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New Post 6/29/2008 6:44 PM
User is offline EmiLy [[what happens when tomorrow comes will you still feel the same?.]]
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Re: Sunrise Goodbyes [Nick Fic] 

this is amazing!!!

i love it!!!

post more soon please

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New Post 6/29/2008 7:42 PM
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Re: Sunrise Goodbyes [Nick Fic] Chap. 2 up! 

Thanks a bunch for reading guys!

It means soo much to me. [you guys don't even know how much.]

I love yous!!

and Enjoy<33

-Mel<33

Chapter 2

The girls waited in the arrival area for the boys anxiously. Melanie was thumping her foot to the music that was blaring through her headphones. Eve was also listening to her iPod but keeping herself occupied with a magazine she had bought from a newsstand. Melanie’s eyes darted every now and then back and forth from the clock on the wall to the terminal gate. Eve noticed this act and said, “Geez, calm down, Mel. They’re going to be here soon. Just another half hour.”

“Which is too long for me, Eve. I haven’t seen Nick in over a year from his traveling.” Mel replied. They continued what they were doing; occasionally talking about how they would feel seeing them in a long time. Melanie’s stomach churned every time they would talk about Nick. Their love was blossoming into a relationship. It was only about several weeks ago that they had made their relationship official. They loved each other and knew it. Neither of them had said it yet. It was on their insides burning and trying to push out. However, they were too scared to say it. They knew that if they pushed things, it would mess up and it would fail. So they decided to take it slowly and cherish their time they had together.

A half hour passed and the doors opened at exactly 6:35 sharp. The girls jumped up from their seats and headed to the gate. Person after person came out and the boys were no where to be seen. Actually the whole family would be flying in. Melanie’s family and the Jonas’s had been acquainted ever since the mothers met in college. Just like Eve and Mel, they would never be apart, inseparable.

Finally, after to what seems like hours of waiting to Melanie, the family walked through the doors. Nick spotted Melanie, dropped his things and ran up to her, embracing her in a tight hug and a passionate kiss. “What took you so long?” she whispered against his lips. “Sorry. I, too was rushing to see you. I just couldn’t wait.” He whispered back. They pulled apart to find everyone standing there and staring at them. Mel blushed and greeted everyone with hugs and kisses. “Oh my, Melanie. You’ve grown so much.” Gushed Mrs. Jonas. “Oh. Thanks Aunt Denise. Mom will be surprised to see you! She doesn’t know that you’re coming. She thinks it’s only your boys!” Melanie said holding onto Nick’s hand for dear life.

After much greetings Melanie, Eve and the family headed for Melanie’s home. The whole bunch crammed up in a single SUV that was rented instantly and awaited their destination in anxious tiredness. The boys had woken up extra early and had canceled any plans for the whole weekend. They wanted to make this weekend a special weekend for Melanie. It was her birthday tomorrow which was February the 22nd. Melanie and Nick took the very last row in the car to catch up on things. They missed each other terribly and needed to be with each other for every minute for the upcoming 3 days. 


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New Post 6/29/2008 8:16 PM
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Re: Sunrise Goodbyes [Nick Fic] Chap. 2 up! 

pre movie bump<33

Luves yas! =]

-Mel<33


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New Post 6/29/2008 8:41 PM
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Re: Sunrise Goodbyes [Nick Fic] Chap. 2 up! 

Im bumping

Im bumping

Im bumping

LOVEDDDDDD ITTTTTTTT!!!!!!!

PMN please!!!!!!

Awww you kissed!!!

<3steph<3


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New Post 6/29/2008 9:57 PM
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Re: Sunrise Goodbyes [Nick Fic] Chap. 2 up! 

Awwwwwww!!

So so so soooooo cute!!!

That chapter was just so cute and sweet!!

Mel and Nick make the cutest couple!! And this is only the second chapter!!! haha

Okay, I just wanted to highlight one part in the chapter:

Nick spotted Melanie, dropped his things and ran up to her, embracing her in a tight hug and a passionate kiss. “What took you so long?” she whispered against his lips. “Sorry. I, too was rushing to see you. I just couldn’t wait.” He whispered back. They pulled apart to find everyone standing there and staring at them.

I loved loved loved that part!!! I was laughing at the end!! If I was there, I so would have yelled "AWKWARD!!!"

Okay.... why do I feel like one of those judges on a show... like So You Think You Can Dance (it just so happens I'm watching that show right now haha) when they show you those instant replays and stuff?? haha

sorry..... very random and long comment.... I'll just stop talking now...


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New Post 6/29/2008 10:20 PM
User is offline EmiLy [[what happens when tomorrow comes will you still feel the same?.]]
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Re: Sunrise Goodbyes [Nick Fic] Chap. 2 up! 

awe that was so cute!!!

i love ittt!!

so yepp yepp u need to post more like

"checks watch"

NOW!!


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New Post 6/29/2008 11:12 PM
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Re: Sunrise Goodbyes [Nick Fic] Chap. 2 up! 

OMG.

after watching the movie I come back to comments!

I LOVE you guys<33

seriously, thanks so much emily, mel and steph. You guys make me wanna write more!!

Soo, I'm gonna be staying up late tonight and my brain is filled with oodles of ideas.

I don't think I have anything on tomorrow [let's hope and pray ;] ]

Soo there'll be much more updates comin your way!!

X's & O's

-Mel<33

Btw, BUMPERS!


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New Post 6/29/2008 11:20 PM
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Re: Sunrise Goodbyes [Nick Fic] Chap. 2 up! 

lol

your welcome

dont worry ill say up with so that way i get to see it as one of the first

hehe

-keep rocking emily<3


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New Post 6/29/2008 11:39 PM
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Re: Sunrise Goodbyes [Nick Fic] Chap. 2 up! 

Woot Woot!

Online Slumber Party!

lols. But sshweet! I have a camper up with me<33

Weel, if my mom doesn't pester me to go to sleep early then I'm good<3


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New Post 6/30/2008 12:04 AM
User is offline EmiLy [[what happens when tomorrow comes will you still feel the same?.]]
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Re: Sunrise Goodbyes [Nick Fic] Chap. 2 up! 

lol

my dad just came in and said emily go to bed

i ws like okay

im so not going to bed=]]


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