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Always With Me.
Prologue.
The two figures walked down the hospital hallway. One was tiny and short, making it obvious that the figure was a only a small child, perhaps the age of four. The other figure was tall and masculine, it was quite obvious that the taller one was the father to the smaller figure.
"Daddy, is Mommy gonna be alright?" the child had a small lisp, but nothing too noticible.
The child's father bit his lip and thought about it, for he himself didn't know. "She will."
The two approached the mother's room, to find out that she had passed on. The child was aware of that...but the child didn't quite understand.
--- I kinda kept it pretty omniscient[right word?] for now, because I actually have this in two diffrent versions. =]
Yea I'd say omniscient would be the right word. Haha. I love it so far, poor kid can't wait to read more so PMS.
~Aubrey♥
haha yes. its the right word. third person omniscient.
pms :)
I thought it'd be more omniscient than anonymous. But i'm glad you liked it. =]
I'm working on chapter one now, but I have to leave soon so it'll be up sometime tomorrow afternoon.
UNLESS I can get wireless connection at my sister's house. Which I rarely do, but I could try.
um...wow. and yes it is omniscient. and i feel bad for both the father and the child.
love this already though Katie.
post more soon chica please.
you and your mad writing skillz are at it again!!! that was fabulous!!! someone needs to post the first chapter soon!!! pwease :)
even tho it kinda sad i like it so far
write more soon
I had no wireless yesterday, so update soon. =]
It'll be after I watch Dude,Where's My Car?
bahaha...
Chapter One. "I'm so sorry, Mr.Jonas." the doctor looked at the father, his eyes brimmed with tears. Then the child spoke, "Daddy doesn't like to be called Mr.Jonas, he likes to be called Nick." The doctor smiled at the child, "Take care of your father." The child grinned. "I will." A few days after that, the funeral came along few children ran around in a back room by the soda machines and coffee maker was. Only the adults and teenagers understood what was actually happening. "Julie?" Nick searched through the group of children searching for his own. "Yeah,Daddy?" Julie asked. "Grandma is looking for you." Nick said. Julie scurried off in search of Nick's mother, Denise, and Nick trailed slowly behind his daughter. He knew they would make it, but it probably wouldn't be easy. And things ran smoothly until the first day of Kindergarden. Nick laid out the outfit that he'd picked out for her as she ate Lucky Charms at the kitchen table, swinging her legs back and forth happily. "I'm done!" Julie called as she jumped down from her chair and ran off to the bedroom where her father was. "M'kay, get ready dressed then meet me in the living room so I can fix your hair." Nick took various hair products into the living room. His gut told him...that this might not go as smoothly as he thought. ---- Kinda short, not as good as the prologue...but I promise that it WILL get better. =]
Chapter One. "I'm so sorry, Mr.Jonas." the doctor looked at the father, his eyes brimmed with tears. Then the child spoke, "Daddy doesn't like to be called Mr.Jonas, he likes to be called Nick." The doctor smiled at the child, "Take care of your father." The child grinned. "I will."
A few days after that, the funeral came along few children ran around in a back room by the soda machines and coffee maker was. Only the adults and teenagers understood what was actually happening.
"Julie?" Nick searched through the group of children searching for his own.
"Yeah,Daddy?" Julie asked.
"Grandma is looking for you." Nick said.
Julie scurried off in search of Nick's mother, Denise, and Nick trailed slowly behind his daughter. He knew they would make it, but it probably wouldn't be easy. And things ran smoothly until the first day of Kindergarden.
Nick laid out the outfit that he'd picked out for her as she ate Lucky Charms at the kitchen table, swinging her legs back and forth happily.
"I'm done!" Julie called as she jumped down from her chair and ran off to the bedroom where her father was.
"M'kay, get ready dressed then meet me in the living room so I can fix your hair." Nick took various hair products into the living room. His gut told him...that this might not go as smoothly as he thought.
---- Kinda short, not as good as the prologue...but I promise that it WILL get better. =]
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