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New Post 8/15/2008 3:46 PM
User is offline CharlieRae`​{ Shiloh :D }​
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Stronger`{ chap.6 }new!! 
Modified By CharlieRae`​{ Shiloh :D }​  on 8/30/2008 11:40:17 AM)

Stronger                                          

  Danea took A deep breath as she ajusted her guitar strap on her bare bruised shoulder. She looked into the mirro one last time to make sure her make-up covered her brusises. She made sure her room door was locked before going over to her chair where it was set up infront of the camrea.

 " Hi guys im Danea and I wrote this song a few hours ago. So leave comments", She said giving off her best smile. It pained her to even talk. Her cheek was still bruised badly. She ingnored her lingering thoughts as she began to strum the opening strings. She parted her lips and began.

the night is getting darker
soon the stars will be falling down to rescue us,
sing a song for me,
lift me higher with your words,
sing that cold melody.


now follow me
onto the moonlit sidewalk
and take my hand
grip it tighter, don't let it go

passions taking over skies
leaving sand behind for them to choke on
they'll try to speak
negatively about us,
but they cant say another word
they'll realize,
jealousy has taken over their minds
trying to break us down
but what they don't know
is it only makes us stronger.

 She stopped to whip a stay tear away from her cheek. Not knowing she had taken off her make up revealing her beaten up skin. She looked into the camrea again and started to play the music once more.

did you feel that breeze?
a tide of chills swept over me
it must of been from the brush of your hand
pull me into your arms
a little closer baby
i wanna see you standing
next to me

so take a walk with me,
but keep the pace down
i don't want this night to end
can't we runaway together?

  " Danea! Where the hell are you", She heard her father scream. She ingorned him. She was dertermind to finish this song. She played louder ingnoring the beating on her bedroom door. She began to sing again. Louder with anger.

passions taking over skies

 She finished the song and smiled into the camrea. The door busted open revealing her drun dad. Danea gripped onto the guitar handle as her father came whobbiling towards her.

 " You cant sing. Come here", He said before smaking Danea arcoss the face. That day Danea got beat on camrea. Not knowing it was filmed. She uploaded her vidoe, soon going to bed. That night her video got more than 100,000 hits. But the most important coming from a Mr. Paul Kevin Senior.

leaving sand behind for them to choke on
they'll try to speak
negitively about us,
but they can't say another word
they'll realize,
jealousy has taken over their minds
trying to break us down
but what they don't know
is it only makes us stronger.
passions taking over skies
leaving sand behing in the wind for them to choke on
they'll try to speak
negitively about us
but they can't say another word
they'll realize,
jealousy has taken over their minds
trying to break us down
but what they don't know
is it only makes us stronger.

the night is getting darker
and soon the stars will be falling down to rescue us.

 



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CharlieRae`- "...the night is getting darker and soon...the stars will be falling down to rescue us..."
 
New Post 8/15/2008 3:49 PM
User is offline Jenna. [ I love you. ♥ ]
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Re: Stronger`{ pro. } 

CharlieRae!
*speechless*
That was amazing and sad but mainly amazing!
I can tell this story is going to go far!
Your such a talented writer!
Also,I updated my fic,that your in so go and read it and comment!

http://jonasbrothersfan.com/Community/Forum/tabid/265/forumid/62/postid/692582/scope/posts/Default.aspx

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New Post 8/15/2008 3:50 PM
User is offline Bonnie [8.18.08]
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Re: Stronger`{ pro. } 

WOW!

Intense.

More soon?


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F i c t i o n :
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R e a d e r s  N e e d e d !

 
New Post 8/15/2008 4:01 PM
User is offline CharlieRae`​{ Shiloh :D }​
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Re: Stronger`{ pro. } 

thank you guys
hopefullyz that ill write e new chappie
haha, party tonight so.......
haha:D



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CharlieRae`- "...the night is getting darker and soon...the stars will be falling down to rescue us..."
 
New Post 8/15/2008 4:38 PM
User is offline DangerGirlSteph<3[The Vampires have stolen my heart ♥]
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Re: Stronger`{ pro. } 

hey charlie who got the parts cuz i can't find the audition thread :)

<3steph<3


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New Post 8/15/2008 4:43 PM
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Re: Stronger`{ pro. } 

OH SNAP HE"S MEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PMN CHARLIE THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

<3steph<3


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New Post 8/15/2008 4:45 PM
User is offline jessica;;I don't care about your imperfections, that's what makes me love you
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Re: Stronger`{ pro. } 

omg. tht was amazing.

please pms


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New Post 8/15/2008 5:23 PM
User is offline CharlieRae`​{ Shiloh :D }​
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Re: Stronger`{ pro. } 

wow
and steph...this is a different story hun
haha
bumpers chapie soon :D



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CharlieRae`- "...the night is getting darker and soon...the stars will be falling down to rescue us..."
 
New Post 8/15/2008 5:34 PM
User is offline CharlieRae`​{ Shiloh :D }​
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Re: Stronger`{ pro. } 

Stronger:  Chapter 1

  Danea sat there crying her eyes out. She looked intot the mirro her icey blue eyes dull from crying. Her platinum almost white blonde hair wasnt so perky. Danea let the tears fall as she got onto her computer. She sighed thinking her father would be home in less then 2 hours. More fun for her.

 Her fingers hovered above her keys as she typed her password in for her youtube account. She was surprised to see that she had a message. She opened it and nearly fell out of her chair. Kevin Senoir of the Jonas brothers had seen her video and let her his number. She quickly got out of her chair getting her phone. SHe shook as she typed in the number.

 " Hello", She heard a mans cheery voice.

 " Um, Hi. This is Danea Ramsey. You told me to call you.:, She spoke in a soft voice. She her suffeling in the background.

 " O mi. Sweetheart are you okay", She heard a womens voice say. She pulled the phone back what did she mean isf she was okay.

 " Im sorry I dont know what your talking about", Danea said in a confused tone.

 " Honey we saw your youtube video.", The man's voice said. Danea ruxhed to her computer and watched her video. She let the phone slipp through her fingers when she reliezed what they where talking about.

 " hello....hello", She heard the woman say. Danea picked up, She put it to her ear with her mouth dry as every.

 " Please.......I dont need your help", Danea said in a whisper.

 " Honey no...you need help......hello...hello", Danea silently shut off the phone. She got on her bed rocking back and forwth. She put the phone under her pillow to muffle out the sounds as it rang over and over again and again.



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New Post 8/15/2008 5:35 PM
User is offline jessica;;I don't care about your imperfections, that's what makes me love you
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Re: Stronger`{ pro. } 

yay update soon :)


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