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User is offline EmiLy [[what happens when tomorrow comes will you still feel the same?.]]
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losing the music [[discontinued]] 
Modified By EmiLy [[what happens when tomorrow comes will you still feel the same?.]]  on 8/2/2008 12:38:13 PM)

hey guys im emily and i havnt posted ffs for a while just commented them but i had an idea and so i wrote the first few chapters out and well lets see how u lke it

prolouge/1st chap. part 1

music came blasting through the windows of the small eclipse and it slowed to a stop when the light on the pole turned red.The one in the passengers seat started smiling"that was awesome!".her blonde hair fell just past her shoulder blades.she had piercing blue eyes that seemed to be dancing with her enjoyment

the driver turned to look at her and chuckled"happy birthday eliza".her hazel eyes seemed to spakle watching her friend look so hapy she pushed her brown side-swoop bangs out of her eyes.the light turned green and the eclipse started agian.suddenly elizas perfectly harmony singing turnd into a scream as she stared at the trucks approaching headlights.

Without you I don't know how my life will be
But I believe
It's not goodbye
Cause I will remember you
And I will see you again
When I rise
Cause I know and I believe
I will see you in eternity

the last words she heard made tears slip down her cheeks as she looked at the picture of her and her bestfriend on the dashboard.she heard the screaching of the car and felt her body jerk to the side hitting the window and everything went black

ehh its a little dramatic i know but it gets better so how do u like it???


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New Post 6/29/2008 3:44 PM
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Re: losing the music [[ff]] 

bump??


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New Post 6/29/2008 3:50 PM
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Re: losing the music [[ff]] 

It's so sad! But I like it<33

You should keep going. =]

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New Post 6/29/2008 4:01 PM
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Re: losing the music [[ff]] 

 CuteAchariam13 [We'll be alright, together far in the night.] wrote

It's so sad! But I like it<33

You should keep going. =]

-Mel<33

awe thanks that means alot to me


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New Post 6/29/2008 7:47 PM
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Re: losing the music [[ff]] 

Nah, it's no problem<33 I luve to comment.

Soo, new chapter soon, yeah?

Post More Soon!

-Mel<33


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New Post 6/29/2008 10:30 PM
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Re: losing the music [[ff]] 

 CuteAchariam13 [We'll be alright, together far in the night.] wrote

Nah, it's no problem<33 I luve to comment.

Soo, new chapter soon, yeah?

Post More Soon!

-Mel<33

yup

bout to type it up =]]


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New Post 6/29/2008 10:51 PM
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Re: losing the music [[ff]] 

eliza awoke to a beeping sound coming from the far side of the room.she groaned and opened her eyes.she wa in an all white room with two empty chair at the side of her bed.she looked down at the thin crisp sheets covering her body

"why am i in a hospital?"she asked herself quietly

then all of the memory came flooding back to the night the night that it all happened

flash back

the driver turned to look at her and chuckled"happy birthday eliza".her hazel eyes seemed to spakle watching her friend look so hapy she pushed her brown side-swoop bangs out of her eyes.the light turned green and the eclipse started agian.suddenly elizas perfectly harmony singing turnd into a scream as she stared at the trucks approaching headlights.

Without you I don't know how my life will be
But I believe
It's not goodbye
Cause I will remember you
And I will see you again
When I rise
Cause I know and I believe
I will see you in eternity

the last words she heard made tears slip down her cheeks as she looked at the picture of her and her bestfriend on the dashboard.she heard the screaching of the car and felt her body jerk to the side hitting the window and everything went black

*end of flashback*

she looked at the door and it creaked open her mother stared at her then screamed and ran towards her

"mom what happened to lexi"eliza asked bearly audible for her mother to hear

her mother stopped hugging her and looked at her daughter.eliza knew the answer but wanted to know for sure

"eliza she passed away she was awake enough to tell them to give you this"her mom said handng her a small box

2 years later

eliza stared out the window of the plane looking at the clouds silently praying

dear god

im not mad at you anymore 
i know you had to take lacey away it was her time
tell her im sorry for giving up hope on you
tell her i miss her
and tell her im sorry i lost the music
amen

she stared at the necklace and read the back one more time in small letters was laceys note

eliza
i love you never give up hope
no matter what
dont lose the music
ily lacey

after that eliza wasnt the same she was missing her best friend and no one could replace her it seemed the insperation for the music drained out of her.could one spcial boy help bring it back


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New Post 6/29/2008 11:18 PM
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Re: losing the music [[ff]] 

Awww.

[teartear.] so sad. REALLY sad.

Butttt;; it's amazing like your writting!!

I'm lovin this and want more ..please?

-Mel<33


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New Post 6/29/2008 11:23 PM
User is offline EmiLy [[what happens when tomorrow comes will you still feel the same?.]]
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Re: losing the music [[ff]] 

 CuteAchariam13 [We'll be alright, together far in the night.] wrote

Awww.

[teartear.] so sad. REALLY sad.

Butttt;; it's amazing like your writting!!

I'm lovin this and want more ..please?

-Mel<33

lol ill post more tonight

i dont think im going to get any more readers though

='[[


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New Post 6/30/2008 2:44 PM
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Re: losing the music [[ff]] 

bumppppp

 


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