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Well, I started this fanfiction a while ago and I;m on like chapter Twenty or somthing, but I wanted to know if you guys wanted to read it or not. I'll post the summary and you can tell me.
Kassandra Rivers moves to New Jersey from Australia and meets Joseph Jonas. From age 11 to 13, it’s been a competition. But what happens when they have detention together and finally get to know each other? Will they finally become friends? Will they still hate each other?
Rating: I guess about PG. It makes references to some bad words, but it doesnt' actually say them. All it really says is 'crap'
So, if you guys want to read it, just tell me and I'll post the first few chapters.
teamjacob
Thanks Ari!
Thanks Ashleigh!
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ok, well, here's the first hmmmm.....maybe five chapters? Yeah, that was a really bad summary, I know.
Chapter One
"Um, I'll have the new guy, I guess" Joseph Jonas said, pointing to a person wearing baggy pants and a blue hoodie, with short black hair up in a blue baseball cap. "I'm a girl you idiot!" Kassandra Rivers snapped, tearing off her baseball cap making mounds of black hair fall down her back. "Kassandra, we do not call people idiots!" the coach exclaimed to the sixth grader. Some of the other students snickered. "It's Kassie!" Kassie snapped, walking up to stand next to Joseph. "Hi, I'm Joseph" he said, holding out his hand when Kassie was done putting her hair back up in her hat. "Kassie" she said shaking his hand. And that's when the competition began.
Chapter Two
Through the next year, the competition continued. Joe and Kassie, who were now 12 year old 7th graders, tried to beat each other in everything. "My mom told me I had to invite you guys to my birthday party, so here" Kassie said, shoving a pink envelope into the hands of each of the three girls standing in front of her. "We don't want to come to your stupid party!" Amanda *CENSORED*on said ripping the envelope in half, as he clones did the same. They walked away and Kassie leaned against her locker. "I'm canceling my party. No one likes me anyway" she muttered as she opened her locker door and stuffed the pink envelopes inside. She slammed the door and jumped a little when she noticed Joe Jonas leaning against his locker which was to the left of her's. "Of course no one likes you Rivers,
you always act like a bi-" Joe was cut off by Kassie, shoving her hand in front of his face and saying, "Don't start with me Jonas" She turned on her heel and walked off. Joe sighed as he watched Kassie giving the evil eye to the popular girls.
*~LATER IN CLASS~*
“So in the Revolutionary War….” the history teacher continued to drone on in his “I’m-so-boring” voice. Kassie’s head was drooping, and she was about to fall asleep. “Rivers! Jonas!” the history teacher snapped. Kassie sat up quickly. “Yes?” she and Joe exclaimed at the same time. “Partners for history project. Get working!” Kassie and Joe exchanged glances and groaned. “This is just great” Kassie muttered.
Chapter Three
“No! You don’t do it that way!” Kassie said snatching the scissors and the piece of paper from Joe’s hand and started cutting out the way she thought was right to cut out bubble letters. “No! You’re doing it wrong!” Joe exclaimed, trying to snatch it back, but Kassie wouldn’t let go. They started pulling on the paper and it soon ripped. “Oops….” Joe said staring at the piece of jagged paper in his hand. The teacher walked over. “Miss Rivers, Mr. Jonas, you two have detention” Kassie groaned.
*~IN DETENTION~*
“I hate you” Kassie said to Joe from across the room. “I hate you more” Joe said. “No talking” the detention teacher said. Kassie rolled her eyes and turned around in her seat so she wouldn’t have to look at Joe. Well, she could have always stayed the same way, but it was hard not to look at Joe. He was getting pretty cute. Wait! WHAT THE HECK AM I SAYING! Kassie thought, OH MY GOSH! Get that thought out of my head. I never said that! “Oh no” Kassie groaned.
Chapter Four
“Joe! Why did you get us in detention again! It’s entirely your fault we have to clean!” 13 year old, eighth grader, Kassie exclaimed, dragging along a black garbage bag as Joe stuffed garbage in it. “Don’t blame me, it’s your fault too” Joe said. “No, not really” Kassie said and smirked. “Well, glad to see your in a good mood, princess” Joe said sarcastically. Kassie’s eyes suddenly filled with tears. She swiped at her eyes, trying not to let Joe see her. But, he did. “Hey, what’s wrong Kassie?” Joe said, dropping a piece of garbage and walking over to Kassie. “Nothing, you just reminded me of my….never mind” Kassie said. “Reminded you of what?” Joe asked. “You reminded me of my…..well, my grandpa. He died right before school started and he always used to call me princess. You just reminded me of him and it made me sad.” Kassie replied sadly. “Sorry. I didn’t know” Joe said, now thinking in a different way of Kassie. They way her blue eyes sparkled, her long black hair always swished around, and how pretty she looked when…..Ok, rewind! Freeze! What the heck am I thinking? I shouldn’t be thinking that way about Kassie. Joe shook his head trying to get the thought out of his head. That wasn’t right.
The now 14 year old Kassie walked in on the first day of ninth grade. She had hair just below her shoulder blades and had blue tips. She was wearing a dark blue mini skirt with a pink shirt and black strappy shoes. She had long bangs on both sides of her face and had on sunglasses that covered her baby blue eyes. She had a black purse on her shoulder and her books in her hand. “I don’t feel right Julia” Kassie said to a girl she met at the end of eighth grade. “What do you mean?” Julia asked, sweeping her side part behind her ear. “This isn’t me. I usually wear jeans or shorts or something. Not a mini skirt” Kassie said pointing to her skirt. “You don’t have to wear a skirt, everyday it’s not like I’m trying to change you. I just thought it looked really cute on you” Julia said. “Whatever you say” Kassie replied as she walked to her locker. Kassie heard whistles behind her. “Look at the new girl” James Mark said. “Wow” Joe Jonas said. “And where are you from? HOTS-ylvania?” James asked laughing. Joe didn’t laugh. “Shut up James, it’s me” Kassie exclaimed as Jacob Mark, James’ twin brother came to the front of the group. “Wow. The new girl sounds a lot like Kassie” Kassie punched him on the arm hard. “Wow. It IS Kassie!” Kassie grabbed her sunglasses and put them on her head. “What’s wrong with you?!” Kassie said. “How was I supposed to know that was you? You look hot” James said. “Whatever” Kassie said, rolling her eyes and walking back to her locker. She opened it and grabbed her books. She felt eyes on the back of her head. She turned to find Joe staring at her. “What?” Kassie asked, holding out her hands, palms up. “Nothing. Bye Kass” Joe said, waving and walking away quickly. “Bye…Joe” Kassie said as she turned back to Julia. “He was hot” she said. “I used to hate him” Kassie said. “Used to?” “Well, he thought I was a boy in 6th grade. Then he was a jerk in 7th, but then in 8th he sort of…….” Kassie paused, “Changed”
So, I'll see how you guys like it, and i'll post more if you want more. And, yes, I know Chapter Five, sounded a lot like a Hannah Montana some of you might have seen but that's where I got the idea from.
teamjacob
Thanks Ari!
Thanks Ashleigh!
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hehe Julia's my name!! haha. i love it so far!! =]
oh and can you make it so when people talk
"It's"
"Like"
"This?"
please and thank you! it'll be easier to read if you did that =]
post more sooon <3
12.9.05, 7.7.07, 8.16.07, 1.9.08, 3.16.08, 5.17.08, 8.1.08. |
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sounds good, PMS please
~Lexi
Thanks SO much Ari!!!
(Thank you Starbound27)
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JuliaHearts_JB wrote
hehe Julia's my name!! haha. i love it so far!! =]
oh and can you make it so when people talk
"It's"
"Like"
"This?"
please and thank you! it'll be easier to read if you did that =]
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Ok, I'm sort of confused. What do you mean? And what does PMS mean? (I;m new, so...)
teamjacob
Thanks Ari!
Thanks Ashleigh!
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PMS means post more soon
and what JuliaHearts_JB means (i THINK) is to press enter after each person speaks, making it a new line 'cuz that makes the dialogue a LOT easier to follow =D
~Lexi
Thanks SO much Ari!!!
(Thank you Starbound27)
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instead of like "What's up?" I asked bobby. "Nothing much, how about you?" "Nothing really"
it could be
"What's up?" I asked bobby.
"Nothing much, how about you?"
"Nothing really."
it would be easier to read. =]
but i REALLLLLY like the story so far!!!
12.9.05, 7.7.07, 8.16.07, 1.9.08, 3.16.08, 5.17.08, 8.1.08. |
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yup =] lol
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