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You Save Me [[Joe FF - CHAPTER 9 UP 7/28]] AUTHOR'S NOTE 
Modified By xo~musical~note~xo  on 8/6/2008 12:12:41 AM)

Ok so the first post on this came up anonymus because my computer was being a pain.

For my Broken readers who stumble across this story - BROKEN WILL BE BACK TO BEING UPDATED!!  For those who'd like to check it out, the link is in my signature.

This story has been in my head or months, but unfortunately, school and such reared its ugly head and thus left me no time to write.  So now that it's summer I've got time to write!  =]

I hope you guys like it!  Comments make me smile =)

--Lauren

You Save Me

 

Chapter 1

 

Kerralyn glanced at the tiny clock that was on the bottom corner of the laptop that illuminated her dark room.  It read 1:43, meaning she had barely four hours before she had to wake up and drag herself through yet another day of school.  Sighing she pulled her computer onto her lap and clicked into yet another music chat room that had a few people still left in it – probably those on the west coast.  She aimlessly began chatting with the three people that were left in the AOL Music chat, not paying much attention to what they were saying and instead spending most of her energy on decoding her own tiny and smudged scrawl from a notebook.  Hardly noticing as members began to sign off, she slowly managed to make out the letters, typing each word carefully into a document.  Her eyelids began to slide shut before a soft ding jolted her back into wakefulness.  She glanced at the chat window, seeing that everyone had signed out but someone new had signed in.

 

DJ-Danger815:  Hello?  Helloooooooo?  is anyone here?

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx: Uh…yeah I’m here.  Sort of.

DJ-Danger815: Sort of? 

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx:  Yes.  Sort of.

DJ-Danger815:  Um, ok then.

DJ-Danger815: 

DJ-Danger815:  I’m…Danger

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx:  Please tell me that your parents did not really name you Danger.

DJ-Danger815:  Yup.

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx:  Sure they did.

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx:  Since I can tell that we’re using nicknames here, I’m Musical Note.

DJ-Danger815:  Hi Musical Note!

DJ-Danger815: 

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx:  Um, hi…Danger?

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx:  So…

DJ-Danger815:  So…?  I’m guessing that you like music

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx:  Nah, I’m just in the AOL Music chat because I like…swimming.

DJ-Danger815:  So you like swimming but not music?

 

She sighed at her computer, wondering why on earth she was still in the chat with a guy who called himself Danger and obviously didn’t understand the meaning of sarcasm.

 

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx:  No, Sherlock,  I like music.  And swimming.  But that’s beside the point right now because…oh never mind.

DJ-Danger815:  My brother’s name is Sherlock!

DJ-Danger815:  So let’s get this straight, Musical Note…

DJ-Danger815:  You like music and swimming and THAT’S why you’re in this chat.

 

Kerralyn had to strongly resist the urge to slap herself upside the head as she typed, each word slowly and deliberately.

 

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx:  First off Danger,  I don’t care right now if your brother’s name is Sherlock or not.

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx:  and second of all.  I am in this chat because I like MUSIC.  The swimming has nothing to do with any of it.

DJ-Danger815:  But you still like swimming right?

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx:  YES ALREADY.

DJ-Danger815:  Geesh.  No need to get all huffy about it.

DJ-Danger815: …

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx:  I’m TRYING to write over here.

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx:  And don’t even ask what. 

DJ-Danger815:  Whatcha writing?

DJ-Danger815: :P

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx:  Did I not say don’t ask?

DJ-Danger815:  Maybe…

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx:  If I tell you what I’m writing will you not ask again?

DJ-Danger815:  Yes.

 

Eager for some way to keep whoever was on the other side of the chat from driving her crazy, Kerralyn quickly typed out a reply.

 

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx:  Fine.  I’m writing a poem.  Or maybe lyrics.  I haven’t quite figured it out just yet.

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx:  Does that answer satisfy you?

DJ-Danger815:  Can I ask one more question?

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx:  As long as you aren’t going to be so annoying about it.

DJ-Danger815:  I’ll try not to be :P

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx:  Alright then.

DJ-Danger815:  Can I read it?

 

I froze and stared at my computer, my fingers hovering over the keyboard on what my head wanted me to say.  My fingers shifted as I typed out a single word.

 

xxAngelicMusicalNotexx:  Okay.

 

 


[Click for FF] Credit to Ari for my ah-mazing siggy =] Click for my other fics =] You Save Me [A Joe Fic] You Don't Even Know [ONESHOT]
 
New Post 6/24/2008 4:10 PM
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Re: You Save Me [[Joe FF]] 

omj i like this, like a lot! :D

pms!!!!


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New Post 6/24/2008 5:15 PM
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Re: You Save Me [[Joe FF]] 

Thanks so much!  I'll be posting more after I get a few more comments, I'm working on Chapter 2 tonight.

--Lauren


[Click for FF] Credit to Ari for my ah-mazing siggy =] Click for my other fics =] You Save Me [A Joe Fic] You Don't Even Know [ONESHOT]
 
New Post 6/24/2008 6:14 PM
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okay awesome! i can't wait! (:


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New Post 6/24/2008 6:33 PM
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I adore this story to the higghest level.
Its cute & it made me laugh, my kind of story.
Please post more (:






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New Post 6/24/2008 10:20 PM
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Re: You Save Me [[Joe FF]] 

Thanks guys!  I'm going to attempt to have the next chapter up tonight, but I've got to redo the posters on my walls again and put up a press release for the soccer team I work for, so I don't know.  I'll try though!

--Lauren


[Click for FF] Credit to Ari for my ah-mazing siggy =] Click for my other fics =] You Save Me [A Joe Fic] You Don't Even Know [ONESHOT]
 
New Post 6/25/2008 12:21 AM
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Re: You Save Me [[Joe FF]] 

As promised!  I wrote most of this on the way to the soccer game tonight.  I hope you guys enjoy the next chapter.  Thanks so much for your comments, they make me smile =].

*Note:  The half written poem in this chapter is mine and I would very much appreciate if no one took it [without asking and crediting me first].  Thank you!

--Lauren

You Save Me
 
Chapter 2
 
xxAngelicMusicalNotexx: Let me just finish typing it.
DJ-Danger815: I’ll be waiting then.
 
Kerralyn sped typed the last bit of what she had written, characteristically self conscious as she prepared to send it.
 
xxAngelicMusicalNotexx: It’s not that good.
xxAngelicMusicalNotexx: And it isn’t done either.
DJ-Danger815: That’s ok.
DJ-Danger815: I’m sure it’s perfectly fine.
xxAngelicMusicalNotexx: Tell me that AFTER you’ve read it
DJ-Danger815: Fine then. I will.
 
Kerralyn rolled her eyes, but reluctantly kept typing, wondering why she was allowing some random guy to read her inner thoughts.
 
DJ-Danger815:   …Music Note?
DJ-Danger815: Music Note?
 
She glanced up seeing the flood of messages that “Danger” had sent.
 
xxAngelicMusicalNotexx: I’m here, I’m here. I’m just finishing typing it now
DJ-Danger815: Oh.
DJ-Danger815: =)
xxAngelicMusicalNotexx: Promise me that you won’t laugh at it.
xxAngelicMusicalNotexx: Promise me.
DJ-Danger815: Never.
DJ-Danger815: I would never laugh at it.
DJ-Danger815: I promise.
xxAngelicMusicalNotexx: Okay. Let me copy and paste it.
 
She slowly highlighted the unfinished piece that stared back at her, each word reflecting from the screen and being imprinted into her mind. Before she could change her mind, she pasted her writing into the chat screen and hit send.
 
xxAngelicMusicalNotexx: Sobbing Princess
 
Everyday I wake up
And hide the tears behind the smile
Living on the quick replies
Oh nothing. I'm fine.
 
By day, I'm calm and collected
Perfectly holding everything together
By night, a sobbing princess
The pieces, shattering around me

Hiding the pain so easily behind a facade
That no one sees through
 
Then she waited. For a response, or for Danger, whoever it really was, to sign off.
 
xxAngelicMusicalNotexx: Danger?
xxAngelicMusicalNotexx: I knew it. It’s horrible.
xxAngelicMusicalNotexx: I shouldn’t have even mentioned it, let alone sent it.
xxAngelicMusicalNotexx: I’ll just go now.
xxAngelicMusicalNotexx: Bye.
 
A tear slipped down Kerralyn’s cheek as she prepared to get into bed and turn off her computer. As she was about to hit the power button to shut her computer off, a message popped onto her screen.
 
DJ-Danger815: Wait.
DJ-Danger815: Don’t go.
DJ-Danger815: That was beautifully written, Music Note…
DJ-Danger815: But one question for you.
DJ-Danger815: Is that true.
 
Several more tears slipped down her cheeks as she hit the keys slowly, a tear hitting each one as if proving what she was typing.
 
xxAngelicMusicalNotexx: Yes.
 
Hundreds of miles away, a single tear slipped down Joe Jonas’ cheek as the tour bus rolled along in the darkness.

[Click for FF] Credit to Ari for my ah-mazing siggy =] Click for my other fics =] You Save Me [A Joe Fic] You Don't Even Know [ONESHOT]
 
New Post 6/25/2008 4:39 AM
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Re: You Save Me [[Joe FF]] 

aww! i love this!

pasap!


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New Post 6/25/2008 5:48 AM
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this is reall cutee pms !


real eyes, realize real lies.

Ashlee's awesome! <3

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New Post 6/25/2008 12:32 PM
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Awhh man, greast chapter.
I'm falling in love with this story.

& By the way that poem was Brilliant.






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