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 7/25/2008 5:48 PM
 
 Modified By Ainsley  on 7/25/2008 3:54:50 PM
Hey everyone this is the first fanfic I wrote so I would really like it if I got some feedback(: Constructive criticism is okay but I would like it if I don't get any RUDE comments here. If you have any questions at the end please ask and I will answer, and see if I can find a way to write the story better so there will be no need for questions lol. So yeah just tell me what you think(:

3000.

Hello I'm Sydney and I live in the year 3000. This is my digital log of the story of my biggest adventure. Despite what you may have heard we don't live under water, we don't have funny clothes, and we don't all travel in flying cars, but we do have time machines and the Jonas Brothers' seventh album out-sold Kelly Clarkson's big time... I live in Los Angeles, California, where it's really hot, there are lots of palm trees, movie stars, and drama. Doesn't sound much different does it? Well it's different, really different. Our city is run by the Aquars, the toughest law enforcement group of all time. They live under water. They're ok to anyone except the Time Surfers. There was a man whose name was Peter Robinson. He was the inventor of the flux capacitator, the best time traveling system of all time and the only one that can go to the future or back in time, and he had a few enemies. One of those enemies just happened to be the great-great-great-grandson of Spark the head chief of the Aquars. It's one of those Romeo & Juliet family feuds that have lasted so long they forget why it ever started. So because of this conflict the Aquars outlawed all time travel and disposed of all flux capacitator's except for three that were hidden, they are located in Los Angeles, California, London, England, and Beijing, China. The penalty for any act related to time travel is life at Aquar prison, a fate worse than death. Oh I forgot to tell you who the Time Surfers are. The Time Surfers is a secret organization made up of people from all around the world who go back in time to do good using our knowledge that they didn't have back then. A few of our accomplishments include preventing global warming and stopping the war in Iraq before it escalated to World War III. This is the story of how two people make a huge difference and don't even know it, and one person is in charge of making it all happen. That's me.

As I said earlier my name is Sydney, and I am the great-great-great-grandaughter of Ashleigh Carter. There are certain "chosen" people in the world and she is one of them. Ashleigh's destiny will change the world as we know it if I don't go back in time and make sure she meets Joseph Jonas. This is vitally important that they unite and discover the way to end world hunger. If all goes as planned they should meet, keep in contact, tour the world with millions of followers that support their fight to end world hunger, and change the world forever. TS has been on this mission throughout Ashleigh's life. Disney Channel executives were Time Surfers who made sure that the Jonas Brothers made it to the top of the social ladder. Lizzie Andrews, Ashleigh's close friend was a TS member who introduced her to the Jonas Brothers. Kidd Kraddick was also a Time Surfer who broadcast news of the brothers often and told her of the ticket sale that changed her life and was crucial to this mission. Now, my part is to create a contest, that Ashleigh has the power to win, for 2 meet and greet passes so Joe and Ashleigh will lock eyes and find that they were meant for each other.

5:10 p.m.-August 17, 3000 Greetings. I am on my way to the TS base in Los Angeles. Ashleigh just got tickets to the show. All is going according to plan.
5:15 p.m.-August 17, 3000 We have a problem. Someone just robbed the bank that our headquarters is underneath so Aquars are all over the place. I must travel quickly to London. I said we don't have flying cars but we do have trans-oceanic bullet trains that can get me there in less than 9 hours. I am afraid that this will put me too far behind schedule...
10:00 a.m.-August 18, 3000-London, England I just arrived at the TS base in London located directly underneath the train station. I'm preparing to take my journey to the year 2013 Ashleigh will be 20 and Joseph will be 23. My plan is to join Kidd Kraddick and tell him of my plan (we haven't worked out communication between times yet). He will already have the passes, but the contest will be of video entry format to explain why she is their biggest fan and why she deserves to win. Her funny wit, charming personality, and her absolute "requirement" makes her a guaranteed winner. She will be taking her best friend Kristine Sawyer it is essential that she attend also because she will become Joe and Ashleigh's campaign manager.
10:15 a.m.-August 18, 2013-Los Angeles, CA So far everything is going as planned. The contest is set and ready to go and will be announced tomorrow morning.
11:00 a.m.-August 27, 2013 Ashleigh just learned that she was the winner of the contest. I will now be returning home.
12:00 p.m.-August 27, 3000 Ok, we have a HUGE issue on our hands Spark discovered our base in LA and caught me and all other TS members, he is transporting us to Aquar headquarters. We're in trouble, big trouble. Aquar headquarters is right underneath the surface of the pacific ocean. This may be the last entry I will make on this mission. Spark still has the power to go back in time and end this, fast. They are now going down the line and confiscating all personal items. This is the end.

Sydney and her fellow TS members made a bargain. Some spent the rest of their lives at Aquar prison. It was the biggest arrest the Aquars ever made. They found all living Time Surfers and took them in. But, since all the Time Surfers willingly sacrificed their lives, the Aquars did not interfere with the mission, in fact there is now a statue of all TS members involved with it in our world's capital, Los Angeles, California, where it all happened. Joe and Ashleigh with the assistance of Kevin, Nick, and Ashleigh's friend Kris, united the world to act as one, and no one was ever hungry again. Oh and by the way, I got away. I spent 20 years in Aquar prison, the others who lived through it got out too. The mission escalated to more than we ever planned. It was a surprise to us that one day there was world peace. Joe and Ashleigh changed the future. So that's my story and now I get the privilege to tell it to everyone I can. This is Sydney Jonas, I live in the year 3030, and I live underwater.
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