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User is offline Danielle Sanoj[[Tomorrow! Tomorrow! I'll Love Ya, Tomorrow! You're Only A Day Away!]].xo
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Re: Re: The Baby Borrowers Prologue 1 6/30 

  Kole's lovin' 7 things wrote

 Dani[[Is The Definition of An Underdog]] wrote

 

Wow. I will try and help you, but I jardly remember what happened on the first episode....Ohh, maybe its on Youtube!

 

 

That's after watching tonight's eppie I got a lot of ideas so I'm finishing up the first chapter and it will hopefully be out today or tomorrow(at the latest)

~kole <3

Whoohooo!!!


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New Post 7/24/2008 10:44 PM
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I told you I would get it out today.

Finally. I hope you guys like the chapter.

 

Chapter 1~

The narrator’s POV will be in italics. And bold is confessionals.

 

Narrator’s POV

 

The teens are moving into a house together for the first time. Tonight they are going to live like newlyweds and experience the calm before the storm. Hopefully.

 

“The house is amazing! It’s like they took everything me and Kevin ever wanted and then took it to the next level.”  Spencer said in confessional.

 

To bad everyone else didn’t fair that well.

 

“I was kind of hoping for a pool.” Chace said investigating the house with Georgina.

 

“Pools are dangerous to little kids Chace.” Georgina said leading the way up the stairs and into the bedroom.

 

“I don’t like this room. It’s the walls are like… I don’t know blood red. It reminds me of a horror movie,

 

“I don’t think it’s that bad.”

~~

 

After exploring their new homes the couples settle into life as newlyweds.  Trouble soon follows for one of the couples.

 

“Shia can you do the dishes for me so I can take a shower?” Ali said ascending the stairs.

 

“Why can’t you do the dishes, so I can take a shower?” Shia said with a slightly frustrated look.  Causing Ali to stop in her tracks halfway up the stairs

 

“Are you seriously starting a fight over some flipping dishes? I don’t feel like arguing with you right now.  Just do the dishes. You always take really long to wash them and if it makes you feel better I do them for the rest of the experiment,” Ali said.

 

Continuing her trip to the bathroom after she continues her rant, “I can’t believe you would try to start a fight the first f!*^ing night.”

 

“Cool beans, Shia.”

~~

 

The next morning the teens wake up to a package.

 

*ding dong*

~Emma and Zack’s House~

 

“What in the world was that?” Emma said hardly out of her nocturnal state

 

“I think that was the door bell.” Zack said rolling over amidst rubbing his eyes.

 

“What if that’s the babies?” the hazel eyed girl said suddenly sitting up in the bed.

 

“I don’t know, why don’t you go see.”

 

~Sage and Channing’s House~

 

“Sage, get out of the bed we have a note and a box.” Channing yelled up the stairs after finding the new treasure on his door steps.”

 

Dear ‘Newlyweds’

Inside the box you will find pregnancy belly that you will be required to wear until your babies get here tomorrow.”

 

After putting on the bellies the ‘newlyweds’ are told they have to go to parenting classes to get last minute practice

 

~Kennedy and Joe’s House~

 

“Why are you laughing? It’s not funny. This thing is heavy and itchy and makes me have to pee.” Kenn huffed before walking into the bathroom.

 

“Come on. It’s comical that you have this fake pregnant belly thing on.  But I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have laughed.” Joe whispered trying to hold in his laughter.

 

“You know what I’m not going to that class. I’m not going to go around looking like a fat oaf, especially when my own boyfriend is going to make fun of me.” she rebutted with icy gray eyes before slamming the door in Joe’s face.

 

“What are you doing? Everyone is waiting for us outside. Kenni we need to leave. I said I’m sorry what else do you want me to do?”, he yelled through the barrier.

 

“I want you to respect me. But obviously you can’t do that.” Kennedy let out in a blubbering scream.

 

“How can I try to respect you when you act like this all the time. Goodness Kennedy all of the other girls are wearing the da.mn suits?”

 

Nearing exhaustion from the situation Joe leaves the house to see if the other girls can help him persuade Kennedy out of the house.

 

“Kennedy it’s Dani. Sweetie why don’t you come out we can all be …twins times four?” Dani questioned looking at the other girls to see if she had used the right math.

 

“Kennedy it’s not that bad, at least it’s not like you have to wear it by yourself. You have me and Emma, Ali, Dani, Spencer, Sage and Georgina.” Rachel said growing irritated by the situation.

 

 After figuring out Kennedy would be sticking to her guns the teen couples left to go to parenting class.

 

~Local Hospital~

 

“Hi, I am Ella George and I am in charge of the pre-parenting unit of this hospital.  So today you will be taking care of mechanical babies.  They’ll act like regular babies do.” the instructor introduced.

 

Meanwhile in the Cul-de-Sac

 

“All the other girls were wearing their bellies and I’m sure the didn’t give attitude.”

 

“I don’t what they did or didn’t do.” Joe could already the look on his girlfriend’s face, stains from the mixture of salty tears and black eye makeup trailing down her face. (this wasn’t the first time she had had a meltdown over a minimal offence). “But I’m positive their boyfriends respected them and didn’t laugh.”

 

“I thought you didn’t care what they ‘did or didn’t do’” the raven haired boy refuted rising from his seat on the floor. “Look I’m leaving I’ll see you when you stop PMSing.


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New Post 7/24/2008 11:55 PM
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bumpps

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New Post 7/25/2008 12:22 AM
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Re: Re: Re: The Baby Borrowers Prologue 1 6/30 

OMJ, that was so freakin' funny lol

Joe just kept laughin' and that was wrong

I had no idea I was so dumb at math, I really am, its not my strongest subject lol


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New Post 7/25/2008 4:50 AM
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Re: Re: Re: The Baby Borrowers Prologue 1 6/30 

yay u updated! okay sneaking on at almost 1 in the morning is worth it! lol.


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Rosalie:Is she even italian?
Emmet: Her name's Bella!


Edward: You killed it!
Bella:Oh well.

thanks meg 4 the bottom 1! :D
 
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Re: Re: Re: The Baby Borrowers Prologue 1 6/30 

Oooo, bad Lauren lol


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Modified By Getcha Good♥[Is in love with 3 rockstars, 3 vampires, and a werwolf. this could be bad.]  on 7/25/2008 2:59:22 AM)

-snaps- psh yea dats how I roll! lol no my parents r mad bc I snuck a myspace 4 the 3rd time. I mean all my friends have them, my phones broke, how am I supposed 2 talk 2 them! eh my friend is logging onto im so she's kewl! lol and my friend harout never returns my emails. bleh. lol


JBF girlz(in no order) My Jonas Angels girls, My Superhero girls,Aaryn, Sam, Gabby,,Ashlynn, Catilin, Johanne,Megan, click 2 check out my ffs and oneshots




Rosalie:Is she even italian?
Emmet: Her name's Bella!


Edward: You killed it!
Bella:Oh well.

thanks meg 4 the bottom 1! :D
 
New Post 7/25/2008 5:03 AM
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Re: Re: Re: The Baby Borrowers Prologue 1 6/30 

lol


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New Post 7/29/2008 11:24 PM
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loveddddd ittt!!!!!!


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New Post 8/1/2008 8:26 AM
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Re: Re: Re: The Baby Borrowers Prologue 1 6/30 

Bump when you can!!!


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