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New Post 8/1/2008 10:17 PM
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Story of a Girl [Joe FF] ChapterFive! 8/29!! 
Modified By SofieAlwaysKnows  on 8/29/2008 12:21:16 AM)

Here's the prologue guys, a couple of comments and I'll post the first chapter. 
Enjoy!

  

 Prologue.

 This is the story of a girl,
who cried a river and drowned the whole world.


            It’s true; this is the story of a girl. This particular girl though, is special beyond measure. She’s caring, thoughtful, sarcastic and witty at times, honest, a bit reserved sometimes but most important of all she’s got the most show-stopping, contagious smile you’ll ever see. Behind the radiant, perfect wavy brown hair, her glasses, her somewhat short height and the bubbly charade she has going on; Crystal is hiding something. It’s in her nature to keep to herself, she’s not one to holler at the world about her problems, but sometimes it gets to be a bit of a burden. Trust issues, broken promises, words with no meaning whatsoever were, after all very common in her past relationships. It’s exactly why this summer, she vowed it would all change. She looked back on her life and realized, everything that had happened made her that much stronger. Let’s not get ahead of ourselves though, all in due time. Like I said, this is the story of a girl, and it’s time you heard all about it.


-SofiePWNS!
 
New Post 8/1/2008 10:23 PM
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Re: The Story of a Girl [Joe FF] Prologue. 

this is super good...
amazing..
fantastic...
oh heck i'll just go with the word phenomenal.
it was only the prologue and i'm hooked.
my brother was actually reading it with me
and he says that it's really good
and now he wants to continue reading it.
and he's not a JB fan.
but this is superb.
i can't wait to read more of it.
post more soon chica please.


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New Post 8/1/2008 11:43 PM
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Re: The Story of a Girl [Joe FF] Prologue. 

that is really good!!! i cant wait to read more!!


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New Post 8/2/2008 12:25 AM
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Re: The Story of a Girl [Joe FF] Prologue. 

here's the first chapter guys!
Comments are love's written form
if you catch my drift...
oh wow, my jokes keep getting more and more lame!

            Chapter One.
 
            "Te Amo" the handsome, Hispanic looking male, whispered sweetly.
            "Ugh! Liar!" She complained, attempting to chuck a spoonful of Ben & Jerry's ice-cream at the screen of her plasma TV. She thought better of it, when she realized she'd only waste the comforting snack and would have to clean up the gooey mess later.
            When was this all going to end? Failed relationships, one after the other. She wasn't one to put herself out there too easily. Somehow though, and it's still a mystery to her, she had ended up handing her heart in a big, shiny, silver platter once again.
            "Alejandro! No te vayas! No me dejes!" the agonized woman screamed, her face ridden with tears.
            Something about watching other people in agony, somewhat resembling her own, was oddly comforting.
            "They all leave Margarita, face it" She exclaimed, glumly.
            She marveled in the fact that she had still to shed a tear over the insignificant, and now, ex-boyfriend. She hoped she wouldn't, but deep down she knew the tears would come. Much later maybe, but they'll be there.
            She shifted on her bed, her plaid pajamas wrinkled and her hair in all sorts of tangles. It was only natural; she hadn't gotten out of bed in less than 72 whole hours. Even though she's been through this more than her fair share of times, she always found a perfectly good and new way to wallow in her self-pity.
 
            "THIS HAS GOT TO STOP!" Her best friend barged in, not worried at all about who would here. It's not like there was anyone home anyway, loneliness was a perfectly familiar term for her.
            She glanced sideways at her friend before returning her full attention to the Telenovela.
            "You have to stop this right now!" The best friend complained.
            "Don't bother!" She retorted darkly. "I've got a strict eating regimen" she motioned to the empty cartons on the floor and the half-full one in her hand, and continued. "And a mindless TV-watching schedule and I intend to stick to it" She never took her eyes off the TV and her tone was monotonous at best. It didn't carry the usual cheer or the joy of her usual persona.
            "Some stupid, idiotic, good-for-nothing, jerk GUY isn't worth all this!" Her best friend reasoned. "If you didn't give yourself so easily, you'd know this" she added.
            "You make me sound like a cheap hooker" She retorted with a bitter chuckle.
            "You trust guys too easily, when truthfully they're all the same. You'd think you would have learned after what...6? 7 times?" Her best friend fired at her.
            She rolled her eyes and if looks could kill, she'd be sad, depressed and without a best friend.
            "This is all you ever get! 3 extra pounds and many, many unnecessary tears!" Her friend added, with a worried tone.
            A scowl followed. She didn't like to be lectured. Not only did she not need it, she'd heard the same lecture many times before. It was in fact the sixth, or rather seventh, time she had gone through the same ordeal.
            "I'm your friend. Your best friend in fact, and I say this because I care" She started, moving for the first time, from her spot near the door. She stood in her friend’s line of sight and shut off the TV only to be met with a loud gasp of indignation. Next, she marched towards her wallowing friend and snatched the ice-cream right from her hands.
            "Hey!" The girl complained, but quickly quieted when her whining was met with a look that meant business.
            "Stop this now! It's time you did a personality check and that starts with a make-over!" Her best friend arranged.
            She scoffed, bitterly once again. She couldn't help it. Happiness or any other sort of cheerful emotion simply escaped her at the moment. "Are you out of your mind?"
            "Every single one of those backstabbing, cheating, loser, jerks is going to be eating their hearts out when they see you again" Her friend smirked, ideas running wildly through her head.
            "Crap, I've got no choice, do I?" She hesitated.
            "Nope. Let's go, take a very long shower 'cause frankly you kinda stink!" Her friend giggled, and momentarily the tension was lifted. The cracks were bound to show soon. She was a ticking bomb, the only question was: how much longer until the explosion?


-SofiePWNS!
 
New Post 8/2/2008 3:33 AM
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Re: The Story of a Girl [Joe FF] Prologue. 

wow, this is awesome!!! i love it!!!!! aww poor Crystal!!! pleaseee pms Sofie!!! This is sooo good!!!!

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New Post 8/2/2008 3:44 AM
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Re: The Story of a Girl [Joe FF] Prologue. 
i love this!
 
New Post 8/2/2008 3:51 AM
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Re: The Story of a Girl [Joe FF] Prologue. 

Oh wow, this story is really good! :) PMS, please.

:) Jay.


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New Post 8/2/2008 4:07 AM
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Re: The Story of a Girl [Joe FF] Prologue. 

bumpers

sounds good (:



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New Post 8/2/2008 5:22 AM
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Re: The Story of a Girl [Joe FF] Prologue. 

watching a Telenovela...
eating ice cream...
having a broken heart...
three things i have never done or had at the same time.
as a matter of fact i've only done the second one.
and she took my ice cream from me...
ugh i want it back...
well actually now i really want some but i'll resist.
make over?!
i'm not sure whether or not i should be afraid...
but hey as long as i look good and the jerks that broke my heart....
feel really stupid for letting me go
then i'm all for it.
this story is phenomenal so far Sofie.
i totally can't wait to read more of it.
post more soon chica please.


My Stories and Joint Stories
Who's The Dog?
Childhood Memories Turn To Teenage Woes (CSKS Joint)
Something in the Music (joint with Ashley and Corinne)
Captured In The Moment {Kevin ff}
My Oneshots
 
New Post 8/2/2008 2:31 PM
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Re: The Story of a Girl [Joe FF] Prologue. 

you guys girls are AMAZING!
ice-cream...for all of you!
I'm typing the enxt chapter now.
(=


-SofiePWNS!
 
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