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New Post 8/3/2008 5:38 PM
User is offline nickjluver15
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Goodbye [NEW Nick FF] Ch.01! 
Modified By nickjluver15  on 8/6/2008 1:43:10 PM)

So I started a new fanfiction just last week and was feeling a little hesitant about posting. But I think it's time for me to post another piece of my work on here. (Oh, and this is a sequel to one of my old FFs that was never posted on the forums, but you don't need the old FF to be able to follow along. All you need to know is that the first one took place 'today' technically, and this one takes place three years from now. Sorry if that's confusing.) Well, here goes nothing:

 

.This is the sequel to my first fanfiction, Still In Love With You.

Prologue:

-Three years later-

    "Nick?" I whispered as I curled up in his arms.

    "Hm?"  He was half asleep and his grip on me loosened.

    "Do you think you'll miss me?"

    His eyes opened and stared down at me, wide-eyed. "What do you mean?"

    "Do you think that you'll miss me when I leave next month?"

    He proceeded with staring at me.

    I heaved a sigh and continued on, "You forgot about my internship."

    "Well, I didn't forget exactly..."

    "Do you even care that I'm leaving, Nick?"

    "Of course I do, Nicole! I'll miss you so much, baby."  He kissed the top of my head and smiled weakly at me.

    "I'll miss you, too."

What do you guys think? Should I keep going? Comment please! =]


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New Post 8/3/2008 5:51 PM
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Re: Goodbye [NEW Nick FF] Prologue! 

Do you even have to ask? YES KEEP GOING! Get at it missy! :] You've got a lot of updating ahead, haha :]]

Peace and love;

Loes.



 
New Post 8/3/2008 5:55 PM
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Re: Goodbye [NEW Nick FF] Prologue! 

sounds good so far =]


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New Post 8/3/2008 6:19 PM
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Re: Goodbye [NEW Nick FF] Prologue! 

Thank you =D


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New Post 8/3/2008 6:26 PM
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Re: Goodbye [NEW Nick FF] Prologue! 

it's awesome I read a few chapters of Still in Love With You. And I'm already in love with the sequel!

Post more chicka


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New Post 8/3/2008 10:18 PM
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Re: Goodbye [NEW Nick FF] Prologue! 

Aw, thanks =] Hopefully chapter one will be up soon!

xoxo nicole <33


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New Post 8/4/2008 12:25 PM
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Re: Goodbye [NEW Nick FF] Prologue! 

BUMP.


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New Post 8/6/2008 3:42 PM
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Re: Goodbye [NEW Nick FF] Prologue! 

 

Gah, triple post. =/

Chapter 01:

    "Nicole? Can I ask you something?"

    "Anything," I said as I fiddled with his shirt collar.

    "Why are you going?"

    "Huh?"  I straightened up in my spot next to him and glared. "I have to go, Nick."

    "No you don't; it's just an internship," he stated boldly.

    "Yeah, just an internship that could lead to making my dreams come true!"  My voice started to raise, but I quickly lowered it, knowing that yelling wouldn't get us anywhere. "Do you love me?"

    "More than anything."

    "If you love me, Nick, you'll want me to go. If you get to follow your dreams, why can't I do the same?" I asked, wondering why he was acting so oddly.

    He shifted awkwardly in his place as he gazed around the room. "I don't think I can afford to lose you again."

    I placed my right hand in his left, with a happy yet sad look on my face.  I was truly touched that he loved me this much, but I was sad that I actually had to leave him. "I could never let that happen."

    "Promise?" he asked as hope filled his chocolate brown eyes.

    "I promise."

    "Great," he smiled. "You know, I am happy that you got this internship. I just couldn't accept the fact that you'd be gone."

    "It took me a while too, actually. I love New York, but only for vacations."  I briefly laughed at my own comment and continued, "It might be a little tough to live there for three months."  I looked at my feet, letting a tear slide down my cheek and hit the carpeted floor.

    "Hey."  Nick lifted my chin, trying his best to put on a true smile. "You'll be fine."

    "Thanks," I mumbled.

    "Anytime."  He wrapped his arms around my waist, a real smile taking place of the previous one.

    I smirked at him as I smashed my lips up against his.

    He pulled away after a few seconds at the sound of a door slamming shut. "Oh, hey Joe," Nick muttered awkwardly, sitting up.

    "Hey, you two."  Joe hung his coat and his scarf on the coat-rack conveniently located next to the front door. "Having fun?"

     "Not really; just talking," I butted in.

     "Mhmm, sure."  A smirk spread across his thin lips. "Well, I'm going upstairs, so you two can get back to...'talking'."  He jogged up the wooden staircase and disappeared down the hallway.

    We both began cracking up, slightly emabarrassed that Joe had walked in when we were kissing.

Kind of a filler; sorry.


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New Post 8/6/2008 4:01 PM
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Re: Goodbye [NEW Nick FF] Prologue! 

BUMPZ :). post more soon


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New Post 8/6/2008 4:22 PM
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Re: Goodbye [NEW Nick FF] Prologue! 

this is really good.
i love it so far.
post more soon chica please.


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