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Darkest Before The Dawn (Nick Fan Fic)  
Ok so i wrote this please tell me what you think!! because i love to write and i want to know if it is good...or not. so please comment and be honest!!!!

Darkest Before the Dawn
Chapter 1- When your Lights Go Out
‘ Life isn’t an adventure, unless you move. I am not a girl who has lived for a long time, In fact when my adventures begins I am only 15 years old. I didn’t want to move. And in fact I wasn’t going to. Until I heard some of the wisest words I heard in the world. Home is where the Heart is…DJ’s writing was interrupted by Nick.. He lifted her off her chair in her bedroom and swung her around. She laughed. He laughed., finally he put her down. “Nick, I have to finish this speech. My Aunt Lisa is going to be there and you only know how she thinks that staying with you is like really bad for a young lady or whatever. So it has to be good.”
“Anything you get up there and say is going to be great.” Nick replied as DJ sat down and he read over her shoulder.
“Yeah, I bet the press thinks that too.” She said sarcastically as she kept typing on her laptop.
“Demitri why don’t you just take a break?” Nick Added. She smiled when she heard him call her Demitri. She didn’t seem to mind it coming from him as much.
“Well Nicholas, why don’t you take a break when you are in the middle of a tour? DJ inquired jokingly using his full name. Nick smiled.
“You win. I’ll let you work.” He said as he left the room. DJ could tell he was waiting for her to say something, he never went down the stairs.
“Ok, I guess I could take a break if someone has a offer of something entertaining to do.” She said as she turned around and Nick reentered the room.
“I can help you with that.” Nick answered. DJ smiled. She got up and turned to face him.
“I said if someone had a good offer of something entertaining to do. And frankly I don’t find helping you pick out guitars entertaining.”
“Well…” Nick began he was cut off.
“Waffle Ball is not a good source of entertainment.” DJ said she knew it was coming.
“Movies?” Nick asked hoping this one would be a good source of entertainment.
“Well I guess that would be better than trying to find big words that make you sound smart to put in a speech.” DJ said. She grabbed her purse and followed Nick down the stairs. She smiled to herself. Her life seemed like everything was following into place, finally. They reached the living room. Frankie was counting webkinz, again.
“Nick, where are you going?” Frankie asked putting down a hand full of webkinz.
“Taking DJ to the movies… let me guess you want to come?”
‘Yep!” Frankie smiled with a smirk on his face. Nick looked over at DJ with a look on his face that said I just wanted time alone. DJ rolled her eyes and bent down till she was eye to eye with Frankie.
“You really want to go with me and Nick to see a movie about two people who all they do is fall in love. I am talking no action. Like none. No car chases, no fighting and absolutely no action.” DJ informed him. She heard Denise laugh, she knew what DJ was up to.
“That just sounds stupid.” Frankie said completely unaware of DJ’s plan.
“To you.”
“Nick, what happened to you, you use to like car chases. Now you like her movies. Boring.” Frankie said looking at his older brother. Nick caught on.
“You’re right man, so tomorrow just you and me will go see a all guy movie.” Nick reassured Frankie.
“Promise?”
“Promise.”
Nick and DJ walked into the movie theater. Nick wore sunglasses and a baseball cap. Honestly when he was just in plain jeans and a t-shirt he didn’t look like the Nick Jonas you would see on TV. Nobody noticed him. DJ laughed every time he heard a girl scream at anything he always turned his head. DJ waited for Nick to buy tickets. She sat down on a bench, her head started to pound. Her whole world started to spin. DJ saw Nick walking towards her. She could feel her face losing all it’s color. She started to black out. She felt Nick grab her arm and say her name. She couldn’t respond. Her world went black.

Ok so what did you think????

 
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