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New Post 8/8/2008 1:50 AM
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No where to turn(Joe ff) -Chp 31 10/12 posted! 
Modified By jenna  on 11/12/2008 10:33:56 AM)

 

 

Okay so I've never wrote one of these before, but I had the idea while I was taking a shower earlier for what I think, would be a great fic. I just hope I can keep up with it and keep the ideas fresh enough and that you guys will appreciate it!

Here is the Intro:

 

Daisy sat on her bed, Which was covered in lavish red velvet and leopard print decor. As she sit in front of her mirror crying her lace slip pealing off and blooded, Her mascara staining her pale peach face an intense black. Her Deep stained red lips bruised and battered. She didn't know what to do She didn't know where to turn, She was terrified.

 

Just months ago she was a normal 18 year old girl. That is until she met Jack. She had been struggling to find a job after being fired from previous. Her family Didn't understand her they weren't willing to help her. She had nowhere to go...Jack promised her so much for one thing in exchange. Her pride and dignity.

 

She was so dead inside at this point, The only Emotion that she was familiar with.. Was letdown and embarrassment. She needed someone to save her, She didn't think it would be possible. That was Until she met the boy that could save her and a family that could love her, Take care of her Just overall be with her to take her broken wings and heal her.

 

Tell me what you guys think, Any ideas or anything would be greatly appreciated, I'll write more once People seem to like the idea! :)

I hope this will be appropriate The subject is touchy But I think touchy is good sometimes.

 

 


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New Post 8/8/2008 1:53 AM
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Bump :)


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New Post 8/8/2008 2:03 AM
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bump! I like this story! Now read some of my fics. I don't have too many readers! Please read..."Dear Mr. Jonas, I Miss You!"

post more soon!


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New Post 8/8/2008 2:07 AM
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:( i guess no one likes it :/


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I just wrote a comment! This is really good! I hope that people will like it more when you get towards the middle of it. I know I'm already hooked!


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New Post 8/8/2008 2:27 AM
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I'm writing chapter one right now :)

I'll be done shortly


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Modified By jenna  on 9/13/2008 1:28:11 PM)

 

Ok here is chapter 1, I hope you guys like it Feedback is highly appreciated.

Chapter 1:
As daisy floored through the hustle and bustle of New York city, She thought to herself and prayed that she'd get this job.
 

She had been three months late on her rent for her 1 bedroom studio apartment. She really needed this job more than most people probably did.

 

After all the people applying for this job probably had Someone that cared for them, Someone to love them, Parents that would help them out when needed at their most Desperate moments and Vulnerability. Not Daisy she had left home at Fourteen. She had been on her own basically since then, she never grew up properly. Not how a child should grow up. This forced her to grow up at such an early age Which made her very weary of people. She never trusted anyone, Probably because she's never had a reason to.

 

Her happiest moment was when she was six years old, Playing in the sandbox alone While her mother had to take care of some business. A boy about her age came over to her and talked to her. Just talked to her Like, she was a real person. He gave her a flower from the park and proceeded to put it in her hair Then kissed her on the cheek. This was the only time Daisy had ever been happy Her whole life...

 

She had hoped for this job With all her heart. She Then arrived at the Building for the interview. Daisy had wished for a job like this her whole life. She was applying for an internship at vogue. The only thing that she had ever been passionate about was fashion. She wore her best dress and some oxford heels(www.polyvore.com/cgi/set), She looked great Her Light Blonde hair up in a high ponytail with her bangs pushed out of her face. She had Light makeup on Mostly Mascara, Some light blush and a rose lipstick.

 

She had waited for 10 minutes Till they called her in. She got turned down. Daisy felt her heart shatter once more. Just as it has so many times before.

 

She walked out and preceded to the nearest Starbucks. She sat down in a seat Farthest away from any one else, and just cried, Until a waitress came over, and asked her if she was all right. Daisy just nodded her head yes. She was used to doing this, acting like nothing was wrong People usually just shrugged it off and walked away. Not this girl she knew something was up by the way Daisy came in.

 

"Hi, I'm Karina" She said.

 

Daisy just stared at her.

 

Karina then held out her hand "What's your's?"

 

Daisy stared at her in Disbelief that this girl, This person she's never met before was wasting their time on her.

 

"Daisy" She said.

 

Karina said"Hello daisy" and shook Daisy's hand lightly.

 

"What can I get for you daisy?" Karina said.

 

"It doesn't matter, anything" Daisy said.

 

"Well I think you could use a double shot of espresso in a french vanilla Chai latte, It's my favorite, I have it, whenever I’m having a bad day. It cure's EVERYTHING" Karina said.

 

Daisy nodded and karina quickly left and came back with the latte. Daisy took a deep sip Carefully trying not to burn her mouth, But really not caring at that point. A tall Handsome boy with white wayfarers, a hat and scarf approached Daisy's table, Karina then left.

 

He said "Hello, How are you?" he took her hand and lightly squeezed it.

 

"are you all right, I don't mean to impose, but You look like you need a friendly face"

 

Daisy Nodded "Yes, I'm fine." The boy Introduced himself.

 

"My name is Joe."He said

 

"Nice to meet you Joe, My name is Daisy and as much as I appreciate your kind act, I'd rather be alone at the moment." Daisy said

 

"That's quite understandable, I was just wondering why a beautiful girl, such as you looked so upset."

 

Daisy stared at him shocked that he would be so interested in some random broken down girl in a coffee shop. 

 

"If you ever need anything here is my number"Joe Gestured

 

Daisy looked at it, sipped half of her latte left money on the table and left the coffee shop.

 

She was so distraught by this man, She didn't know what to think. She caught the subway home to her studio apartment and was greeted by an eviction notice. She then began crying very hard, Opened her door and fell asleep. The eviction notice said that she had 30 days to pay her rent, or she would be thrown out without any warnings. She didn't know what to do at this point..


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Wow is all I can say! lol PMS! This is amazing!


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New Post 8/8/2008 2:59 AM
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Lol thank you so much


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Bump :)


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