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Now You See Me [©;Meluhknee.][CHPT 4--PG 5 IS TOTALLY POSTED!!] 
Modified By Meluhknee. [♥]  on 8/18/2008 10:14:59 PM)

Here's the introduction to the first fanfiction I've written in five months. Tell me how much you hate it. :]

 

 

Introduction.

For the longest time, the music industry was my playing field. I embraced every aspect of my career, and that got me and my brothers signed to the biggest deal I had ever seen. I mean seriously, we were huge, and it was the greatest feeling in the world!

Then we became the poster children for Disney. Then the two-year tour deal with livenation. Then the bad break-ups, new albums, world tour. In the midst of all this fame and recognition, I suddenly felt utterly out of my element. I became a robot, writing for the label instead of myself.

Suddenly, I hated everything I had worked for, and I had to get out. I decided that I needed a break from all the hype and tabloids, rumors and screaming girls. I just needed a break to find myself again, and I couldn't do that with all the attention. So I did the only thing I could think of that would let me get back to my roots: I disappeared.

Now you see me.

Now you don't.

 

 

 

 

 


 



[7.21.2008]
Now You See Me
Thanks Ashlee!
Now You See Me, a fic by Meluhknee.
pm me at: ohdamnmeluhknee
 
New Post 8/5/2008 5:31 PM
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Re: You've Lost Me [ficbyMeluhknee.] 
Modified By Meluhknee. [♥]  on 8/5/2008 8:26:33 PM)

 

Chapter One.

Tears are falling, clothes are being shoved into a small duffle, and all you can hear is my pathetic sniffling in this entire house. I ignore the pounding silence and zip up my bag, pushing it towards the door to my room. Next on the list is setting my Gibson custom acoustic in its case and putting 'the box' of my music in it as well, and then I'm off to the bank to get some cash. I truly, truly can't stay here. It's not what I thought it would be, and I need some time to just...not be here.

I'm fairly certain that entails booking it to London.

I grabbed my bag and through it out the window into the bushes outside my house, and then gently lowered my guitar down after it. A sound from Kevin's room reaches my ears and I panic. I planned on leaving a detailed note about what I was doing, but I don't think I have enough time. I gotta get out, grab the car, get some cash, and get on a plane for the other side of the world. I blew a kiss to my old life and climbed out the window, using the large tree near it to reach the ground safely.

Once I hit the grass I pulled out the key's to my new Mustang and loaded my things in the car. The engine roared to life and I turned my back on everything I had worked so hard for. Now I just had to find a bank that was open this late.

After maybe 20 minutes driving the quiet LA roads I found a 24-hr atm next to the 7-Eleven near the label offices. I scowled at the towering building next door and withdrew as much as I could. I'd have to go to a different ATM if I hit my limit before I had enough, but fortunately I was able to withdraw about 6,000.00. It would be enough to get me out of the the country, hopefully. Then I could get a job and forget about the massive fortune my brother's and I earned.

I didn't need the money anyways. Just the music.

That's the whole point of this escapade anyways, to find my music again. I couldn't do it here, so London here I come. I sighed, gripping the wheel as I headed to LAX. Hopefully this'll work.

 

tell me how much you hate it. :D



[7.21.2008]
Now You See Me
Thanks Ashlee!
Now You See Me, a fic by Meluhknee.
pm me at: ohdamnmeluhknee
 
New Post 8/5/2008 5:37 PM
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Re: You've Lost Me [ficbyMeluhknee.] 

Hey!! This is awesome!!! I have a question too. There is a girl on HF (Hollywood Fiction) and BF (Broadcast Fiction) and all that jazz. She speels her name just like yours and I was wondering if you were her. Sorry if I seem wierd I am just wondering. Anyways this is AMAZING!! Post more soon plllzzz!!

Faitherz


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New Post 8/5/2008 5:47 PM
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Re: You've Lost Me [ficbyMeluhknee.] 

Wow
This is amazing
He is doing the right thing
I hope
=/
Keep writing 
This is really good
Is it your first?


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New Post 8/5/2008 5:50 PM
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Re: You've Lost Me [ficbyMeluhknee.] 

this is great! :D
pms!


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New Post 8/5/2008 5:59 PM
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Re: You've Lost Me [ficbyMeluhknee.] 

 XxFearMeFaitherzxX **7/30 BEST NIGHT OF MY LIFE!!** wrote

Hey!! This is awesome!!! I have a question too. There is a girl on HF (Hollywood Fiction) and BF (Broadcast Fiction) and all that jazz. She speels her name just like yours and I was wondering if you were her. Sorry if I seem wierd I am just wondering. Anyways this is AMAZING!! Post more soon plllzzz!!

Faitherz

 

Yep, that's me. I decided to come back to JBF, I miss this place.

And No, it's not my first fanfiction. Just the first one in a longgggg time. :D


[7.21.2008]
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New Post 8/5/2008 6:13 PM
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Re: You've Lost Me [ficbyMeluhknee.] 

this would be a bump. :]


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New Post 8/5/2008 9:54 PM
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Re: Now You See Me [ficbyMeluhknee.][chpt one is posted.] 

So....here's my deal.

I need a beautiful love interest for our main character, whoshallnotbenamedjustyet.

Auditions anyone?

Reply with this form if you feel up to it:

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Name

Age you wish you were

Appearance

Anything else, loves?

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Alright, I'm typing the next chapter, as well.

:D


[7.21.2008]
Now You See Me
Thanks Ashlee!
Now You See Me, a fic by Meluhknee.
pm me at: ohdamnmeluhknee
 
New Post 8/5/2008 10:08 PM
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Re: Now You See Me [ficbyMeluhknee.][chpt one is posted.] 

NameSarah Adams <3

Age you wish you were19 <3 Old enough for Kevin =)

Appearance
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p248/10dogs2/p.jpg
Im on the right =)

Anything else, loves?No, i love this <3
Hmm and i wanna know who shall not be named is
=)


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New Post 8/5/2008 10:21 PM
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Re: Now You See Me [ficbyMeluhknee.][chpt one is posted.] 
Modified By Madi  on 8/5/2008 8:21:49 PM)

Name: Madison but i go by Madi

Age you wish you were: im 16 and i like being 16 lol

Appearance: i am 5ft tall, i have medium length dark brown hair and bangs, i have green eyes that turn either more green or gray depending what color i wear, and i have fair skin

Anything else, loves? i dont think so but if there is you can pm me at MadiLuvsJB i really like this story so far!! :) thanks for letting me audition!


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