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Chapter1: Last Concert

She had it all. She had him. She had Joe. Joe loved her. Corinne had been dating Joe for about 2 years. She went everywhere with him. They were always together. Today was their last show on the tour. Everyone was so excited. Not only was it their last show, it was the first day of summer. Corinne was staying with the Jonas family all summer. Joe and her had planned tons of fun things they were going to do.

 

Now, she was staring at her motionless face in the mirror. She looked good. Her blonde hair was flowing down her back. Her eyes were sparkling blue. And her tan gave her this amazing glow. She decided to curl her eyelashes. She didn't feel like putting on makeup. She rarely did. It was quite noisy in the Jonas House this morning. Denise was yelling at Frankie to calm down. He had been running around the house all morning yelling "Summer! Summer!" Kevin was tuning his guitars. Nick was yelling at Joe for stealing his socks. Nick hated when someone took his socks. He was a neat freak. His closet was color coordinated. She had helped him with that a few years ago. Remembering that put a smile on her face.  She had known Nick the longest. Before he was famous. He was the reason she met Joe. She remembered  that day. She could never forget it.

 

 
Denise called everyone into the kitchen. Corinne turned the light out and made her way down the hallway. Joe was already sitting down. She stood beside him. He pulled her onto his lap and wrapped his arms around her waist. She smiled. He had this special way of making her feel safe. Nick was trying to pull his sock on and flipped the chair. "I’m okay" he said as he rushed back to his feet. They all snickered. Nick was such a klutz. When everyone calmed down Denise explained that her husband was going to be working this summer and wouldn't be home. He was taking an important job since the Jonas Brothers weren't going to be on tour. "Unfortunately, they called him in to start today, so he couldn't be here." She told us. This was fine. He was always there to support them.
 

They were so excited that when it came time to get on the bus they all ran to it, forgetting their luggage. So, they had to go back, get it, then get on the bus. Denise then realized that they forgot Frankie. So, she ran in and got him. Finally, it was time to go. “Hey, we should TP the crowd again” Kevin suggested. “Or silly string” Nick said. “OR BOTH!!!” Frankie said as he ran up to the table we were sitting at. Joe agreed. It sounded like “yesh we shwuwd” Since his mouth was full of Red Vines. Corinne giggled. “Shwat?” Joe said and everyone laughed. He was the funniest out of all the brothers. Corinne loved that about him. She loved him.

 

They arrived at the concert. Corinne was sitting back stage with Denise. When it ended Joe came rushing back stage and gave Corinne a hug. "I need to talk to you." He said and grabbed her arm and rushed down to a private room back stage. "What's so important?" Corinne asked. Joe smiled. "What's going on?" She asked again. Joe just smiled again. "I have a surprise for you." Joe said. "Well, what is it?" Corinne said with a big smile. 

 

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Cliff hanger!  I need feedback if you want to know what the super awsome surpirse is. I hope you liked it. The next chapter is going to have some shocking twists and turns. Really exciting. SO COMMENT!!!


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New Post 7/1/2008 2:17 PM
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This is good! I can't wait to read more!


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This is good! I can't wait to read more!

 

Thank you!

I need more comments,

I will post the 2nd chapter today if I get more.


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New Post 7/1/2008 3:19 PM
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BUMP 'cause I love this story!


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Here it is:

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"Ready?" Joe asked. "I've been ready. Now tell me!" Corinne demanded. "We........are going to The Bahamas!!!!!" Joe screamed. "AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!" Corinne started screaming her head off. Corinne jumped and Joe caught her. She squeezed him so hard. Joe kissed her then Kevin and Nick ran in. "What is going on?" They asked. Joe told them that they were all going to Hawaii. They screamed. And Nick flipped in the air. Corinne screamed again. Denise came in smiling and told them they were going in only a few weeks.

 

Once they were back on the bus, Kevin got some Sushi. Kevin and Nick got some raw fish. Corinne got california rolls and Joe got something....he just wasn't sure what. "I think by sushi just winked at me" Joe said and he pushed it away. He got some pizza instead. Corinne didn't eat all her sushi. There was only a few peices though. "Corinne, you only ate 2 pieces." Kevin said."I'm full" she said in a shaky voice. Her face turned kind of pale. "What's wrong?" Nick asked. Joe put his arm around. "I'm fine, really" Corinne said. "Ok..." they all said...although they werent sure. Corinne got up from the table and went to her bunk on the bus. "What's wrong with her?" They asked. Joe got up to go see her.

 


"Baby, what's wrong?" Joe asked. He was concerned. He sat down on the bunk and held her. "I'm fine." She said. He picked up her chin. "Look at me" he said. "Promise me that nothings wrong." She promised. He kissed her slowly. Kevin walked in. "Awww, how cute." He said. "Dude, why do always walk in  when we kiss?" Joe asked. "Sorry, dude" Kevin said and walked out. Corinne giggled and kissed Joe again. "Hey, I'm tired, I'm gonna take a nap." She told him. He said okay and tucked her in.

 

"So, what's wrong with her?" Kevin and Nick asked when he got back to the table. "She said it was nothing." Joe told them. "Well, do you beleive that?" Kevin asked. "She promised me." Joe said. "She doesn't break her promises." Nick and Kevin nodded. Joe was still worried there was something wrong. He just needed to take Corinne's word that there wasn't.

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Okay, there is something wrong, you will have to wait to find out what it is.

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New Post 7/1/2008 5:30 PM
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just finished reading this and im already addicted! ahhh i need to know whats wrong with herrrrr!! PMN!!!!

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 Kathyyy & Stephhyy <3 JB wrote

just finished reading this and im already addicted! ahhh i need to know whats wrong with herrrrr!! PMN!!!!

stefani

 

THANK YOU! I need more comments! I am working on to fan fictions. You will deff love my ff : Shut Up and Let Me Go


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