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 6/29/2008 11:33 PM
 
 Modified By Dear_God  on 6/29/2008 11:30:21 PM

Hey this is my new story called Meant to Live I hope you like it. I wrote this first chapter for an English Assignment, and I was like whoa, this would make a great story, so here I am writing it. Also I was wondering if anyone would like to be the best friend of the main girl. You can pick either Nick or Kevin to be with, it doesn't matter to me. Whoever replies first saying they want the part will get it. Anywho onto the story.

Prologue: Dying

        It was a warm June Day, so far the hottest of summer. Two sisters walked along a gorgeous path, chatting like normal. A chrysalis began to erupt, and a gorgeous monarch butterfly soared towards the shimmering sun.

          Sounds of baby chicks soared through the air. The two sisters spotted a fawn drinking water from the calm stream, a doe watching nearby. The flowers that lingered on the pathway were just beginning to bloom.

          A plethora of colors were surrounding the walkway. The girls laughed as they talked about their brand new baby nephew. How he was so young, and how bright life was looking for him.

          Up ahead they could see a young girl giggling as she picked berry’s off the bushes. She slid them in her basket without a care in the world. Once she finished with one bush she would skip to another.

          The grass near them shone from the previous night’s dew. It shone in a way that seemed to say that life was perfect. The two sisters soon came to a familiar clearing. The animals stood in peace with each other.

          Everything was perfect, the girls agreed. Gone were the years of pain and sorrow that had lingered in their lives. Now there was a new life, not just for the baby, but for them. A shot ran out, and a sister fell dying.

Hope you liked it. ~Aubrey♥

 


Photobucket I love my cousin right now. I just got a Kevin Jonas poster and button, along with a jonas brothers Key Chain and Unoffical biography. Haha, they seem to encourge my OJD! With there help I will never be cured.
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 6/29/2008 11:35 PM
 

that is really really good and id love to be her friend and be with nick:D


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 6/29/2008 11:48 PM
 

Ok you got it Emily. Just one question can you give me a little bit on your personality and looks, that way I'm not a complete screw-up when I write your part.


Photobucket I love my cousin right now. I just got a Kevin Jonas poster and button, along with a jonas brothers Key Chain and Unoffical biography. Haha, they seem to encourge my OJD! With there help I will never be cured.
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 6/29/2008 11:55 PM
 

awesome and sure..

well i have dark brown hair that comes down a little past my shoulders, i my eyes are like a mixture of blue, green, and brown. im about 5'7 and im pretty skinny. right now i have a little bit of a tan. i would put a picture but i dont have one on this computer. um for my personality, i tend to be kind of shy at first when i meet new people but once i get to know them im not at all ha. i love to laugh and have fun. i normally wear clothes from abercrombie and hollister and places like that. i can be girly but i love hockey and some other sports. im pretty smart and i think im nice haha. well thats all i can think of, you can change anything that you need to though. and thank you for letting me be in this. it sounds like its going to be extremely amazing so far:D


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 6/30/2008 12:35 AM
 
 Modified By Dear_God  on 6/29/2008 10:36:31 PM

 

Thanks Emily!

Chapter 1: The Funeral

Death of 16 year old girl.

Sixteen year old Alison Joanne Archey of Carson City died June 27th, 2008. Alison, or Ally as her family calls her, was out on a walk with her twin sister Aubrey Castel Archey when she was shot from behind. Alison was the daughter of Karl and Jayden Archey. She had two other siblings, older brother Jordan and older twin sister Aubrey as well as a nephew named Andrew. Funeral will be held Monday, June 30th at the Carson City High School at five o’clock. Viewings will be held from 11-3. We ask you keep the family in your prayers.

 

            The obituary in the paper just didn’t seem enough to Aubrey Archey, after all it was her sister who had died, and it just didn’t say anything about the real Alison. Aubrey had cut the obituary out of the paper and was currently gluing it onto a page in her scrapbook. As she sat the page out to dry she looked at the clothes she was wearing.

            A black Jonas brothers t-shirt and a pair of red skinny jeans. Not something most would wear to a funeral, but Aubrey knew her sister would love the outfit, knowing that it was for her funeral.

            “Aubrey, we have to get going, the funeral begins in an hour,” Aubrey’s older brother Andrew said. Aubrey let out a sigh and stood up. The viewings had ended only an hour ago, and her parents immediately went to the school where the funeral would be held.

            Aubrey however opted to go home, saying that she had forgotten her speech at home. It was true to a point though she purposely had forgotten it. Her parents would never allow her to wear the outfit she had switched into as soon as she got home, but she knew that it was what needed to be done.

            She grabbed the eulogy off of the table, and rechecked her make-up. She knew that by the end of the service it would all be smeared down her face, but she didn’t care. If it wasn’t bad enough for Aubrey to lose her twin it was knowing that the only time she would see a face identical to hers would be when she looked in a mirror.

            Aubrey walked out of the room she had once shared with Alison, and made her way down to where her brother awaited her. She took the stairs slowly, as if she maybe prolonging her way to funeral would bring her sister back to her.

            “Aubs, you know mom and dad will kill you if you wear that to the funeral,” Andrew said as soon as he saw the attire that she was wearing. He obviously didn’t realize that these were the wrong choice of words.

            “If they do then I’ll be with Alison. But it doesn’t matter if I’m killed because half of me is already dead!” Aubrey screamed at her brother before storming out to the vehicle that sat in the driveway.

            Andrew quickly followed her, finally realizing his mistake in word choice. He knew though from Aubrey’s temper that it would be best to apologize later, and began to drive silently towards the church.

            As they reached the school they could see at least fifty cars already there. Alison was pretty popular in school, as well as Aubrey, so it wasn’t unexpected to have the whole school there. Aubrey quickly got out of the car and walked towards the entrance, where her best friend Emily stood.

            Emily had been best friends with Alison and Aubrey since Pre-K. They had stayed best friends through the years and Emily had become like a third part of their sisterhood. For the most part Emily could be too.

            Emily had dark brown hair that went a little past her shoulders and had a mix of blue, green, and brown in her eyes. The only way you could tell that she wasn’t their sister was she was taller then both girls by two inches, and her skin was naturally lighter then the twins.

            Emily quickly closed the gap between her and Aubrey and pulled the shorter girl into a hug. Aubrey tried to smile as they broke the hug, but it just couldn’t be done, not even a fake smile.

            “I think Ally would have really liked that outfit AC,” Emily whispered to her sullen best friend. Aubrey nodded before walking into the school and towards the seats where her parents sat.

            She knew it was rude to blow off Emily like that, but at the time, she knew if she stayed any longer she would have burst into tears. She quietly sat down next to her father who hadn’t noticed her presence. She wasn’t surprised though, neither of her parents had sad anything to her since they found out that Alison had died.

            She could understand, they had just lost their youngest child, and to see a girl who held the same face at her was hard to comprehend, even if it was their other daughter. She let out a slight sigh as the pastor got on the stage.

            She didn’t really pay attention to what he said, and she zoned out through most of the service until it was her time to speak. She slowly stood up and made her way towards the podium. When she got behind it, she placed her paper down and looked out into the crowd.

            The bleachers of the gym were full to the brim and every seat that was put out on the gymnasium floor was filled as well and there were some people standing on the sides. She let out a deep breath and began her speech.

 

Hope you liked it. Please Review!

~Aubrey♥


Photobucket I love my cousin right now. I just got a Kevin Jonas poster and button, along with a jonas brothers Key Chain and Unoffical biography. Haha, they seem to encourge my OJD! With there help I will never be cured.
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 6/30/2008 1:13 AM
 

aw i feel sad. but this story is still soooo good! you're an amazing writer and im honored to be in your story :) pms!


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 6/30/2008 1:29 AM
 

Chapter 2: The Eulogy

          “Alison meant more to me then to most people. She wasn’t just my baby sister or my twin, no she was more then that, she was my other half. Growing up it was hard being identical twins, as we were always mistaken for the other. Sure we got annoyed with it, but we often used it to our advantages. The best part of having a twin is you always had someone to play with.

          AJ was bubbly, smart, beautiful, and real. Most people know AJ as the sports fanatic she was, as both of us were. AJ had a list of things she wanted to do before she died, we both did. We wrote them after seeing the bucket list.

          In front of me sits her sacred list, we never shared them with anyone, including each other. We swore to each other that we would read the others at their funeral for whoever died first. Unfortunately it was her, and it was too early.

          My Bucket List by Alison Archey

          Number one: Meet the Jonas Brothers

          Number two: Get my first kiss

          Number three: Become famous

          Number four: Figure skate in the Olympics

          Number five: Sleep in Cinderella Castle

          Number six: Run a marathon

          Number seven: Finally beat Aubrey at SingShot

          Number eight: Make a V-Log

          Number nine: Make Aubrey fall in love with the Jonas Brothers.

          Number ten: Design my own dress to wear to the Teen Choice Awards

          Number eleven: Fall in love,” Aubrey began the eulogy. By the second number of Alison’s list Aubrey had began to cry. Tears rolled down her tanned cheeks, and were hitting the floor below.

          “This is AJ’s list. I wish that she could have had the chance to do at least one of these things, but she didn’t. I know Ally enough to know that she would have eventually done all of them. Ally was always determined.

          As you may have noticed I am wearing a very unusual outfit for a funeral. As it was mentioned in her list, Ally was very into the Jonas Brothers. We went to the mall last Christmas and she bought me this shirt as a gag gift, knowing I wasn’t a fan of the Jonas Brothers.

          Many of you also know that Ally was very into skinny jeans and bright colors, so she bought me these as another gag gift. Ally was a natural born prankster, and she was good at it too.

          Ally died too young, and if I had the choice I would trade places with her in a heartbeat. Ally didn’t deserve to die as young as she did. She had a full life in front of her. But with one shot of a gun her life was taken away from her.

          Most people can’t comprehend what it’s like to lose a sibling so young, yet alone a twin. But what no one can comprehend besides me, is the fact that I saw my baby sister, my twin, and my other half die. I saw the blood that was shed, and I saw her take her last breath. Life had seemed to turn a new leaf for us, everything seemed perfect, but it was shattered. It was shattered with one single shot of a gun.”

 

Hope you all liked it.

~Aubrey♥


Photobucket I love my cousin right now. I just got a Kevin Jonas poster and button, along with a jonas brothers Key Chain and Unoffical biography. Haha, they seem to encourge my OJD! With there help I will never be cured.
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 6/30/2008 1:39 AM
 

aww thats sooo sad :( poor Ally. this is still incredible though and i cant wait for the next capter!


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 6/30/2008 1:46 AM
 

I'll post that chapter tomorrow (Though technically it would be later today, at least for me). Though I'll probably write it before I fall asleep. Writing always before I sleep always allows me to sleep easier for some reason.

~Aubrey♥


Photobucket I love my cousin right now. I just got a Kevin Jonas poster and button, along with a jonas brothers Key Chain and Unoffical biography. Haha, they seem to encourge my OJD! With there help I will never be cured.
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 6/30/2008 5:59 AM
 

holy jumping jonas! i love this story! lol. its so sad though. post more very soon!


LoveBug thanks Emily! :]
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