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8/1/2008 1:40 PM

	NickIsMyPeterPanAndIllBeHisWendy
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"Take A Breath" Chapter 5 NEW FANFIC!

Chapter 5

[Nick's POV]

Neighbors ran out of there houses to see what was going on. Debbie slowly looked back with anger roaring in her eyes. She got up slowly and looked at her dead mother once more. Her eyes lead to her hands covered with blood. One of the neighbors asked "What happened?". Debbie looked once more and ran away. I quickly got away from the window and headed downstairs to go outside. I'd seen Joe and his new girlfriend Sydney on the couch. Joe immediately backed away from Sydney. "Nick, What are you doing?" he asked. I looked at them both "I have to get Debbie. She ran away". Joe looked a bit confused "Who's Debbie? Your new Girlfriend". Joe knew i never wanted to date another girl after she died. She was the only one i truly cared about. But I felt like I was falling for Debbie also, but i couldn't. Could I? I was running as fast as I could to the park. I knew she'd be going there. I reached the park and slowed down, searching for Debbie. I saw her and she caught my eye. She was a few feet away from the lake looking down at the water, crying. Her tears fell unto the water. She couldn't, I thought.
Was she getting ready to jump? I walked towards her, standing there behind her. "Is it really worth it?" I asked. She pushed her hair behind her eyes. "Yes, If it gets me out of this world" She said "I'm alone and now i have nobody, I lost my parents. Both of them! So this is why i'm sent here, to mess people's lifes and kill myself". She turned back and faced me. "That is not true. Look I may not know that much because we just met, but the first time I saw you I knew you had something special"I said. "Your just one of those stupid Rockstar guys that don't care about anything but themselves. Your just telling me this for no reason at all" She screamed. "I'm not just saying that, I seriously mean it" I quitely said "I care about you". She looked at me odd with tears welling down her face. "Why?" she asked. I looked her in the eyes "Because........

Debbie/ Christina's Point Of View:

I couldn't ever trust anyone except him. He's the only one I could talk to about mostly anything. I couldn't tell him my secret, he'd probably wouldn't believe me. It was now or later, and I chose later. He was the guy I loved and always will be. How could I still be trapped here? Finding a way to get out was going to be the problem. If it meant staying with Nick then I consider staying here. He'd never fall in love with me because he wanted Christina not me, I mean me. How come this had been so hard being in here. It's full of darkness and no love. Did I want Nick to be happy with Debbie or me? Sooner or later I'd be gone. There's only room either for me or for Debbie. I couldn't be selfish and stay in here and be happy with Nick. I had my chance and my father killed me. I told him not to worry about me, yet he did. He looks a bit scared to me. I loved him so much... I can't even describe how much I love him. Part of me wanted to stay and part of me wanted to go. What should I choose? Me or Debbie. It was hard. I guess my turn would be over soon, but it was time to enjoy every last of it before I go. I want to tell him I need to tell him. I can't. Debbie needs him more than I do. Nick is an amazing guy and always will be. I want him to be happy like he was when he was with me before I left him here.

(Authors Note: If you guys didn't get the last part of Debbie/Christina's POV than what it's trying to say is the Debbie has multiple personality's. Since Christina died her soul went and found Debbie's body, Knowing that she had some unfinished business. I hopy ya'll get it now)

Nick Is My Peter Pan and I'll Be His Wendy <3

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