hey guys!! ive never written a fanfic ever so comment on what you think of the first five chapters!! :

Chapter One

“Come on Nick!!” shouted Joe from the bottom of the staircase.

“Hold On!! I’m coming!” replied Nick. Nick rushed down the stairs, pulling three suitcases behind him.

“Let me help you with those.” Big Rob said. Big Rob was their body guard. He also played a rapper in one of their hit songs – Burnin’ Up. Big Rob took the suitcases, lifted them up and swung them over his shoulder—ALL THREE!! He walked out the front door to their car, where Kevin was waiting in the driver’s seat. Joe and Nick followed.

“There you guys are!!” called Kevin. “What took so long?”

“What usually takes so long?? NICK!!” Joe laughed at the “joke” he had claimed to have made. But Joe was the only one that was laughing. Kevin and Nick looked at each other and rolled their eyes.

“And you’re the guy with the label – “cute funny one?” Nick asked. Big Rob chuckled to himself as he got in the car.

“Ya, sorry Joe, that wasn’t one of your better jokes!!” replied Kevin. Joe stopped laughing and just buckled his seatbelt. Kevin backed out of the driveway, and they were off!!

A while back, Nick, Kevin, and Joe were asked if they wanted to star on a new reality show – “SIX stars, under ONE roof.” The guys agreed because it sounded like fun. The idea was that six stars, (three boys, three girls) would go live in a house for one month and do challenges. Every week, someone would be asked to leave the house—due to their actions/attitudes/score…ECT… It wasn’t a Disney Show, but it didn’t matter to the Jonas Brothers.

“So it’s Demi, Selena and…” Nick started to say. Joe cut him off.

“…and Miley. They’re going to be the three girls in the show.” Answered Joe. The car pulled up in front of a house and they all got out. The director was there, waiting for them.

“You guys, MUST, be the Jonas Brothers!!” he said. His name was Todd and he usually was a director for reality TV. The Jonas Brothers had never worked with him before, but had definitely heard of him before – Todd Swinsy!!

“Hey Todd!! Nice to meet you in person and talk to you in person rather than talk to you on the phone!!” Kevin said. They all shook hands with him and then helped Big Rob take the luggage inside (although, he didn’t really need all that much help).

“You can just leave the bags inside the door there. Okay. So the girls had a photo shoot today—actually they’re still at it. So they’re going to come later. So until they get here, you guys can relax, unpack, take a shower, whatever!! Explore, do what ever you want guys!! Your rooms are labeled and already assigned.” Explained Todd.

The guys were so excited; they took off into the house. This was going to be F-U-N!!

Chapter 2

“Aren’t these rooms awesome?” asked Joe. They had just checked out their rooms.

“I know!! The rooms even come with our very own MINI FRIDGE!!” Kevin said, all excited.

“AND!! They’re filled with SNACKS!! I love snacks!” said Nick. They were all sitting down, relaxing in the ‘boy’s headquarters.’ That was where the guys were to talk where the girls weren’t. So that they wouldn’t be able to hear them. Also it was used for interviews on the shows so you could say what you really feel. But to them, it was their new hang out.

“So I’m glad that we all got to do this! It wouldn’t be any fun if we weren’t all asked. But, let’s keep this competition clean. You know how we can get when we compete against each other.” Kevin said.

“Ya. We can’t turn against one another…like last time.” Agreed Joe. Nick nodded his head. All of a sudden, Todd walked in.

“Hey guys, enjoying so far?” he asked. They all replied with good comments, especially on the mini fridge. “So…the girls finished their shoot early and are on their way over. They’ll be here in about…fifteen, twenty minutes. They’re coming from the M magazine office so…” told Todd. The guys nodded and headed out to the front porch to wait for the girls to arrive.

“So, are you and Miley going to be okay with all of this happening?” Joe asked Nick. Nick looked up.

“It shouldn’t be a problem. It will probably be a little awkward at some points, but we’re both mature enough to handle this situation. I mean, it’s not like hate each other, we are just judged to hate each other in the magazines. And Miley kind of hates on me right now—I think…” Nick replied. Just then, the car pulled up, it was a black limo of course and out stepped…

Miley was coming toward Nick with her arms stretched out. Nick hugged her and kissed her on the cheek, signaling a hello. But as soon as he grabbed her, she wouldn’t let go. She hugged him, and hugged him, and hugged him. Finally he said something and backed away.

“What are you doing?” Nick said. Miley looked at him, glanced back to see where Demi and Selena were. They were talking to Todd about the show she assumed. She looked back at Nick. He was waiting for an answer.

“I-I-I-um…” was all she said. She couldn’t regain her confidence after what she had done. Why did she do that? They’re not even dating. Aw she just ruined everything.

“Miley, are you okay? Like what’s up with you lately?” asked Nick.

“Nick, I am so sorry. I honestly lost it for a couple of seconds. It’s like I had no control at all. Um, I don’t know what else to say, I’m so embarrassed!!” replied Miley. Fortunately, Demi and Selena came over to talk and basically saved Miley from her “most embarrassing moment.” ‘I don’t think I am ever going to live that down’ though Miley.

 Chapter 3

“Hey guys!!” Selena said. Selena kissed Nick on the cheek and gave him a hug. Demi did the same.

“Hey!” replied Nick. They got talking and Miley went down to swing on the tree swing that was on the big, old, tree in the front yard. Selena noticed Miley’s blank stare and knew something was wrong.

“Why don’t we go inside and see what’s up with Kevin and Joe…” suggested Demi to Miley.

“You go ahead you guys. I need to talk to Miley, privately.” She replied. So Demi and Nick went inside. Selena headed over to the swing.

“Hey Miley. What’s up?” asked Selena. Miley looked at Selena. Her lip started to quiver and her eyes welled up in tears. She burst out, crying. Selena reacted quickly, taking her off the swing and on to a nice green patch of grass that had a picnic blanket set up.

“Tell me, what’s wrong Miles?” asked Selena. Miley told her everything, how she misses Nick, how they never hang out anymore—normally. How they never talk like they used to and how she basically screwed up everything to do with that friendship/relationship.

“What have I become, Selena?” asked Miley.

“You are just growing up. It’s nothing at all that’s bad. You’re you and everyone loves you. Now it’s time for you to start loving you!” preached Selena. Selena reached into her purse and pulled out a tissue for Miley. Miley blew her nose. Then all of a sudden, just when Miley was wiping her eyes, Todd walked over to see what was up.

“Hey, Miley what’s wrong?” he asked. Selena piped in so Miley wouldn’t have to explain her embarrassing boy battles to him.

“It’s okay Todd, we got it covered, but is there a secret entrance up to our rooms? Like to Miley’s room?” asked Selena. Todd told them about the private staircase that they had for emergencies and that they could get up that way. So Selena and Miley went to Miley’s room and Selena cleaned Miley up so she looked like she hadn’t been crying so hard over Nick. All of a sudden, Selena remembered the cameras. There were cameras everywhere…the last thing that Miley would need was her boy troubles to be blabbed all over the world to everyone—including Nick!! Now they had a bigger problem. So the question is…were the cameras rolling?

 Chapter 4

“Okay! So you all know the purpose of this show! It is to…” Todd was cut off.

“WE KNOW!! You’ve told us already!!” shouted Joe in a jokingly way. He had explained this concept a million times, by phone, by email, by text…

“Now, the cameras are going to be running now okay? If they weren’t already rolling. All the time, it’s reality TV, and we are going to have to capture lots of footage okay?” explained Todd.

At that, they all did their own thing before dinner was served.

“Hey, Selena? Let’s go to that sound proof room you found. I need to talk to you.” Said Demi. Selena knew who this was about. Demi wanted to know how the whole Miley thing went down. She better had watch what she says. Demi grabbed Selena’s hand and pulled her down to the basement where the room was. They closed the door, sat on the floor and started talking.

“So what did Miley talk about with you?” Demi asked. Selena was hesitant to say it but Demi was her best friend. They told each other everything.

“Well, she said that she was upset about how bad she messed up her friendship with Nick—you know with the song…7 things?” explained Selena. She decided to leave the part out where Miley bawled over her and Nick’s breakup. That was a private part of the conversation. She wouldn’t do that to Miley anyway.

“I feel so sorry for her. She really messed things up for her and she’s such a nice girl too. And a great singer!!” replied Demi. “Besides, I don’t think she meant to get that reaction from people about that 7 things song. I don’t think it was about Nick.”

“No it wasn’t!! I don’t know what to say about the whole thing though. It’s not really my business!” said Selena. The two girls looked at each other.

“The first meal is served in five minutes; we better get up to the kitchen.” Said Demi. “I’m so glad we found this room though!!” The two best friends started to get up and walk up to dinner. But on the way out of the room, Selena noticed something move on the corner of the wall. IT WAS A CAMERA!! It must have captured everything they said about Miley. Now she was in hot water. She just criticized Miley…and now it was on national TV!!

 Chapter 5