New Post 6/26/2008 2:07 AM
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bump:D


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New Post 6/26/2008 5:07 AM
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Re: I Draw Fake Smiles to Hide My Real Tears [a joe ff] *needs readers & comments please!* 

i love this! please post more soon before i freak out from need-to-read-new-chapter syndrome! xP haha pms!


LoveBug thanks Emily! :]
 
New Post 6/26/2008 2:56 PM
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Re: I Draw Fake Smiles to Hide My Real Tears [a joe ff] *needs readers & comments please!* 

haha loved this chapter!!

Nick and Kevin are so devious...

and Joe germs!!! =P

This chapter was amazing!!

Can't wait for the next one!!!


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New Post 6/26/2008 3:19 PM
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Re: I Draw Fake Smiles to Hide My Real Tears [a joe ff] *needs readers & comments please!* 

new reader!!

ahhh i LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this story

you are an amazing writer!

make sure u post soon :)

 


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