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New Post 8/11/2008 3:12 PM
User is offline Nina (Is saving money to buy a Pentax K1000D
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Untouched .A Joe Jonas FanFic. 

 

I got this random story idea from listening to this song by The Veronicas. Even though Kevin is my favorite, I wanted to write about Joe :3. So here you go! Ha, that rhymed. I think I'm going to stop blabbing so I don't have to make more of a fool out of myself and so you can read the story!

 

 

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Chapter 1___ - ___

 

Jane sighed loudly as she stared up at her Jonas Brothers poster.

 
“Jane, you’re so obsessed,” Kim commented as she sat down on her friend's bed.
 
“Shut up, Kim!” Jane laughed and threw a pillow at her. Was she really obsessed with them? Please.
 
Jane was only 17 years old. She was still not legal and sometimes wished she was. Her parents treated her like an adult.
 
Kim giggled at Jane. “Come on Jane let’s go somewhere!” Kim laid back. Jane walked over and plopped down right next to her. They both sighed.
 
“Kim, it’s 11:00 o’clock. What can we do?” Jane asked. Kim thought for a moment.
 
“Clubbing,” Kim spilled. Jane looked over at her friend.
 
“We aren’t even legal! How do you expect us to-,” Kim interrupted.
 
“Duh, sneak in,” Kim stared at Jane. The two nodded. Jane wasn’t so sure, but Kim was.
 
They grabbed their coats and ran out of the house. Jane’s parents weren’t going to be home until next morning. The two have time.
 
There was a long line that stood in front of the local club in town. Jane and Kim’s eyes widened. Jane turned towards Kim, “I thought we were sneaking in!” She whispered.
 
“We are,” and with those words Kim grabbed her cautious friend and they ran into the alley between the club and boutique. The two peeked behind the wall of the club buidling. No one was in the back and there was a steal door that was opened just a bit by a door stopper.
 
“Kim, what if we get caught!” Jane paniced.
 
“We won’t. I promise. If we do get caught it’s my fault. If we have fun then you must thank me,” Kim laughed. Jane rolled her eyes. Jane held her hand out as if she was a slave and Kim gladly took it and pulled her friend forward.
 
Jane’s hand ran along the doorknob. She pulled back slightly and it opened more. The two walked into a small hallway. Jane could hear muffled music.
 
There was another door across the hallway and the two walked over and opened it just a creak.
 
Lights flashed and bodies appeared on the dance floor. People were laughing and drinking. The two entered the room. Music was pumping through the huge speakers and Jane’s body felt as if it was beating with the music. “Is the music too loud for you?” Kim smiled. Jane shot a glare and her annoying friend shut up.
 
“Let’s go!” Kim pushed Jane and the two headed for the dance floor. The music grew louder as she got closer. Could she really be clubbing? Was this a bad idea? Was it the really the right thing? Jane could picture her parents criticizing her choice of fun. Oh well. Nobody’s perfect.
 
The dance floor was so crowded not even a mouse could fit through the small spaces between people's moving feet. Kim started jumping up and down waving her arms along with a couple other people. Jane tried jumping, but became frustrated because of no space.
 
“Come on, Jane!” Kim nudged her friend. Jane faked a smile and began jumping up and down. Hopefully her asthma doesn’t come to haunt her after this one night.
 
Jane looked at every face she could manage to see. She saw a couple cute guys here and there, but the lights would flash every 2 seconds which blinded her eyes partially.  The songs were so up beat that it was so hard to dance along with it. That's what she got for trading her dancing shoes in for a guitar. 
 
A young man in the crowd stood there watching. He watched Jane. He was frozen. His eyes couldn’t leave her. As hard as it was too see with the light flashing, he was still able to catch that girl. She stood out unlike most of them. Gorgeous was on his mind and that's what he wanted right now.
 

Jane stopped dancing and let her arms hang beside her. They were numb because she had her arms up for so long. Jane thought she was the only one NOT dancing until she saw a handsome face. Across the room stood a young man a little bit taller than her; their eyes met and Jane froze up. Jane’s breathing became fast-paced as the young man walked over towards her. She looked behind to see if he was looking at someone else. Boy, was she wrong.

When Jane turned around there stood the young man. He bent down and whispered, "Hi, my name's Joe."

 

 

Laugh as much as you breathe and love as long as you live

 
New Post 8/11/2008 3:21 PM
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Re: Untouched .A Joe Jonas FanFic. 

That was really good! Post more soon, (:

 
New Post 8/11/2008 3:27 PM
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Re: Untouched .A Joe Jonas FanFic. 

thanks!


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New Post 8/11/2008 3:42 PM
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Re: Untouched .A Joe Jonas FanFic. 

AHHHHH!!

i loved it

the details are just WOW... beyond amazing

i cant wait for more!!!

=P


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New Post 8/11/2008 3:48 PM
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Wow, this is ahhmazing! Post more soon =D

xoxo nicole <33


Thanks Ashlee!
Thanks Ari!
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New Post 8/11/2008 6:00 PM
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Re: Untouched .A Joe Jonas FanFic. 

aww, thanks kaylee!


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Thanks Nicole!!! <33


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New Post 8/11/2008 10:00 PM
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You're very welcome =] Post more when you get the chance!

xoxo nicole <33


Thanks Ashlee!
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New Post 8/11/2008 10:08 PM
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This story is really good!! Post more soon!


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New Post 8/12/2008 1:21 AM
User is offline Nina (Is saving money to buy a Pentax K1000D
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Untouched .A Joe Jonas FanFic. Chapter 2 

Thanks for the  great support & love!

You guys kick major Jonas butt!

xoxoxoxox -Nina

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Chapter 2 ____

Jane tensed up when she felt Joe’s breathing against her ear. It went down her a neck a bit. “I- I’m- Hi I’m J-Jane,” Jane blushed a bit, but Joe couldn’t see her face that well because of the darkness and flashing lights. Jane couldn’t really describe Joe’s face that much, but from what she saw he had black hair which curled slightly at the end of each strand on his head. It was wavy and curly at the same time. He was wearing skinny fit jeans and a black t-shirt. The dumb lights messed up most of Jane’s vision. The rest of the night she prayed that she wouldn’t become color blind. For some reason, Jane could recognize Joe’s voice.
 
 The music still played in the background as the two stood there. Joe brushed his arm against Jane’s.  “So, Jane, want to dance?” Joe questioned. All Jane could do was nod. The two started jumping up and down and dancing. Soon the song Hook Me Up by The Veronicas came on.
 
“I love this song!” Jane shouted. Joe smiled. He took his hands and intertwined them with Jane’s. The two still danced together.
 
I'm tired of my life
I feel so in between
I'm sick of all my friends
Girls can be so mean
I feel like throwing out
Everything I wear
Starting over new
Cause I'm not even there
 
The two jumped up and down smiling and laughing. Jane looked up to see Kim staring at them. Jane ignored her and kept on dancing with Joe. The lights went along with the beat to the song.
 

Sometimes...
I want to get away some place
But I don't want to stay too long
Sometimes
I want a brand new day
Trying to fit in where I don't belong
Hook....Hook me up
I want to feel the rain in my hair
Hook....Hook me up
Where should we go?
I don't even care
Anywhere is good enough
Hook me up
Hook me up
 Jane’s smile caught Joe’s eye. She was definitely his type. He knew and she knew, too.
 
 I like the lights turned out
The sound of closing doors
Not like other girls who always feel so sure
Of everything they are
Of what they're going to be
Sometimes I'm just a girl stuck inside of me
of me
 
Joe’s arms were around Jane’s lower stomach/upper waist. Jane’s arms were around Joe’s neck. Joe started doing the robot and Jane giggled. Jane bobbed her head back and forth like an Egyptian.
 
Sometimes
I want to disappear some place
But I don't want to stay too long
Sometimes
I'm feeling so alone
Trying to fit in where I don't belong
Hook....Hook me up
I want to feel the rain in my hair
Hook....Hook me up
Where should we go?
I don't even care
Anywhere is good enough
Hook me up
Hook me up

Anywhere is good enough
Hook me up

They're going to crash and burn
I'm going to find a way
Nothing left to say
 
The song was almost over and Joe and Jane were sweating to death by now. The club was so stuffed and it was hard to breathe in such a small tight place. The music was so loud that Jane’s body was beating with the song. Joe’s was as well. The moment became intense.
 
Hook....Hook me up
I want to feel the rain in my hair
Hook....Hook me up
Where should we go?
I don't even care (I don't even care)
Hook....Hook me up
I want to feel the rain in my hair
Hook....Hook me up
Where should we go?
I don't even care
Anywhere is good enough
Hook me up
Hook me up
Hook me up
 
After the song was finished people clapped and screamed from all the hype. Joe and Jane shook hands and then looked away from each other smiling.
 
“Sooo…,” Joe put his hands in his pockets and rocked back and forth. Jane scratched the back of her head.
 
“Uhhh…,” Jane looked around the club. Kim was still watching the two. Kim winked and Jane shook her head. Joe took his hand and tipped Jane’s head up. He bent down and kissed her on the lips. A shiver went down both of their backs. It seemed like forever, but only lasted for a couple minutes. The two pulled away from each other.
 
“So, do you want my-,” Joe felt a tap on his shoulder and turned around to see his brothers.
 
“We have to go,” the tall one spoke. Jane really couldn’t see them two well, but knew that they must be Joe’s friends or something. What she could describe was that the two friends of Joe both had curly hair. One had sideburns. The other one had shaggy, curly hair. The lights still flashed.
 
 “But I’m in the mid-,” Joe was interrupted again but this time it was by the shaggy curly haired young man.
 
“Joe, let’s go! We have to leave,” Joe sighed loudly. Joe turned back to Jane.
 
“Will I ever see you again?” Joe asked Jane. Jane was about to open her mouth.
 
“Dude! Let’s go!” And with that Joe was dragged off by his two buddies. Jane was standing there watching him being taken away. 'I hope he actually knows those people,' Jane thought.
 
“Jane, if I don’t get out of her I’m going to have a seizure,” Kim grabbed onto Jane’s shoulder. Jane nodded and the two walked out of the club. Jane noticed her friend’s funny walking and the way she talked.
 
“Kim, you aren’t drunk, are you?” She turned to her friend. Kim laughed as if she heard the most hysterical thing in her life. “Oh god,” Jane wrapped her arm around her drunk friend.
 
“I swear to drunk, I’m not god,” Kim started clapping her hands and laughing as if she had something caught in her throat.
 
When the two reached Jane’s house it was 1:00 in the morning. Jane wanted to go to bed so badly, but Kim thought otherwise.
 
Kim was laying down on the bed holding her stomach. She was groaning for over an hour. Jane ranted on how she met the perfect guy for her.
 
“So it was a one night kiss!” Kim laughed. Jane threw a pillow at Kim. Kim groaned when it hit her on the head. “Ow…,” she murmured.
 
“Oh, go to bed. That didn’t hurt!” Jane plopped down next to her friend and fell asleep; dreaming about the mysterious boy named Joe.

 


Laugh as much as you breathe and love as long as you live

 
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