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I recently held audition's for an FF! I picked all the parts and I thought of the name! I really liked this name and thought it would bring in a good amount of readers. Here's chapter 1! Lemme know what you guys think of this! Chapter 1 I finished curling my long,light brown hair. I let it hang loosely around my shoulders and straightened the belt around my long graphic t-shirt. My name is Jennilyn Hope. I'm your average girl. I'm 15 years old and I have a dream of becoming a musician. I've prayed to God every night and practiced my vocals and instruments since I was just a little girl. I was on my way to Hollywood Records to perform for the "Average Clique",an all girls band. They were the hottest girl band in hollywood right now. The hottest guy band,being the Jonas Brothers. "C'mon!" my brother Jake called. "I'll be there in one minute!Wait in the car for me."I called back. I've lived with my brother and father for 2 years,after my mother passed away from cancer. Life was deffinately different without her, but we just had to adjust. I learned how to handle all of the pressure and depression with music. Without it,I probaly wouldn't be here. I grabbed my purse and ran out the garage. I pulled open the door to his classic mustang. He clicked the garage door opener and it shut down slowly. I pulled the belt over my chest and clicked it loudly. "What's the address again?"he asked. I gave him the paper with the address and smiled. "Thanks for taking me,Jake." "Your my sister.I have to take care of you.I promised you and...mom" ******* "Wake Up America!We're all in this together!It's our home so let's take care of it! You know that you want to!You know that you got to!" I sang into the recording studio mic. I stopped and looked at the band. They whispered some stuff to each other and looked at me,smiling and nodding. They all walked into the studio as I pulled off the headphones. "Your an amazing singer and we deffinately want to sign you!"Cheered Laura. "But were going to allow you to tour with us for 1 month and see how people like you.Then if they like you,we'll sign you."Madison said. "You'll do great!Your voice is amazing and the energy you gave off in the booth was unbelieveable!"said Emily. I smiled. "Thanks so much you guys!That means alot." "The tour is all-expense paid."added Allie. They handed me their numbers and smiled. "Head home and pack your bag. We'll pick you up in one week on the tour bus. You'll get your own bus and entertainment provided in it." Madison said quickly. I thanked them and hugged them many times before heading out into the hallway and cheering and hugging Jake. "I'm so proud of you sis!I knew you could do it! Now,time to go and pack those bags.." He said with a sly grin. *Tour was going to be amazing&it hasn't even started yet!* Here's the first chapter. It's just getting started to please don't hate me if you weren't mentioned yet. Comments?Thoughts?
i like it! :D
post more soon!
your welcome and yep thats me :) haha :D
i like it so far!! pms!
~ Madi
Thank you Emily and Madi! I always send out PM's for people to read my story. Which,I hate doing because it's time consuming and it's like "they could find it thereselves but i get no comments" sooo arghh. Yeah
i love the plot of the story :) keep writing! <3
i liked itt, cant wait to read more of itt (:
I like it so far! post more soon :-)
i like this. :) post more soon.
