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 6/30/2008 11:48 PM
 

bump.

i'll try to post more of this soon. im going to disney world in 2 days so im going to try to get at least one more chapter up on all of my fanfics before i leave. kay thanks:D


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 7/1/2008 12:21 AM
 
 Modified By G-Lolli [Mel]  on 6/30/2008 10:23:00 PM

Woohoo! Joe is gonna be on the Pittsburgh Penguins! That's actually one of my favorite teams, after my home team of course. =P

I'm already loving this fanfic!!

I can't wait to read more!!!


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 7/1/2008 1:57 AM
 

Post mooore!




Tattoos and a switchblade attitude.
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 7/1/2008 4:50 PM
 

Chapter~3

I looked out the window as we drove past skyscrapers and bridges and all of the other things you drive past in Pittsburgh. It was a really nice city. A lot of sights and cool looking buildings. I was almost lost in thought when we pulled into the players’ parking area at Mellon Arena.

“We’re here.” My dad said with a smile. He turned and looked at me. “Are you ready, Joe?”

“I’ve been ready for thirty-five years.” I said with the same tone and intentions I had when I said it to Kevin a few days ago. My dad just smiled.

“You know, Joe, that’s starting to get old, and you’re making me feel old for having a ’thirty-five year-old’ son.” He smiled at me and I just laughed. I guess it was getting old. It was my phrase of the week and I was using it every chance I got. Well, I would have to think of a new phrase soon, the week was almost over.

“Don’t worry, dad. I’m still eighteen, and you’re still sixty three.” I smiled. It was fun to joke around with him. He just shook his head smiling.

“Alright, Joe. Get out and go play hockey.”

We got out of the car and walked into the arena. I had been here earlier this year in January for the Best Of Both Worlds tour. I hadn’t gotten a chance to see the ice though since they had to cover it and put up the stage. Once we finally made it to where all the players were, Coach Therrien was waiting for me.

“Hello Joe.” He said smiling at me and then turning to my father, “Mr. Jonas, it’s nice to see you again.”

“Same to you.” My dad said smiling. “So what is Joseph going to be doing here exactly?” he asked Coach Therrien.

“Well,” he started, “I was thinking that he could practice with the team for a little while and if he wanted to and he was good enough, he could play in some games. He’s got talent and I think he would be a good addition to the team even if it’s only for a few games.”

“Alright,” My dad said silently questioning him and then asking out loud, “So you can do that? Just have him play a few games without him being a permanent part of it?”

“Why yes,” the coach answered. I was feeling left out of this conversation. “We’ve done it before with some players. We had one of them in particular come in near the end of the season and he played some of those games and then the next season we signed him.”

“Okay then. It sounds good, right Joe?” my dad said. I wasn’t paying attention. I was watching the guys on the team walk out of the locker room in all of their practice equipment and head out onto the ice.

“Huh? Oh yeah.” I said even though I didn’t really catch what he said. I guessed my answer made sense though since neither of them gave me a weird look or said anything.

“Well here’s the team now.” Coach Therrien said gesturing towards the guys. “Hey, Kris!” he shouted and a guy with a number fifty eight on his jersey turned to and looked at his coach.

“Yeah?” He called back with a French-Canadian accent. The coach used his hand and motioned for him to come over, and he did.

“Kris, this is Joe Jonas. Joe, this is Kris Letang.” Coach Therrien said introducing us.

“Hi.” I said to him and stuck my hand out for him to shake. “Nice to meet you.” He pulled the glove off of his right hand and shook mine.

“Same to you. You a new Penguin?” he asked me. At first I forgot that was the name of the team and gave him a strange look but then realized what he meant.

“Oh, yeah for now.” I said.

“Okay guys. Kris, take Joe back to get some equipment and then help him out.” Coach said to Kris. Then he turned to me, “Kris was a rookie last year. He’ll help you out.”

Kris and I walked away from my dad and my new coach and back into the locker room.

“So where are you from?” I asked him trying to make small talk.

“Montreal, Quebec. You?” he asked.

“Wyckoff, New Jersey.” I said.

“Speaking of jerseys, here’s one you can use until you get your own.” Kris said handing me a black jersey that looked like his, except his number was fifty eight and mine was fifty. He had his name on his too, and I didn’t. “Now here’s all the stuff you’ll need.” he pointed to a corner in the locker room where there was extra sticks and skates and gloves and other stuff.

“Thanks.” I said reaching for the stuff I needed.

“No problem. So how old are you?” He asked.

“Eighteen, you?”

“Twenty-one.” he said. I stood up straight and realized how short I seemed compared to him. I was actually only about two inches shorter than him, but he had his skates on so it seemed like more.

“So,” I started to ask, “What happens if you fall out there? Do people laugh?” He looked at me and kind of laughed.

“Well, honestly it depends on how you fall.” he said, “If you are out playing and skating hard and fast and doing good and you fall it’s not a big deal, everyone falls like that sometimes. On the other hand, you might get laughed at if you trip coming out onto the ice like Fleury did at the beginning of one game.” he smiled thinking of it. “Just wondering, but why do you want to know?”

“Well let’s just say I fall in front of people more often than I would like to.” I smiled and he laughed.

“Don’t worry about it with hockey. Some of the guys say, if you don’t get hurt trying, you didn’t try hard enough. Now, I don’t know how much of that is true but you know what I mean.” Kris said smiling.

“I understand.” I said. I had all of my equipment and was dressed and ready to go practice. He saw that I was ready.

“Okay, now let’s hit the ice.”


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 7/2/2008 12:47 AM
 

Ohhhhh!!! How's the practice gonna go??

I would actually laugh soooo hard if Joe fell on the ice, thought it wouldn't be super surprising. He is such a bad klutz. But it really is entertaining. haha

Yay!! A player from Montreal!! Go Canada!! Which reminds me.... HAPPY CANADA DAY!!!

Anyway, loved the chapter Emily! Amazing, as always! Can't wait for the next update!!

 


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 7/2/2008 3:09 AM
 

I love it emily! PMS!


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 7/2/2008 3:50 AM
 

thank you guys so much...

now i'm just wondering, but does anyone think that kris letang (my favorite hockey player ever haha) looks kind of like joe jonas? here's a picture.. http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc33/Koolness1000/fanfics/krisjoe.jpg Kris is the one with the hockey helmet on, and the rest are Joe. Does anyone think he kind of looks like him? Thats not really the best picture of Kris, but still. lol okay well tell me if you think so and i'll post more of this when i get back from disney:D


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 7/9/2008 1:35 AM
 

bumpp

yeah... he kinda does look like Joe... not really at first glance but if you look at it for a while you do start to see a bit of a ressemblance. haha


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 7/9/2008 11:57 PM
 

okay guys, heres the new chapter :D.... oh and by the way, a lot of the players that were on the penguins and i used in my story actually got traded :( so even though some of them arent on the team anymore in real life, im gonna leave them in the story ;) lol. but the players that i currently know were traded are: Ryan Malone, Gary Roberts, Ty Conklin, Georges Laraque, Jarrko Ruutu, Marian Hossa, and Adam Hall, and i'm quite depressed about it :( i loved those guys :( ha anyways here's the chapter :D

Chapter~4

I walked out to the ice, trying to be as careful as possible so I wouldn’t trip as I walked in my skates. Kris looked at me.

“This, is the team.” he said pointing to all of the players on the ice. They were practicing shooting and passing and just skating around.

“Hey, Sid.” Kris said tapping the captain of the Penguins on the shoulder as he skated over to us.

“Hey Kris. What’s up?” Sidney Crosby asked. He had a Canadian accent.

“This is the new guy.” He said pointing at me. I smiled.

“Hey I’m Joe Jonas.” I told him.

“Sidney Crosby.” He said introducing himself. “Coach says he saw you play and that you’re good. That true?” he asked me with a slight smile.

“Well, we’ll have to see.” I said smiling. I was so honored to be in the same room as Sidney Crosby, let alone be on his team.

“Hey guys, let’s get a little game going here, eh?” Sid shouted to the whole team. In a matter of seconds they were all over surrounding us. “Guys, this is Joe. Joe, these are the guys.”

“Hey guys.” I said spinning around to see them all. Most of them said ‘hey’ back. Then we split into two teams. The team I was on consisted of Kris Letang, Evgeni Malkin, Jordan Staal, Hal Gill, Tyler Kennedy, Jarkko Ruutu, Max Talbot, Adam Hall, Gary Roberts, and me. Our goalie was Marc-Andre Fleury. On Crosby’s team was him, Pascal Dupuis, Marian Hossa, Georges Laraque, Ryan Malone, Petr Sykora, Jeff Taffe, Sergei Gonchar, Brooks Orpik, and Ryan Whitney. Their goalie was Ty Conklin.

We had been playing for a while with the score tied four to four. I scored one of my team’s goals and I was proud of myself. I wanted to look good for these guys. They were some of the best of the best and I didn’t want them to think I was just some kid that didn’t take this seriously. I did take this seriously, very seriously. It was my turn to do the face off as time was running out. I skated to the center and so did Sidney. I had won some of the face offs I did this game, but none against Sidney. The referee blew his whistle and then dropped the puck. I won the face off! I passed the puck to Jordan Staal. He skated around Marian Hossa and passed it down to Evgeni Malkin. Malkin went to shoot it but instead he passed it up to me. Around me on the ice for Crosby’s team was Sidney, Malone, Hossa, Orpik and Whitney. For my team was me, Staal, Malkin, Letang, and Gill. I passed the puck over to Staal, but Crosby intercepted it and took it down the ice. As he went to shoot, Letang stole the puck back and passed it to me. I was on the right side of the goal. I took the puck, dodged Hossa’s stick and shot the puck. The referee’s whistle blew. I had scored the winning goal! My team came skating up to me gathering me in a sort of group hug that reminded me of Kevin.

“You did it!” Kris shouted over my teams cheers.

“You helped!” I said back. After my team finally separated, Sidney skated over to me.

“Coach was right. You are good, really good.” He said to me. I smiled. This was amazing.

“Thanks man. It means a lot coming from you.” I said honestly.

“No problem. And welcome to the team, Jonas.” He said and then skated away.

Welcome to the team. I was a part of the team. This had to have been the coolest thing ever.


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 7/10/2008 12:08 AM
 

Yay! Joe is getting accepted by the team!

Awsome!!

I loved the chapter Emily!! Amazing, as usual!!

Can't wait until the next one is posted!!

By the way, how was Disney? You have fun?

 


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