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Taking Chances (Chapter 29 posted 11/19) 
Modified By Mandy  on 11/19/2008 2:45:29 AM)

Hi everyone!  Okay so this is the first story that I'm posting here, I've been writing for awhile but never posted.  Feedback would be GREATLY appreciated, because I don't want to post something no one reads.  I'm leaving for the weekend, but here's the first chapter!  I know it's short, they'll get longer I promise!


Chapter 1

 

The waves danced around his feet and ankles and he felt the bite of the cold water.  He drew a sharp breath as his feet tried to adjust to the water.  As he walked on the wet sand he looked out over the water and breathed in the salty air. He paused and closed his eyes taking in the calm sound of the waves.  A familiar laugh came from behind him and his heart stopped for a moment.  He turned around and looked at the girl it was coming from, relieved that she was a brunette.  Stop, his mind screamed at him.  It’s over.  She’s gone.  He continued down the sandy beach, trying to slow his fast-paced breathing, and looked for a place to sit and collect his thoughts. His eyes skimmed his surroundings and noticed a large rock in the distance with the waves crashing against the side.  Looking back over his shoulder to the place where his family was he continued on his quest toward his destination.

As he climbed the side his leg got caught in a wave, soaking his entire right side.  Mumbling under his breath he continued on, sighing in relief as he reached the top, and sat down on a flat area towards the front.  He looked out over the endless water and wondered why he couldn’t move forward with that part of his life.  He felt as if he was stuck in nothing but yesterdays and the tomorrows would all be the same.  It was a never-ending cycle since she left.  And he couldn’t seem to break out of it.

As he closed his eyes and let the cool sea breeze hit his face he heard someone climbing up the rock.  He sighed and hoped it wasn’t another fan after him for something.  He felt the presence of someone next to him and cracked his eye open to see, relieved when he saw who it was.

“Wow, this is an amazing view.”

Joe nodded in agreement.  “It’s amazing what an ocean can look like and how it can help you forget about life.”  His brother stayed silent, knowing if he wanted to talk he would as they sat in silence for a few minutes.

“Does it get any easier?”

Nick thought about what Joe had asked him.  “Well, I haven’t had much experience, but from what I do have…yeah, it does.  It’ll take awhile, and it’s rough, but it’ll get easier.”  Joe stayed silent and Nick tried to think of something else he could say to help his brother.  “It’s only been a month.  She broke your heart.  It can’t be put back together in a month.”

“She didn’t break it.  She shattered it.”  Joe stood up taking one last look at the endless water before looking down at Nick.  “Come on we better get back.”

As Joe climbed back down to the sand Nick slowly stood up, for the first time truly understanding how broken his brother was and wondered if the old Joe would ever make an appearance again.

 


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New Post 8/1/2008 10:53 PM
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WOW!!
That was really good!!
PMS!!
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New Post 8/1/2008 10:57 PM
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Re: Taking Chances (Chapter 1 posted 8/1) 

whoa, thats really good so far!

post more soon :D


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Re: Taking Chances (Chapter 1 posted 8/1) 

I would leave a comment telling you exactly how amazing this chapter is but you know I already love it seeing how I bug you everyday to write!! so instead I am going to bump it so other people can see how amazing this is.

 

 


 
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Re: Taking Chances (Chapter 1 posted 8/1) 

Bump???


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Re: Taking Chances (Chapter 1 posted 8/1) 

A Giant    BUMP for mandy because this story rocks and people should read!!


 
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Re: Taking Chances (Chapter 1 posted 8/1) 

ahh this story is amazing! please post moreee! and does anyone know if a new song comes out tomorrow on itunes?


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Re: Taking Chances (Chapter 1 posted 8/1) 

Okay how about ONE more comment before I post the next chapter???  One? Anybody?


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how about if i comment again...does that count?!? =]


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Re: Taking Chances (Chapter 2 posted 8/5) 

Sorry I didn't post earlier I drove to LA this weekend to see the Teen Choice Awards with my best friend in which she broke her toe.  Enjoy!

 

Chapter 2

 

“Okay what did I tell you about accumulating stuff.”

Izzie rolled her eyes and turned toward her father.  “That I shouldn’t buy anything because I have enough of it.”

“That’s correct.  I said no more buying anything because you don’t need anymore stuff.  So what did you do? You went out and bought more stuff.”

Shaking her head she turned back around and continued taping the box in front of her, ignoring her father’s grumblings as he continued to rearrange boxes.  Apparently she hadn’t done it properly.

A stack of boxes came out of a bedroom and were dropped to the floor revealing a short brunette with an annoyed expression on her face.  “Thanks for your help carrying these boxes out.  I really appreciate it.”

“No problem.”  Izzie felt the back of her head being slapped as Alexis walked by in search of water.  Izzie labeled the box she had just finished packing and wrote it down on the list she had made of what was in each box.  Satisfied that everything of hers was done she turned around to Alex.  “Okay what’s in your boxes so we can put it on the list?”

“What’s with you and your lists,” she replied drinking her water.

“I have to know where all my stuff is in the boxes and it’s also easier to unpack.  Now what’s in each of your boxes so we can put it on the list?”

“I don’t need a list.  Unlike you I don’t have that much stuff.”

“See?  Even Alex thinks you have too much stuff,” her dad reiterated as he came around the corner.

“Ugh! Again with the stuff!  I get it! Now can we move on?”  Izzie went on to go grab another box and brought it over to the living room.  “Okay, where’s my list?”

“Izzie, come on.”  Alex stomped over to where Izzie was, grabbed an armload of items that still had to be packed, and threw them inside the box.

Izzie watched her with wide eyes as Alex continued.  “Oh no what are you doing?”

“I’m throwing your stuff in a box so we can get out of here!”  Izzie opened her mouth but Alex quickly interrupted.  “No we’re not using the stupid list.  I want to get out of this stupid place.”

Izzie knew she had lost the fight and put everything that was left into the last box and taped it.  “Okay, everything’s packed.”  She pointed the movers that had come back up over to where the boxes were and looked around making sure that they had everything with them.

Izzie and Alexis went through the few rooms making sure they had everything so they could get going and start their new adventure.  The two friends had met through school at community college getting their general classes done so they could transfer to a university.  They had both moved from different states and had bonded for their mutual dislike of the city they lived in.  They had been nearly inseparable ever since.  They were always there for each other and when Izzie had received a letter saying she had been accepted to the visual communications program she wanted to go to Alex decided to move with her.  So here they were, taking one last look around their apartment, getting ready for their biggest adventure yet.

“Alright, I think we have it all.”  Izzie hugged her dad, since he was driving home he wanted to get going.

“Good luck kiddo, call me if you girls need anything or have any problems.”

“We will Dad.”  He said goodbye to Alex and was off, leaving the two girls in an empty apartment.  Izzie grabbed her purse and car keys and took the last glance around before turning toward Alex, who had a large grin on her face.

“Let’s hit the road to LA!”


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