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 8/10/2008 4:38 AM
 
 Modified By lexi ♥  on 9/3/2008 3:04:12 PM

Hi everyone! I had this idea for a story when I was watching some kids playing soccer yesterday. This is my first attempt at a fan fiction so I would really appreciate all your comments and suggestions.

And I'm sure you can tell which of the Jonas boys this story is about (based on the title)... I hope that as the story progresses, I can add more on the two other boys.


THESE GIRLS HAVE SOMETHING SPECIAL ABOUT THEM

Chapter 1

-Joe's POV-

I was going for my morning jog when I got to a local park and saw two girls playing soccer. One seemed to be my age and the other was probably around 5 or 6. I decided to take a break and sit down on the grass, listening to my iPod while I watched the two girls (I'm assuming they're sisters) playing.

“Come on Jamie, I can you can do it!” the older girl said as she coached the little girl into kicking the ball into their makeshift post.

Jamie, I’m assuming that’s her name since that’s what the older girl called her, then smiled at the older girl and kicked the ball to the goal. It wasn’t a very strong kick, but it managed to roll itself into the goal post.

“Good job, Jamie!” the older one yelled as she clapped her hands. Jamie, the little girl, then beamed with pride and ran to the older one for a hug, which she gratefully accepted.

I was fiddling with my iPod when I heard a faint yell…

“Ball please!” I saw the older one yelling from across the field as the younger one ran towards me to get the ball.

I stood up and grabbed the rolling ball and walked over to the little girl to hand it over. As the little girl got closer, I realized that she had Down Syndrome. I learned about this condition when my brothers and I performed for the Special Olympics a few months back.

I knelt down and gave her the ball.

“Thank you” she said smiling at me. The little girl was adorable. She had blonde hair up to her chin, with bangs, brown eyes and was wearing glasses.

“Wait! You’re Joe!” the little girl said as she took a good look at me.

The older one then approached us. She had light brown hair that was in a ponytail and hazel eyes. The older one looked at me with a confused look on her face and then suddenly her face lit up… I think she realized who I was.

“Um, yeah” I said, smiling as the little girl suddenly put her hands around my neck and hugged me tight.

“Jamie, I think you should let Joe breathe first” she said, stressing my name and giggling at her little sister. “She’s a huge fan” she explained as she smiled at me.

Jamie then let go.

“Why hello Jamie! Yes I’m Joe and I’m very glad to meet you” I said as I took Jamie's hand and kissed it lightly. This made her giggle.

“Do you want to play with us?” Jamie asked with her bright eyes just looking at me. How could you resist that?

“Sure! I’d love to!” I said as Jamie suddenly took my hand and we walked to the middle where their makeshift posts were.

“I’m sorry, I didn’t catch your name” I said as I turned to the older girl.

“That’s because I didn’t throw it” she said, grinning at me.

“Sam” she then said.

“Joe” I replied with a huge smile on my face.

“I knew that” she said laughing at me. Oh yeah, duh.

The three of us formed a triangle and started kicking the ball around. I looked at Jamie, the adorable little girl who seemed to always have a smile on her face. Then there was Sam, a pretty girl who was a very caring sister and who also happened to be very witty. I’ve only met them for a few minutes but I could tell that there was something special about these girls, and I’m going to make sure I get to know them better!

 

 


 

What do you guys think?

 

 

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 8/10/2008 3:27 PM
 

People viewed my story but no one commented.

Is it that bad? LOL.

I'd appreciate any comments/suggestions.

 

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 8/10/2008 3:50 PM
 

no its really good!

I like it a lot so far.

Keep writing.


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 8/10/2008 4:23 PM
 

This is REALLY GOOD! :] Im excited for the next chapters :]


Check out my fanfics yo!
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 8/10/2008 5:13 PM
 
 Modified By lexi ♥  on 8/10/2008 3:45:12 PM

Wow. Thank you Hayley and Mrs. Tayler Noel Jonas.

(Who's your favorite Jonas Brother btw?)

Here's Chapter 2.

Tell me what you think.


CHAPTER 2

I got back to the hotel about two hours later with a huge smile on my face. I really enjoyed spending the morning with Jamie and Sam. We made plans to meet up again the following day, and this time I told them that I would try to bring my brothers along so we could play an actual game.

When I got to the room, I saw Nick's back facing me, he was peering through the closet, trying to decide what to wear today.

"Nichooolaaas!" I shouted in a sing-song way as I ran towards him and jumped on his back.

"Whoa!" he yelled out, surprised by my attack.

"There you are! Where were you? I thought you were only going for a run? What took you so long? We have an interview in 2 hours!" Nick suddenly said. That's Nick for you. He might be the youngest (well, except for Frankie), but he's also the responsible (and the most serious) one in our group.

"One at a time man!" I said as I plopped on the bed.

"I did go for a run. But then I got to a park and saw two girls playing soccer --" I started.

He shook his head, laughed at me, and said, "I should've known! It's not even 10:30 and you've already started flirting!"

"Wait! You didn't let me finish!" I said as I sat down and looked at him, squinting one eye as if to give him an evil glare.

"Ok, I'm sorry Joseph, now please, continue" he said, still shaking his head and laughing at me as he sat down on his bed.

"So yeah, I met the two girls. They were sisters. The older one, Sam, is 18, and the younger one's 6. The younger one, Jamie, has Down Syndrome, and also happens to be a fan. It was actually a lot of fun. Jamie was really adorable. Remember how the kids were when we performed for Special Olympics? And it was sweet that Sam was really taking time to teach her sister to play soccer. So there, we spent a couple of hours just kicking the ball around so Jamie could get the hang of it. I'm meeting up with them again tomorrow, and I was wondering if you, Frankie and Kevin would want to go to." I said and then took a deep breath. I didn't realize how fast I was speaking.

I looked at Nick and saw that his face had gone blank, then he suddenly smiled at me.

"Looks like you really had a great time Joe. I can't believe you said that so fast!" he said, again laughing at me. "But sure, count me in. Sounds like fun. Now, if you'll excuse me, I'll leave you with your goofy smile while I try to decide what to wear for our interview today." he said as he stood up and headed back for the closet.

"Cool! Thanks bro! One down, two more to gooo!" I said as I jumped out of bed and looked for Frankie and Kevin.

I caught up with Frankie and Kevin as they were playing Wii in the living room of the hotel suite. I told them what I told Nick, but I don’t really know if they understood me, I was just babbling as the two of them continued playing. They did say yes though, so I guess my mission was complete!

Now to text Sam. Yes, I did manage to get her number, but once again I made a fool of myself while trying to get it from her.

*flashback*

“Well, we better get going. We promised our mom we’ll be home by 10” Sam said as we were fixing up their makeshift posts.

“Joe! Play again tomorrow!” Jamie said excitedly.

“Jamie, they might be busy” Sam said, giving me an apologetic look. I smiled at her and shook my head.

I squatted so I could face Jamie, “I’d love to play with you tomorrow. Tell you what, I’ll try to bring Kevin, Nick and Frankie, so we can play 3 on 3” I told Jamie.

“Yay!” she shouted as she wrapped her arms around my neck and gave me a huge hug. I hugged her back and stood up, carrying Jamie.

“I’ll walk you guys to your car” I said, facing Sam.

Sam smiled at me and nodded as we walked to their car.

She opened the front door and I put Jamie down.

"Thank you Joe!” Jamie then said as she kissed me on my cheek. This kid really made me feel good inside.

"I’ll see you tomorrow, Jamie!” I said as she hopped on to the passenger seat.

"Thanks for playing with us Joe. You have no idea how happy you made Jamie” Sam then said, smiling at me.

“Don’t mention it. I had fun too.”

"So I guess we’ll see you here tomorrow at around 7:30?” she asked as she closed Jamie’s door and started to walk over to the driver’s side.

“Yeah, okay.” I said.

"Wait!” I suddenly shouted as I ran in front of her and we were looking at each other straight in the eyes. I tried to get my phone from my pocket, but I couldn’t get my eyes off of her. “Um, I, uh…” I then started stammering and simply handed her my phone.

“Let me guess, you’re asking for my number so you could tell me if your brothers can come tomorrow or not?” she said, grinning at me.

"Uh, yeah!” I said. What was I thinking? Why couldn’t I have asked for it properly? I then unconsciously slapped my forehead which made her laugh at me.

She then punched in her number on my phone and handed it back to me, still grinning at me.

“We’ll see you tomorrow, Joe” she said, shaking her head and still grinning at me as she got to her car.

*end of flashback*

So yeah, I, Joseph Adam Jonas, just made a fool of myself in front of a girl. And it wasn’t even intentional.

I then sent Sam a text message saying that my brothers will be joining us tomorrow. I once again had a goofy grin on my face as I sent the message, thinking of the two special girls I just met. I couldn’t wait for tomorrow.

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 8/10/2008 5:25 PM
 

Sorry about the spacing! I'm trying to fix it!

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 8/10/2008 5:26 PM
 

this is really good! pms! :D


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 8/10/2008 5:33 PM
 

Wow. Thanks Emily!

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 8/10/2008 5:36 PM
 

alexis317 wrote

Wow. Thanks Emily!

you're welcome :D you're a great writer!


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 8/10/2008 5:50 PM
 

Thanks! You're sweet!

I just clicked on your siggy and I was amazed at how many stories you've already written! LOL, I can't choose which one to start with!

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